Typhoon by Joseph Conrad (1902)

Cast

As in all Conrad’s narratives, the story focuses on one central protagonist so vividly that it’s easy to overlook the way it describes many others, obviously the rest of the crew on the ship which experiences the typhoon, but a host of others, the crew’s family members back in Blighty. A full cast list includes:

Captain Thomas MacWhirr, son of a petty grocer in Belfast who ran away to sea at 15 and is now captain of the Nan-Shan.

His Dad, a corpulent man, with a gift for sly chaffing, which to the end of his life he exercised in his intercourse with his son, a little pityingly, as if upon a half-witted person.

His Mother, ‘wept very much after his disappearance’ (p.4).

MacWhirr’s wife, Lucy, ‘the daughter of a superior couple who had seen better days’, now Mrs MacWhirr, ‘a pretentious person with a scraggy neck and a disdainful manner’, and in her neighbourhood considered ‘quite superior’. (p.11)

Their daughter, Lydia, a ‘lanky girl, upon the whole… rather ashamed of him’. (p.11)

Their son, Tom, ‘frankly and utterly indifferent in a straightforward, delightful, unaffected way manly boys have’. (p.11)

Young Jukes, chief mate on the Nan-Shan i.e. MacWhirr’s number two, a lively loquacious young man who frets against his captain’s lack of imagination and blunt speech.

Jukes’ friend who he writes his letters to and who is the second officer on a trans-Atlantic liner (p.13).

Mr Solomon Rout, the chief engineer, also known as Long Sol, Old Sol, or Father Rout, to be found smoking his morning cigar over the skylight. As the tallest man on every ship he joins, he is used to stooping to hear the tales of other seamen.

Mrs Rout, ‘a big, high-bosomed, jolly woman of forty’. (p.12)

Mr Rout‘s toothless and venerable mother, quite deaf, who Mrs Rout has to shout at to communicate with. (p.12)

The new curate near Mrs Rout’s home who she confuses when she talks about ‘Solomon’ saying this or that, because he momentarily thinks she’s referring to the Biblical Solomon and doesn’t realise she’s talking about her husband (p.12).

The ship’s steward who secretly reads MacWhirr’s letters home (p.11).

The cook who the steward gossips to about MacWhirr’s letters (p.68).

The elder and younger of the shipbuilders in Dumbarton where the Nan-Shan was built, and who are described discussing the appointment of MacWhirr as captain.

Bates, foreman of the joiners on the shipyard who is told off when MacWhirr identifies faulty locks on the new ship’s doors.

Old Mr Sigg and young Mr Sigg, owners of the firm in Siam which commissioned the Dumbarton shipbuilders to build the Nan-Shan.

The Bu Hin company’s Chinese clerk who attends the voyage to supervise to the 200 coolies who are being shipped back to China.

Harry, the second engineer, who gets cross at Jukes for not moving the stokehold ventilators to maximise the air flow into the stiflingly hot engine room.

Jack Allen, the second officer who fell overboard into an empty coal lighter, broke some bones and was invalided home (p.20/21), leading to the hurried recruitment of…

The second mate, ‘an oldish, shabby little fellow, with bad teeth and no hair on his face’.

The boatswain or boss’n, ‘an ill-favoured, undersized, gruff sailor of fifty, coarsely hairy, short-legged, long-armed, resembling an elderly ape’ (p.36), who has a wife, ‘a fat woman, and two grown-up daughters [who] kept a greengrocer’s shop in the East-end of London (p.45).

Beale, the third engineer, who never says a word.

Hackett, the heroic helmsman who keeps the ship’s direction through the mayhem of the typhoon (p.47).

The donkeyman, ‘a dapper little chap with a dazzling fair skin and a tiny, gingery moustache, worked in a sort of mute transport’ (p.51).

The coolie who threw his head up like a baying hound in the hold.

The bummer, a tall individual with thin legs, a round belly, wearing ‘a soiled suit of blue flannel with a pair of dirty cricketing shoes; a dingy gray moustache drooped from his lip, and daylight could be seen in two places between the rim and the crown of his hat’, who greets the second mate on the quay at Fu-Chau after MacWhirr has sacked him (p.66).

Twenty-nine identifiable characters in total, not counting the unnamed coolies.

Imagination, the enemy

As in Conrad’s other fictions, having a vivid imagination is regarded as a bad thing and the point of the character of MacWhirr and, to some extent, of the entire story, is as a portrait of a man totally bereft of any spark of imagination whatsoever:

Having just enough imagination to carry him through each successive day, and no more, he [Captain MacWhirr] was tranquilly sure of himself; and from the very same cause he was not in the least conceited. It is your imaginative superior who is touchy, overbearing, and difficult to please; but every ship Captain MacWhirr commanded was the floating abode of harmony and peace.

Old Solomon describes Captain MacWhirr’s honesty as having ‘the heavy obviousness of a lump of clay’ and the captain’s literal-mindedness is reinforced with scores of instances, for example the way he doesn’t get jokes or Jukes’s flights of fantasy. He even dislikes the use of metaphor or simile in speech and tells Jukes off for using them: as when Jukes says the oppressive heavy weather makes him feel as if he had his head tied up in a woollen blanket and MacWhirr asks him when he’s ever had his head tied up in a blanket and why? Or when Jukes jocularly refers to the 200 Chinese coolies as the ‘passengers’ and MacWhirr irritably exclaims:

The Chinamen! Why don’t you speak plainly? Couldn’t tell what you meant. (p.23)

This is a man who speaks with ‘the utmost simplicity of manner and tone’ (p.24). I’ve just come from reading Conrad’s long novel ‘Lord Jim’ which is, arguably, the portrait of a good man undone by his over-active imagination. It’s almost as if Conrad made MacWhirr a conscious study of the extreme opposite.

