This is last week’s music prompt for Friday hosted by MindLoveMisery’s Menagerie. It’s a song called, “Elysian Night” by Draconian. Hard metal isn’t my thing, but the lyrics are beautiful.
“When I think of eternal, I think there isn’t much that is eternal, at least not on this earth. When I wrote this prompt, I believe I was thinking how even though OctPoWriMo is coming to an end, our words are forever – what we wrote during this month and beyond. What does eternal mean to you?” ——
“Truly, truly, I say to you, he who hears My word, and believes Him who sent Me, has eternal life, and does not come into judgment, but has passed out of death into life.” –John 5:24
Time on earth is done,
When my body is only,
An Empty vessel.
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Then shall eternity —
Begin; time will not matter.
For all those gone on.
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Time on earth, linear,
Comprehend forever,
It’s hard imagining.
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What forever is,
What it looks like and feels like,
Who the maker is?
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Death is frightening,
Even in sleep, will it hurt?
Where does our soul go?
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This is why I think,
Believing in God is wise,
We can worry less.
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Perhaps worry not —
At all; because we know what —
The otherside will bring.
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Many say we’re wrong,
There’s no heaven, there’s no hell.
I learned fear of God.
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Not that we should be —
Afraid of benevolent —
King; but his word speaks.
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Gives us hope for life,
Eternal in Jesus dying for —
Everything done wrong.
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We’re not perfect and —
We never will be, we can’t
Keep the Ten Commandments.
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Fulfilling God’s law,
Impossible to achieve,
So he sent Jesus.
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He hung on a cross,
Cruxifician painful, bled.
He died went to Hell.
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Defeated devil,
Defeated death and the grave,
So with him remain.
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When our death comes there —
Is no sting, because those who —
Have faith, believe — live.
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That is eternity,
Heaven with God, better than —
Our wildest dreams.
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Forgiveness of sin,
Becoming perfect beings,
Paradise for real.
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Thank you for following me for #OctPoWriMo. Sorry, I’m behind on my usual prompts! I will catch up and am following a new themed daily prompt for November. Stay tuned 🙂
I’m so thrilled with Lady Gage’s new album. I love her dance and pop-music stuff but her new songs, some of them go deep. This is one of those songs and I used the lyrics “Angel Down” for this poem. What I love is how in the video she is live, and sounds the same as if you were listening to her on her new album. Talented singer!
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She built her life, she built it strong, made it so —
It wouldn’t fall;but you can fortify —
The keep, make it so no one can slip in,
There are always cracks within perfection;
Angel Down, Angel Down.
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You can see the lines forming before she breaks,
Memories from the past she thought would save.
She’s safe –an illusion broken when the mirror —
Of life shatters within her face, she’s beat;
Angel Down, Angel Down.
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Trapped in a birdcage, no song to sing,
Her tunes aren’t lucid and her wings are clipped,
Such dreams as a young woman, such glad times,
Now she’s angry, so frustrated — life’s a lie;
Angel Down, Angel Down.
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Paints her makeup mask, hide the mirror’s blood tracks,
She thinks she’s imperfect tries to conceal —
New dress, she’s pretty, long legs on display yet,
She can’t hide feelings, she doesn’t fit in here;
Angel Down, Angel Down.
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He said heels were stupid, girls can’t walk on —
Four-inch needles; yet they made her happy.
Night of the dance, stumbled; wore light blue chucks,
Sitting on the radio at the party crying;
Angel Down, Angel Down.
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Years pass, another day spent sifting in,
Her see-through life, on clothing racks, she —
Attempts to find the perfect fit, but she —
Knows like her, it’s elusive, can’t be found;
Angel Down, Angel Down.
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Music saves some, for others it magnifies,
A hurt and hole inside her –can God even fill?
Remembering hideaways, experiences —
To fill the void within, smile with tears dripping;
Angel Down, Angel Down.
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Time in lavish living rooms, won’t make her,
Feel love she’s so denied; she can’t even —
Love her own body, isn’t what it was,
She fingers trinkets bought, fears with tears smear;
Angel Down, Angel Down.
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Jewel she thought would invoke good memories,
Fill her with hope and joy again; sharp pains of —
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