LOST
Looking inside my mind
Lighthearted thoughts I find
Laughing at what I see
Leaving reality
Labels – not to be bound
Lost…and hope to be found
Losing it, I un-wind…
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This is another poem in the Pleiades form. It was fun to do, earlier, so I wanted to do another 🙂
This is also for the Open Link Night brought to you by dVerse Poets. Their page can be found here
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Thanks for visiting! Peace }I{
© 2015 BS
teleportingweena 
I haven’t heard of that type of poem. It’s great!
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Thank you. It is fun to do, and has an interesting story of how it came to be a poetry form. If you want to check out a very informative page about all kinds of poetry types (if you haven’t seen it already) you can go to Shadow Poetry at http://shadowpoetry.com/resources/wip/types.html … Thank you for stopping by! 🙂
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I wrote one tonight. I’ll post tomorrow. It is a Christmas analysis called “Critique.” Thanks for your part in letting me know about it.
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Hi, Oneta! I’ll be looking forward to reading yours! 🙂
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I remember we did those a while ago at dverse I hope we can be found.
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That must have been before I knew about dverse poets when you did the Pleiades form. I hadn’t tried one before, but it was fun to try!
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Cool…good to see a form that is not seen often.
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Thank you, Polly! I haven’t seen it either, until the other day, but I liked trying it out!
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I’d like to unwind, leave reality. Thanks for the read!
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Hi, insidetheclock! Thanks for visiting here 🙂 It’s always nice to unwind a bit, isn’t it!
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Gorgeous write 🙂
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Thank you Sanaa! And may I wish you a Happy Birthday! 🙂 Hope you’ve had a wonderful day!
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Freeing words!
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Hi, Carol! Thanks, and I think you’ve started something with the Pleiades poetry form, after writing yours! I’m hooked on it now!
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It is a great form!
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This made me smile
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Oh, so happy you enjoyed reading this! Wishing you a wonderful weekend! 🙂
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What an interesting form. I’m not sure I’ve tried this one or not…there’s been so many! I like the light-hearted feel of your poem. And I’ve used Shadow Poetry many times to teach myself forms, really fun isn’t it?
Gayle ~
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Thank you so much! It is fun to go to Shadow Poetry to see all the different ways to write poetry. I like to pick and choose from them, and they are so interesting to see how and who started them!
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It’s really fun to pick out a new form to try. And it seems that we at dVerse was introduced to this form and I misunderstood the directions and wrote it with seven (or six) words instead of syllables. Oh well, it’s all good but I should write a proper one some day.
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Well, hey…could be you’ve invented a new form! What would you name it?
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I don’t think so. 🙂 But that’s a nice thought…will have to ponder what I might call a form that I’ve invented…
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One huge advantage to running with a progressive poetry group like dVerse, is both the willingness to try new forms, & the education it provides for us, expanding our own poetic palette. OLN provides me a forum for a form I invented (Cinemagenic), but it seems too complex for participation.
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You are right, Glenn! I’m happy to have found the dVerse poetry group. It’s good for me to learn more about writing the different forms, and to see everyone’s take on a prompt. Your Cinemagenic form is very unique. I wouldn’t know where to even start something like that, but I certainly enjoy reading yours.
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Smiles..
Losing a
mind and
gaining a
heart deserves
a college degree
away
from
school..
or perhaps
an honorary
human degree
of being.. smilesx2..:)!
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Thank you, katiemiafrederick! Your comments always make me smile! 🙂
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Merry Christmas.. With Smiles..:)
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