Would we now think of MacWhirr as having ADHD, the condition which is being diagnosed in ever-growing numbers of people nowadays?

Because at one point this is how Jukes describes him:

He told me once quite simply that he found it very difficult to make out what made people always act so queerly. (p.14)

‘To be silent was natural to him, dark or shine’ (p.29). Maybe some aspects of his character are ‘on the spectrum’, as we say nowadays.

Anyway, within the narrative MacWhirr’s stolid literal-mindedness is deliberately contrasted with his young chief mate, Jukes, a man of quick wit, ‘liveliness of fancy’, fondness for colourful comparisons and inventive figures of speech – all of which MacWhirr deprecates and criticises, much to Jukes’s muttered resentment. Yin and tang. Chalk and cheese. A stark contrast for the purposes of making the narrative more schematic.

So, for example, when the typhoon hits, MacWhirr keeps soldiering stolidly on, making sensible decisions, while Jukes is overcome with panic-fear and wastes all his energy, not managing the situation and its challenges but managing his feverish imagination.

Being very young, he had found the occupation of keeping his heart completely steeled against the worst so engrossing that he had come to feel an overpowering dislike towards any other form of activity whatever. (p.37)

Incommunication

In my reading of Conrad’s other early stories I’ve developed the notion of incommunication to refer to the way so many characters in Conrad can barely communicate with each other.

Mumbling

The number of times the characters murmur, mutter under their breath, look down at their boots, look at the horizon and generally do everything except say what they mean directly to the person they’re talking to.

The second mate made in his throat a noise of an unfriendly nature… (p.20)

Their [the crew’s] grumbling and sighing and muttering worried him [the boatswain] greatly… (p.39)

With his sharp nose, red at the tip, and his thin pinched lips, he always looked as though he were raging inwardly; and he was concise in his speech to the point of rudeness. (p.21)

MacWhirr’s few words

This is notably true of Captain MacWhirr, ‘a man of few words’, (‘He never talks’ complains Jukes), ‘the silent man’, who says nothing unnecessary.

With a temperament neither loquacious nor taciturn he found very little occasion to talk.

Or mutters or mumbles:

This unusual form of address, though mumbled rather than spoken…

But it’s true of other crew members, too, who are endlessly muttering or mumbling under their breath:

‘None of you here shall make a fool of me if I know it,’ he mumbled to himself.

Carried over into letters

Conrad cleverly and rather beautifully takes the time to show how the characters’ ability or inability to express themselves is carried over into the letters they write home to their loved ones, which reflect their characters. Thus the letters MacWhirr writes home to his wife once a month are masterpieces of incommunication, sticking entirely to the banal facts, lacking any colour or expression:

as if the words so long used by so many men were, apart from their shape, worn-out things, and of a faded meaning.

Whereas the letters Old Solomon writes to his wife are full of gossip and comments which his wife reads out loud to his deaf mother.

Mother and curate, deaf and confused

And the episode of the curate, at first sight so arbitrary and random, is in fact a further demonstration of the incommunication theme. What episode? Well, Mrs Rout receives monthly letters from her husband and she enjoys reading them out to Old Solomon’s mother. But because the old lady is deaf, Mrs R has to shout them out loud at the top of her voice – and this is yet another form of incommunication.

The incident of the curate is that, on his first visit to Mrs Rout he is genuinely confused at the talkative woman repeating ‘Solomon says this’ and ‘Solomon says that’, so the curate is worried that she had access to a version of the Bible he didn’t know. It is an instance of comic misinterpretation and confusion, until finally she clarifies that she’s referring to Solomon her husband.

So just this one fairly short digression includes two elements which demonstrate the central theme of incommunication, deafness and misunderstanding.

Foreign

Another form of incommunication is that between people of different languages, such as when Jukes speaks bad pidgen English to the Chinese.

‘No catchee rain down there – savee?’ pointed out Jukes. ‘Suppose all’ee same fine weather, one piecie coolie-man come topside.’

Or when one of the coolies, badly knocked about in their below-decks hold, starts to talk, in a language none of the white characters can begin to understand and so find outlandish and alien.

Suddenly one of the coolies began to speak. The light came and went on his lean, straining face; he threw his head up like a baying hound. From the bunker came the sounds of knocking and the tinkle of some dollars rolling loose; he stretched out his arm, his mouth yawned black, and the incomprehensible guttural hooting sounds, that did not seem to belong to a human language, penetrated Jukes with a strange emotion as if a brute had tried to be eloquent. (p.58)

Maybe Conrad missed a trick by not having any members of the crew be foreign i.e. from another European country, as they are in Lord Jim and other tales (Captain Gustav in Jim; Falk is himself Scandinavian, the German hotel-keeper Schomberg, etc). But maybe he thought that he had a sufficient range of types of incommunication – just among English speakers.

The language of facts

All this inept and clumsy communication stands in start contrast to the world of facts, which, unlike human utterances with all their metaphor and ambiguity, speak to people like MacWhirr in a clear and precise language.

There were matters of duty, of course – directions, orders, and so on; but the past being to his mind done with, and the future not there yet, the more general actualities of the day required no comment – because facts can speak for themselves with overwhelming precision.

The China seas north and south are narrow seas. They are seas full of every-day, eloquent facts, such as islands, sand-banks, reefs, swift and changeable currents – tangled facts that nevertheless speak to a seaman in clear and definite language.

