Contact-free

He came home. Said nothing.
His body showed no marks.

He stayed home. Said nothing.
His presence left a mark.

He left home. Said nothing.
His absence left no marks.

NaPoWriMo.net suggested use the opening line from another poet as a starting point for ours today. This opening line comes from Wislawa Szymborska’s “Going Home” (translated from Polish). I wrote mine before I read the full poem. Which was helpful, because her imagery is so strong that it would have blocked any effort to write something new.

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5 thoughts on “Contact-free

  1. Dawn D. McKenzie's avatarDawn D

    Not sure who you’re talking about, but… wow! It touched me deep down. Not yet sure where or what place it touched. Nor what effect it will have. 😘

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