It is a pleasure to see Marie Ndiaye on the shortlist for the International Booker Prize, particularly as it is only a couple of years since she missed out on being selected at all for Vengeance is Mine, also translated by Jordan Stump, which was certainly superior to a number of the chosen books. Vengeance is Mine was a recent novel (2022) whereas The Witch dates from as long ago as 1996, but both share the intention of making the reader increasingly uneasy while at the same time offering no resolution. The Witch is not a metaphorical title, and the novel opens with Lucie initiating her twin daughters, Maud and Lise, in the “mysterious powers” they possess which have barely manifested in their mother but will prove much more potent in their hands:
“My abilities were in all honesty laughable, they allowed me to see trivialities, nothing more.”
The plot, if indeed it is fair to describe the events in Ndiaye’s novel as a plot, kicks in when Lucie’s husband, Pierrot, brings home a visitor, a Monsieur Matin: “he’ll be having dinner with us and possibly spending the night.” Monsieur Matin, it transpires, has left his wife:
“I’m only there to drive the car and bring home money, how long is a man supposed to live like that nowadays?”
Monsieur Matin soon exits the novel (through a window when his wife appears to pick him up), but it is not long after that Pierrot leaves for his mother’s and does not return. More worryingly, he takes with him a large sum of money given to Lucie by her father which her father now needs returned as it was not strictly his to give away. Lucie, however, is more concerned with getting her mother and father to agree to see each other again as they have recently separated, making both promise to do so even though neither is particularly keen. Superficially this might seem like the start of a relationship comedy but that is not how it feels as Ndiaye tends to keep character motives oblique and their behaviour can therefore seem strange and unsettling (why Pierrot leaves, for example, is never entirely clear).
Much of the novel focuses on relationships between parents and children. Monsieur Matin complains that his son only cares about his mother describing him as “the little beast who hates me”; Pierrot describes his daughters as “filthy little witches”; and Isabelle, a neighbour, is indifferent to her son, Steve, trailing him round Paris looking for a boarding school, “the child still clinging to her leg seemed to weigh no more than a little pile of clothes.” On the other hand, Lucie’s mother-in-law cannot wait for her daughter to have a child:
“How I hope it will be a girl… Oh, I’d make dresses for her. And all Lili’s outfits, you know, all the clothes she wore as a child, I’ve kept them all, I never gave a single one away, because I knew this day would come.”
When Lucie catches glimpses of the future she cries tears of blood, but blood isn’t thicker than water in this novel, as family relationships prove brittle, often breaking when one individual feels contempt for another.
The supernatural undercurrent runs throughout the novel, with Maud and Lise apparently able to transform themselves into birds and Lucie’s mother also able to transmute others. Alongside this are other more natural but equally strange transformations when Lucie encounters Pierrot and Isabelle again, positions reversed – Pierrot is now stuck in the domestic sphere, living with another woman and two young children, whereas Isabelle, now unencumbered with Steve, has started her own business, a Woman’s University for Spiritual Health, in which she asks Lucie to take classes. Lucie is a still point among numerous characters who not only change but accept that change, her determination that her mother and father get back together (which will have unintended consequences) only one sign of this. It also indicates her inability to change the world around her – Pierrot leaving, her daughters finding their own path – which could be seen as a echo of her feeble ‘witch’ powers.
As is common with NDiaye’s work, The Witch entices the reader into its strange world but feels little need to explain itself. Its combination of domesticity and witchcraft is appealing but some readers may find its conclusion unsatisfying as there is no attempt at a resolution. The work itself, however, is delightfully unsettling.