This interpretation is, of course, inflected by the presence of MacWhirr in the sense that Conrad makes us see the world of facts through MacWhirr’s mind, ‘faithful to facts, which alone his consciousness reflected’. If it had been Marlow narrating all this is would have been riven with ambiguities and puzzlement. The entire tone and, in a sense, the worldview of ‘Typhoon’ is set by the bluff stolidity of its central figure so it is his natural world of readily ascertainable facts, which the narrator refers to…

Language shredded by the typhoon

Having been sensitised by all this to the way men communicate (or not) you notice that the arrival of the storm compounds the already-existing communication problems.

The voices of the lost group reached him after the manner of men’s voices in a gale, in shreds and fragments of forlorn shouting snatched past the ear.

And this is then dramatised, as the wind and rain become tumultuous, by Juke’s fragmented attempts to speak to MacWhirr:

All at once Jukes appeared at his side, yelling, with his head down.
‘Watch—put in—wheelhouse shutters—glass—afraid—blow in.’
Jukes heard his commander upbraiding.
‘This—come—anything—warning—call me.’
He tried to explain, with the uproar pressing on his lips.
‘Light air—remained—bridge—sudden—north-east—could turn—thought—you—sure—hear.’

We pride ourselves on being the animal with language, the animal which speaks, but in practice – the story suggests – it is a gift we misuse and abuse as we struggle to convey even the simplest things to each other.

The speaking-tube

Another variation on the theme of speaking and communication is the speaking-tube which connects the bridge with the engine room. In the middle of the storm this acquires a genuine real-world importance as engineer Rout tries to speak to the captain on the bridge but this, also, is a very flawed medium because – at several vital moments – either Rout or the captain are distracted and end up shouting down the tube with no reply, fearing the worst.

In this way the speaking-tube becomes yet another symbol of the vital importance of human speech, of communication, and yet its terrible fragility.

The violent sea

MacWhirr’s lack of imagination and calm unruffled, largely silent mode of life is not only contrasted with Young Jukes (on the human level) but, on a more cosmic level, with the life of the sea itself and this is what the story is about: the man of few words and no imagination for the first time in his life confronting ‘the wrath and fury of the passionate sea’ (p.14).

The typhoon as intensification of normal levels of incommunication

I suppose the typhoon can be seen either as the opposite of the everyday, a grand assault on norms of people’s communications so that they have to put their mouths next to the auditor’s ear and yell their heads off to be heard.

Or, it could be seen as more of an intensification of the normal world. The typhoon represents, on some level, the reality we live in, the storm of confusion and miscommunication which dogs all our lives, with the mask of the everyday stripped away.

Plot summary

So, having established the quite sizeable cast and the central themes of the text, it’s relatively easy to summarise the ‘plot’.

If the story is based on the time Conrad spent working as the chief mate on the Highland Forest under a Captain John McWhir (as most biographers think), then the voyage is set in 1887.

Captain MacWhirr sets off in the Nan-Shan, a British-built steamer flying the Siamese flag, to sail north to the Chinese treaty port of Fu-chau, with some cargo in her lower holds and two hundred Chinese coolies returning to their village homes in the province of Fo-kien, on the fore-deck. They run into a typhoon, the name given to a tropical cyclone in the northwestern part of the Pacific Ocean.

Although MacWhirr’s bluff, unimaginativeness has up till then been criticised by other members of the crew – notably lively young Jukes and the chief engineer Solomon Rout – his refusal to give in to the typhoon or change course, somehow masters the storm and sees the ship safely through it, resulting in the grudging admiration of the senior crew members.

And MacWhirr’s mastery comes to be symbolised by the sound of his steady emotionless voice. Thus when the storm hits the ship, MacWhirr and Jukes are both on the bridge and these temperamental opposites find themselves clinging to each other for dear life. And while the (over) imaginative Jukes repeatedly thinks the ship is doomed, is breaking up, they’re all going to die and so on, while he is cowering in terror, it is the quiet solidity of MacWhirr’s voice which saves him.

Again he heard that voice, forced and ringing feebly, but with a penetrating effect of quietness in the enormous discord of noises, as if sent out from some remote spot of peace beyond the black wastes of the gale; again he heard a man’s voice – the frail and indomitable sound that can be made to carry an infinity of thought, resolution and purpose… (p.33)

And Jukes heard the voice of his commander hardly any louder than before, but nearer, as though, starting to march athwart the prodigious rush of the hurricane, it had approached him, bearing that strange effect of quietness like the serene glow of a halo. (p.34)

He heard with amazement the frail and resisting voice in his ear, the dwarf sound, unconquered in the giant tumult. (p.35)

And presently the voice returned again, half submerged in the vast crashes, like a ship battling against the waves of an ocean… small, lonely and unmoved, a stranger to the visions of hope or fear… (p.35)

Presently a small voice shoved aside the shouting hurricane quietly. ‘You, Jukes? – Well?’ (p.52)

After the initial descriptions of the devastating impact of the typhoon on the ship, the main action or event is that the bosun arrives on the seaswept bridge to tell MacWhirr there’s trouble in the ‘tween-deck where the Chinese are sheltering. So MacWhirr orders Jukes to go below decks to check things out and the narrative follows (a reluctant) Jukes on his journey down into the swaying, black, dangerous bowels of the ship where he discovers the Chinese being thrown all over the place, that some of their luggage has burst open and leaked silver dollars everywhere which they’re now fighting over. So Jukes gets some of the crew to storm the hold and calm the Chinese down (not without cuffs and blows) before establishing lifelines running across it for them to hold onto and then gathering up the silver in order to prevent fights.

During his belowdecks odyssey Jukes also arrives in the engine room, thus giving Conrad the opportunity to describe the heroic leadership of Mr Rout and the work of the stokers, stripped to the waist to keep shovelling coal into the furnaces to keep the engines running. Jukes’ odyssey allows Conrad to give a kind of schematic diagram of the working of the crew in extremis.

