For OctPoWriMo day # 5, we were to try to capture a feeling…to show, not tell. I’ve tried a couple, but first a definition or two.
Three words I’ve used have to do with music.
Crescendo – a gradual increase in volume
Diminuendo – a diminishing, or decrescendo, of volume
Dal Niente – From nothing…gradually increasing out of silence
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This first poem form is called Shadorma. Shadorma is believed to have originated in Spain, but that is questionable, from what I read about it. It is however, widely used nowadays. The form it takes is using 6 lines, with the syllable count as follows: 3,5,3,3, 7, 5, which is one stanza. You may have as many stanzas as you want, keeping to the same syllable count throughout. It is not necessary to rhyme.
So, this first one I did as Shadorma. The second one is just free-verse, as I tried to capture the emotions and feelings of a relationship.
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O MY LOVE
Crescendo
Emotional high
Crashing down
Death calls you
Leave me with only your Ghost
Diminuendo
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OUR SONG
Young love, you and I
Musical high
Heartbeats in tune
Kiss under the moon
Crescendo
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Together forever
Forever together
Though years have begun to fade
Sweet memories we have made
Dimineundo
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You went home before me
O how can this be
I’ve endured this much too long
Tonight my love, tonight my dear
I’ll join you in our song
Dal Niente
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