The storm descriptions

All the things I’ve listed are perhaps less obvious to the average reader than what most people remember, which is its super-vivid descriptions of the ship, sea and sky in the buildup to, and then the experience of, the thundering typhoon. There are 1) straightforward descriptions:

The darkness palpitated down upon all this, and then the real thing came at last.
It was something formidable and swift, like the sudden smashing of a vial of wrath. It seemed to explode all round the ship with an overpowering concussion and a rush of great waters, as if an immense dam had been blown up to windward. In an instant the men lost touch of each other. This is the disintegrating power of a great wind: it isolates one from one’s kind. An earthquake, a landslip, an avalanche, overtake a man incidentally, as it were – without passion. A furious gale attacks him like a personal enemy, tries to grasp his limbs, fastens upon his mind, seeks to rout his very spirit out of him.
Jukes was driven away from his commander. He fancied himself whirled a great distance through the air. Everything disappeared – even, for a moment, his power of thinking… (p.30)

And:

The gale howled and scuffled about gigantically in the darkness, as though the entire world were one black gully. At certain moments the air streamed against the ship as if sucked through a tunnel with a concentrated solid force of impact that seemed to lift her clean out of the water and keep her up for an instant with only a quiver running through her from end to end.

And:

The Nan-Shan was being looted by the storm with a senseless, destructive fury: trysails torn out of the extra gaskets, double-lashed awnings blown away, bridge swept clean, weather-cloths burst, rails twisted, light-screens smashed – and two of the boats had gone already. They had gone unheard and unseen, melting, as it were, in the shock and smother of the wave. (p.32)

Science fiction

And then 2) there are millenarian visions, when Conrad invokes the powers of the entire universe or sees things on a cosmic scale, when he reaches a kind of science fiction intensity:

At its setting the sun had a diminished diameter and an expiring brown, rayless glow, as if millions of centuries elapsing since the morning had brought it near its end. (p.19)

And:

An outburst of unchained fury, a vicious rush of the wind absolutely steadied the ship; she rocked only, quick and light like a child’s cradle, for a terrific moment of suspense, while the whole atmosphere, as it seemed, streamed furiously past her, roaring away from the tenebrous earth. (p.43)

Is there a touch of H.G. Wells in these descriptions, the sense of all normal human values and experiences far exceeded by the extremity of the storm? This next passage reminded me of ‘The Island of Doctor Moreau’:

And then a hand gripped his thigh… and he felt himself pawed all over. It was the boatswain. Jukes recognized these hands, so thick and enormous that they seemed to belong to some new species of man. (p.36)

Did Wells’s inhuman horrors strike a chord in Conrad’s imagination? At other times the cosmic viewpoint adopts a semi-religious tone:

The Nan-Shan… had about her the worn, weary air of ships coming from the far ends of the world – and indeed with truth, for in her short passage she had been very far; sighting, verily, even the coast of the Great Beyond, whence no ship ever returns to give up her crew to the dust of the earth. (p.66)

It’s only a ship caught in a storm but like the stories of his ship’s chandlers and sea captains and business agents in the jungle, Conrad makes it into an allegory of all humanity and the entire universe.

The great ellipsis and part 2

The twenty pages or so which describe the storm in such blistering intensity in fact only describe the first half of the storm. There is a lull or intermission when the ship breaks into the centre of the typhoon, things calm down and they can hear themselves speak, but there is, of course, then to follow the second part of the storm and this is where Conrad makes his Big Artistic Decision which is… not to depict it. Once, he decides, is enough, and so the ship is just heading into the second part of the typhoon and MacWhirr mutters to himself, ‘I wouldn’t like to lose her’ when this section of the text (which is divided into six parts) abruptly ends with one short, bald sentence.

He was spared that annoyance.

And the narrative cuts away to the sixth and final part, cutting to a few days later when the Nan-Shan finally steams into Fu-chau, severely damaged but still going. Its docking causes a stir but is dramatised by Conrad solely in terms of the ratty second mate, having been fired by MacWhirr, coming ashore and venting all his resentment on the first seedy water rat or ‘bummer’ he encounters, who invites him for a drink.

But most of this last six pages cuts right away from the ship and the Far East altogether, to describe the reactions of the recipients of letters from MacWhirr and Rout and Jukes, letters each describing the storm in different ways, which are received by the different wives (and chum) according to their character.

1) Hoity toity Mrs MacWhirr barely bothers to read it, skimming past the description of the storm and slighting on the only bit that interests her, her husband’s threat to come home soon and see her and the children. Oh why does he want to do that, she complains, not for the first time. And the letter which only briefly describes desperate men risking their lives at sea for pitiful pay ends with an account of Mrs MacWhirr taking her lanky daughter out shopping and greeting other wives in the street.

2) Then Conrad describes Mrs Rout reading out Old Solomon’s letter to his ancient mother and being peeved that Old Sol says the captain did a very clever thing during the typhoon but doesn’t specify what. She is irritated.

3) Then Conrad describes the reception of Juke’s letter by his chum aboard the Atlantic Ocean liner, who goes on to share it with his crew mates and Conrad summarises it for us. It takes four pages and is a quite elaborate coda. Basically Jukes was terrified that the way they sent the Chinese coolies belowdecks and then waded into break them up when they were fighting and then took away all the loose dollars they could find, would have made the Chinese riotous and angry. He worried a lot about what would happen when they finally docked and the mutinous Chinese might demand a public enquiry or a trial and so on, worrying that, as the man who made the decision, he’d be the one in the firing line.

Jukes had only barely gone to bed after 30 hours straight on deck when he’s woken up and told the captain is opening the hatch and letting the Chinese on deck. Terrified there’ll be a riot, Jukes leaps into his clothes and orders one of the crew to distribute rifles, joining eight or so armed crew on the bridge.

It is here that Captain MacWhirr ridicules this stupid over-reaction and tells Jukes to have the rifles locked away immediately before someone gets harmed. Instead he works with the Chinese interpreter from Bu Hin to explain to the coolies that they were locked below for their own safety (witness the damage they can all see on deck), that the lifelines were installed for their own safety, and that all the money the crew could find was confiscated to stop them fighting. Now MacWhirr proposes totalling up all the dollars they confiscated and dividing it up equally and fairly between the Chinese. To Jukes’ astonishment they all agree to this plan as they know that the alternatives are worse: 1) if asked, each of them would exaggerate the sum they’re owed, 2) if MacWhirr hands the hoard over to a Chinese official in the port, it will simply disappear.

To Jukes’ astonishment the Chinese are quite happy with this plan, and it must be the ‘clever decision’ that Rout mentioned in his letter to his wife but didn’t go into details about.

It is also, of course, demonstrates the gulf between over-imaginative Jukes (terrified there’s going to be a riot and so arming the crew in a way that might have led to accidental gunfire which might in fact have triggered a riot) and calm, phlegmatic and unimaginative MacWhirr, who with no mental effort, simply does the right thing.

The last page of this complex text entirely quotes Juke’s letter and the very last sentence of it is deeply ironic as we see Jukes completely misinterpret the character of MacWhirr and the high quality of his leadership decision, paranoidly thinking the captain only did it to avoid the fuss of a public enquiry whereas MacWhirr obviously just thought it was the fair thing to do:

‘This certainly is coming as near as can be to keeping the thing quiet for the benefit of all concerned. What’s your opinion, you pampered mail-boat swell? The old chief says that this was plainly the only thing that could be done. The skipper remarked to me the other day, “There are things you find nothing about in books.” I think that he got out of it very well for such a stupid man.’ (p.74)

But it is Jukes, of course, who is the stupid man.

UnEnglish phrasing

Sometimes Conrad’s bending of the English language, most of the time extremely enjoyable and rewarding, ends up snapping it. These occasions are enjoyable in their own way, for their incongruity:

Yet the uninteresting lives of men so entirely given to the actuality of the bare existence have their mysterious side.

Unbounded wonder was the intellectual meaning of his eye, while incredulity was seated in his whole countenance. (p.25)

29,750 words.


Credit

Typhoon by Joseph Conrad was first published in the Pall Mall Magazine in 1902. Page references are to the Oxford World’s Classics paperback edition, revised and republished in 2008.

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First Light: The Story of the Boy Who Became a Man in the War-Torn Skies Above Britain by Geoffrey Wellum (2002)

Elementary rule one: never relax vigilance.
(First Light, page 152)

This is a charming, very readable and high-spirited memoir of Wellum’s career as a Battle of Britain pilot and beyond. He was just 17 when he applied to join the RAF at the start of 1939, still a schoolboy excited at being appointed captain of the cricket first XI at his public school, still in awe of the headmaster – and he carries that schoolboy zest and excitement into his training and combat experiences, and into this account, which brims with candid, innocent enthusiasm.

In fact the RAF wouldn’t let young Geoff join till he was the legal age of 17 and a half, so that’s how old he was when he commenced the training in the summer of 1939, achieving his first solo flight just 2 days before Britain went to war on 3 September 1939 (p.19).

Present tense and short sentences

Wellum’s style contributes to the text’s pace and impact, and has several distinguishing features. The most obvious is his use of the historic present tense throughout.

And so this sunny morning finds me walking down Kingsway.

I’ve never been into a pub on my own before, so I stride into the saloon bar as if I own the place and ask for a pint of bitter.

Another trait is the use of clipped phrasing, as in the third sentence here:

Do I really want to join the RAF and become a pilot? I suppose I’m doing the right thing? Still time to turn round and go home.

This is achieved by dispensing with verbs, at least the main, active verb. Thus ‘There’s’ has been dropped from the third sentence above and any main verb from this sentence:

Down below, a cluster of cottages; smoke from their chimneys rising vertically into the still air. (p.77)

There are many sentences like this, with the main active verb removed. The result is a series of static pictures, like a slideshow.

  • A large crowd all chattering away around the notice board in the ground training block.
  • A final day with ‘C’ flight before a spot of leave.

He especially uses it in the first sentence of a chapter, painting a picture, setting the scene:

  • A cool afternoon, rather dull and lifeless with rain in the air. (p.199)
  • January 1941. Deep winter: mist, that horribly thick, drizzly sea mist, fog, frost, low cloud. (p.248)

Learnings

Generally speaking you should take your first solo flight after about ten hours’ tuition. If it drags on longer than that there’s a problem.

Usually every trainee pilot has a blank spot, a recurrent problem they have to overcome. For Geoff it was taking off.

The training course was very competitive. As the ten-hour deadline passed people on the course slowly dropped out or, more precisely, stopped appearing for breakfast. The slang expression is being handed a ‘bowler hat’ i.e. turfed back into Civvy Street.

Training and then deployment to an active squadron involved a surprising amount of moving about from one airfield to another. We follow Wellum from:

  • Tiger Moths at Desford
  • Kidlington
  • Little Rissington
  • Warmwell
  • Kenley
  • Northolt
  • Pembrey Wales – failure to engage bomber over Bristol
  • Biggin Hill
  • Manston, 92 Squadron

The joy of flight (p.73)

Halcyon day, warm sunshine, blue skies and light Indian-summer breezes. Flying as God meant it to be. Open cockpits, helmets and goggles, heads in the slipstream, biplanes, wood, canvas and vibration, quivering bracing wires and the eternal drumming of the engine. I am master over machine. Pride and confidence flow into me. (p.23)

First light

At first glance the title of the book seems a bit cryptic or mystical but slowly we realise that, once he’s posted for wartime duty, day after day the pilots are woken just before dawn, and the sights and sounds and smells and feel of dawn breaking over an airfield just coming to life, with the pilots staggering into the mess and pouring themselves coffee while the ground crews start servicing and firing up the Spitfires, all this acquires a deep and evocative beauty.

My impressions of the last two months or so revolve around dawns. Pink dawns, grey dawns, misty, rainy and windy dawns, but always dawns: first light. (p.127)

No surprise that by the time we’re half way through the narrative, an entire chapter, Chapter 4, which drops us straight into the middle of the Battle of Britain in September 1940, is titled ‘First Light’ and, by virtue of its constant repetition, the phrase beings to build up a charge and force.

It is first light and still and rather beautiful; the birth of a new day. (p.137)

First light, high noon, evening, dusk and then the quiet hours until the next dawn and first light again. It is a relentless ritual which will continue until this bloody war is over (p.162)

What a truly bloody day it’s been. Everybody is fed up with it, packing up for the time being. It will all start tomorrow at first light. (p.244)

The joy of flying

Up here the air is pure and clean. The sheer joy of flight infiltrates the very soul and from above the earth, alone, where the mere thought in one’s mind seems to transmit itself to the aeroplane, there is no longer any doubt that some omniscient force understands what life is all about. There are times when the feeling of being near to an unknown presence is strong and real and comforting. It is far beyond human comprehension. We only know that it’s beautiful. (p.23)

Wellum is excellent at capturing the joy and wonder of flying, and in particular the deep joy of flying a Spitfire which is regularly described as a wonder of engineering, fitting like a glove, responding almost to the pilot’s thoughts rather than hands, his second home and eventually the only place he wants to be.

With an agility that never ceases to amaze me my fitter is out of the cockpit in a flash and putting his hand under my arm, almost lifting me into the aircraft. At once I feel better. The vibration humming through the Spitfire, here we are, home again. (p.143)

They are alive these Spitfires. They live, just like the rest of us, they understand. (p.145)

God

The text is littered with references to the deity but all of a fairly superficial schoolboy level, for example, his repeated wondering why the God who made the beauty of the world permits war and death.

Dear God, fancy allowing this sort of thing to happen. What are You up to? It’s ghastly. They’ll probably tell me it’s not You, it’s the Devil. (p.169)

What a strange life we pilots lead. This is the sort of moment that only those who can fly can fully understand. I wonder how this compares with the Peace of God. How does the blessing go? ‘The Peace of God that passeth all understanding.’ Surely, at moments like this, alone and lonely, one must be very close to Him even though there is a war raging and I don’t understand why He allows it to happen. (p.184)

It’s all bloody wrong somehow, that twentieth-century civilisation should have been allowed to come to this. Just total war, I suppose. What’s it all about, for God’s sake? (p.207)

Presumably God favoured us during last summer; or did He – with the glorious weather that must have suited the purpose of the Hun? In any case, why does He allow this sort of thing to happen? Whatever he decides, many thousands of people, ‘His children’ we are all taught to believe, are going to be slaughtered before it’s all over. (p.210)

In a similar completely superficial vein are his frequent requests for God to be with him during that day’s battle and so on, not very much more sophisticated than asking God to help you score the winning try in the school rugby competition.

Come on then God, get it over with or I’ll go over to the other side, you see if I don’t.

Listen God, you’re not only difficult to find you’re also a hard task master.

Or a hearty blessing:

I am, thank goodness, totally reconciled to death. No doubt my turn will come one day and there is nothing I can do about it. I can only trust that God is with me when I go; something quick perhaps. Let Him be with all pilots who catch it, friend or foe. (p.264)

He lacks any intellectual depth whatsoever but it doesn’t matter. He was, after all, only turning 19 during the Battle of Britain, hadn’t been to university, had come fresh from the cricket pitch at the age of 17 and a half. They are the thoughts of a bright, optimistic, entirely unintellectual schoolboy.

I wonder what on earth I would have done if I had been turned down [when he applied to the RAF]? Wasn’t all that long ago, really. Now look at me; a Spitfire pilot. Whoever would have thought it? I’m a lucky bloke! (p.177 cf p.221)

Here he is thinking about the origins of the war as he accompanies a squad of Blenheim airplanes to bomb Abbeville:

Down there someone is going to get hurt and, presumably, it doesn’t matter who. What a funny war. Don’t like the idea of bombing much. At least the role of fighter pilot seems cleaner somehow. Makes you wonder what life is all about. It must be a lousy way to get yourself killed, to have a bloody great bomb dropped on you. In any case, the Huns started it all, so it serves them right. (p.259)

First Light is, in this sense, quite a superficial account, but in a positive way (if that makes sense). The lack of ‘depth’, the fifth form reflections, don’t matter at all, what matters is the vividness with which he describes his sensations, the intense engagement with all the different types of weather he has to fly in and above all the bounding joy of flying a Spitfire.

Looking out of the tiny cockpit as we flow about the cloud-dappled sky I experience an exhilaration that I cannot recall ever having felt before. (p.105)

(Compare the description of flying the new Spitfire Mark VB, taking it higher than ever before, and being able to see the breath-taking panorama of the whole of South East England, p.250)

The schoolboy shallowness of his occasional reflections about God or the war or so on only emphasise the powerful immediacy of the nervous anticipation, then the phone call telling the squadron to scramble, the hurried take-off and then the numerous nailbitingly exciting descriptions of aerial combat, wonderfully vivid, visceral and immediate.

At several places Wellum himself goes out of his way to emphasise how dim he is. He, at different times, makes two friends, both nicknamed Tommy, and is at pains to describe them as intellectuals, chaps who have big discussions about books etc (‘Both Tommys are obviously intelligent’, p.175). Whereas Geoff knows himself, not a deep thinker, instead a chap who loves playing cricket, salmon fishing and flying Spits. It’s noticeable that he fairly frequent attempts to think about the war or God or the meaning of it all generally end with him admitting to being hopelessly confused.

On another occasion he expresses a dismissal of ‘intellectuals’ which really only serves to bring out his own anxieties on the subject.

What a sight! The colour, the different shades of green of fields and woods, the bright roundels on the Spitfires; this is something very close to my ideal of beauty. No doubt I would incur the derision of the self-styled intellectuals and pacifists but I bet they have never felt as totally happy and wonderful as I do now. (p.108)

Or take his feelings when various friends and colleagues get killed.

Poor Butch. Wonder where he ended up. He may be OK, of course, but it’s doubtful. It’s all rather ghastly when someone you know well gets the chop. (p.164)

Not a profound eulogy, is it? But that’s the point. Schoolboy Geoff notices all the lovely surfaces of the world, of the huge blue sky, the dappled countryside, his friends, the beautiful planes, the exciting fights, without ever letting any of it go in very deep. Callow youth with boundless determination and unthinking patriotism. Thank God we had them.

Patriotism

Like everything else about the book, Wellum’s patriotism is not exactly deep and considered, rather the opposite, light and boyish, but nonetheless real for that:

Closing steadily we drop down into a thin layer of haze sitting on the sea and the 109s are just in the top of it. Four lethal determined-looking Spitfires are closing in behind them looking for the kill. Pilots hunched forward in their cockpits, concentrating and intense. The roundels on the Spits standing out clearly as if to say: ‘We’re British and we’re going to clobber you for coming over here to kill our people uninvited.’ (p.205)

Pass the test, be a man

The rather long and clunky sub-title is ‘The Story of the Boy Who Became a Man in the War-Torn Skies Above Britain’ and, at various points, in fact on a steady series of occasions, Wellum is very aware of the fact that he is undergoing a series of tests. First off to see if he can even be accepted for the RAF training course, then seeing if he can actually learn to fly (quite a struggle), to see if he can past the basic flying tests, then the tests to become an advanced flyer and gain his wings. And all of these pale in comparison with the ultimate test which is finding out whether he is a coward or not. He, like all the pilots, will have to fight the ultimate battle with himself in order to conquer exhaustion and fear. And in the process, he hopes he will become a man.

As he says of the pilots of the first squadron he joins, at Hornchurch, most of them had been over Dunkirk several times on just one day.

These chaps have won their private battles and these are battles they will have to go on winning , for there is another day tomorrow. As of now, however, they have proved themselves men. (p.100)

And:

Throughout the squadron there is the feeling of girding one’s loins for a sustained, supreme, almost superhuman effort in the near future. Everything we have been taught, how we react and respond to intense pressure, will be tested to the utmost. Private thoughts are ever with me. Will I have the courage needed?… There will be only one way to go and that will be forward into the approaching hordes of German aeroplanes. Except for Wimpey [his best friend] and I, the others know the form. They have won their private battles although, of course, they will now have to start again. I’ve got to start from the beginning. I’ve got all that to come and only when my own private battle is over and won will I be able to join ranks with the others and be a true fighter pilot. (p.127)

And:

I am down on the order of battle for tomorrow morning at first light: readiness at dawn. So be it. Soon I shall know what the others already know. I shall be either a man or a coward. I’m afraid of being a coward. (p.131)

This may all be true on its own terms but it’s also a reminder that Wellum has only just stopped being a schoolboy whose life consisted of preparing for exams and tests and, at the kind of well-provided private school he went to, regular sporting competitions. In a sense everything was still a test and competition for him.

Battles

And he does pass the test and he does become a man, via a series of aerial battles described with extraordinary intensity and immediacy: such as the sorties described in detail on pages 143 to 158 and 177 to 185; and the extended passage describing the nail-biting patrol he undertakes in pouring rain and thick cloud, getting hopelessly lost in the North Sea before eventually finding his way back to the aerodrome with extraordinary persistence and luck, pages 212 to 241.

Taking the battle to the enemy

The last 50 pages or so describe the change in strategy which took place at the start of 1941. Having won the Battle of Britain, having denied the Germans the supremacy of the skies which they needed in order to mount an amphibious invasion of Britain, at the very beginning of 1941 the RAF began to fly into France to attack strategic targets i.e. bombing. And the role of squadrons like Wellum’s shifted from defending against bombing raids on Britain, to accompanying and protecting allied bombing raids on France.

Acceptance of death

In the last 50 pages, also, he describes how he has come to a state of accepting the possibility of death, stopping being afraid of death.

The main reason for my relaxed frame of mind and my great content is because, among other things, I have overcome the fear of dying. It no longer concerns me. (p.263)

A shiver runs through me as I sit strapped in my cockpit waiting for the exact time to start the engines. I bet the Channel is cold this morning. Suppose some poor bloke from some wing or other will go plop into it before this operation is over. Don’t mind the waiting these days as much as I used to. No butterflies, just total acceptance. I figure out you’ve got to go and that’s all there is to it. (p.275)

It is a judgement call, though, whether this is the result of careful philosophical reflection (unlikely, given the boyish superficiality I’ve highlighted) or more the peace of exhaustion. In September 1941 he realises that he has had only one week off in the entire year (p.286). The aerodrome commander has a quiet word and for the first time he can remember, he is left off the flight roster. Like all overworked people he is, at first, bereft. The daily routine of preparing, scrambling, flying, fighting, returning and recovering is all he knows. After a break he’s back into it for months.

But then comes the moment he knew would have to come: he’s stood down. He’s told as he strolls towards the dispersal hut that his active service days are over, he’s flown his last sortie, he’s being sent off to do training. No black mark, no reflection on him, but he’s done his time and he’s worn out and he serves a rest (p.291).

I turn my little £5 car out of the gates for the last time. A has-been. No further use to anybody. Merely a survivor, my name no longer on the Order of Battle in the dispersal hut. A worn-out bloody fighter pilot at twenty years of age, merely left to live, or rather exist, on memories, reduced to watching from the wings. (p.293)

Training

In my ignorance, and in my close reading of the letter of the text, I thought this meant his days of combat flying were over but they weren’t at all. He is packed off to join 65 squadron as a Flight Commander where, sure enough, he gives lessons in dual trainers and then supervising pilots going solo.

During this period he is invited to Buckingham Palace to receive the Distinguished Flying Cross. He’s posted to RAF Debden and then, to my confusion, is back in action, leading his flights in fighter sweeps and bomber escorts over France, Holland and Belgium, where they have to contend with a new German plane, the Focke-Wulf FW 190 (p.299).

Something’s broken inside him. He is gripped by fear and anxiety, partly about whether he is up to it any more, whether he’s as good a pilot as he was in first, fearless months. He lies awake worrying at night. He drinks a lot in the bar after sorties. ‘I’m not what I used to be,’ (p.303). He is getting increasingly bad headaches behind his forehead.

Malta

At short notice he is posted abroad. With two hours notice he is sent by train from Euston to Glasgow. Here he is welcomed abroad a Royal Navy ship. He is one of a contingent of Spitfire pilots aboard an aircraft carrier. Trouble is the carrier deck isn’t long enough for Spits to get up to flying speed so he discusses the various bodges and hacks the engineers come up with.

They’re part of Operation Pedestal, the assembly of a huge number of merchant ships carrying oil and munitions, accompanied by aircraft carriers and destroyers, which is sailing for Malta. (It was in support of Operation Pedestal that author Eric Newby took part in an ill-fated attempt to sabotage German Ju 88s at an aerodrome in Sicily, as described in the opening chapter of his war memoir, ‘Love and Death in the Apennines’.)

Malta is vital because it acts as a staging supplies onto Egypt to supply the Desert War, Egypt itself being key to control of the Suez Canal, through which comes all the Allies’ oil supplies, and to the oil fields of Persia and the Middle East.

Long story short, Wellum is tasked with leading a squad of 8 Spitfires from the deck of his aircraft carrier, over Tunisia and on to Malta. The whole thing goes off like clockwork, although he struggles with the glare of the Mediterranean sun and has more of his headaches. During the operation Wellum suddenly remembers that it’s his 21st birthday.

Soon after his squad have landed and are immediately taken over by RAF ground personnel, they witness the arrival of what remains of the huge convoy. Of the 14 merchant ships, nine were sunk and the navy lost an aircraft carrier and two cruisers (p.329).

Last orders

There’s plenty more fighter flying, sweeps for enemy planes and flying cover for bombers attacking Sicily but his headaches are getting worse and one several occasions he loses his peripheral vision. Eventually the squadron medical officer sees him, diagnosed inflamed sinuses, he’s admitted to hospital where they cut into them and discover a cyst/abscess. This leads to the diagnosis that he is exhausted, run down and needs a complete break. He is put on the next flight to Gibraltar and from there on to England. Before he goes he apologises to the squadron leader, Tony Lovell, for letting everyone down and, when the man is kind to him, almost breaks down in tears. He is at the end of his tether.

Flight to Gibraltar where he’s astonished at the lack of rationing, then a plane onto Plymouth, then a train to London. He has done two tours of duty and spent three years as a fighter pilot defending his country in its hour of greatest need. He is exhausted.

Restoration

There’s a two-page epilogue which made me cry. He goes home, back to his parents’ house, back to his old bedroom, where he lies in his bed and cries his eyes out for all the good friends he’s lost, three years of strain and nervous exhaustion and grief gushing out of him.

The weeks pass in peaceful walks and fishing. After 6 weeks he goes for a medical and is passed and goes to see one of his old instructors about getting a posting and ends up being sent to the Gloster Aircraft Company as a production test pilot. The narrative ends with him climbing into the cockpit of the new Typhoon, pressing Contact and preparing to return to the skies. I found it immensely moving.

Dispensable pilots

[Instructor]; ‘You may be a little overconfident which in its way is no bad thing, but just watch it, accidents can happen and aeroplanes cost money.’
[Geoff]: ‘What about me?’
[Instructor]: ‘There are plenty like you.’ (p.25)

Thanks

Lastly, thanks. I’ve taken to pieces various aspects of the text which interest me but it shouldn’t detract from what I think should be our fundamental attitude, which is one of profound gratitude. Thank you, Geoff, our thanks to you and to all the young men who fought alongside you and to the many who had their young lives cut short, fighting to defend this country and, by extension, all of Europe, from the nightmare of Nazi tyranny. Thank you.


Credit

First Light: The Story of the Boy Who Became a Man in the War-Torn Skies Above Britain by Geoffrey Wellum was first published by Viking Books in 2002. Page references are to the 2020 Penguin Centenary Collection edition.

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