Critiquing
So how's Toph? Does she sound to sweet, or too grumpy? Could I make better jokes--or worse even? ORRR Maybe you have an epic blind plot that you totally want to do!!! Epic plotting is epic, after all.

I openly welcome criticism and ideas, so please drop a line! You may comment to this post (everything is screened), or send a message to my aim (aackerup). See you around Discedo!

General
Player Name: Annika or Nika
Characters: Toph Bei Fong Luke Triton
Main LJ: ttanna6
Contact: AIM [maypielord], email anime_leet [at] hotmail [dot] com

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--ENHIME!

[there’s a pause… a really long pause; that sort of pause that makes you think that… maybe she didn’t have anything else to say. Maybe she didn’t?

No, she pipes up, again] He’s… gone… this is what Yoh’s frequency did, didn’t it? None of that buzzing…

Who…. Who else is gone? I… I don’t know…

Italy? Nunnally? You guys there? A-and that Jackie guy? You guys over at the construction team, are you all here? Cid, Xander, Amy? What about Rosy? Lyserg, he’s gone too, right? Minato’s wife… and his kid, they’re not here… Lyra, that chick from the safe house? She wasn’t so bad…

Gilg? I-Iroh? Kisa? [...] Hohen.... [a really long pause….

And then a CRASH!!! Toph throws her communicator as hard as she can at the wall, and everything falls silent.]

((ooc; posted at school, hence… response will be slow and delayed and all sorts of horrible things. Narupapa-mun, I hope you don’t mind her flipping a table? She’ll be at his apartment for a few more days.))

[YELP!! CRASH! Thud... and a low growl]

THAT'S IT! I am sick and tired of you two acting like a couple of moms and treating me like some nine-year-old who doesn't know how to clean her own room!

SO! In case you guys need a reminder: I can take care of myself BY myself! WITH OR WITHOUT MY BENDING!

[a pause, and then a huge sneeze, followed by a roar.] I'M GOING OUT!

[There's a door SLAM, and a sort of silence between the two morons fretting over Toph without reason....

Then the door OPENS again with another slam] And give me my communicator while you're at it!!

((ooc; She's yelling at Ren and Sokka; open comment log for roommates+Sokka, and neighbors are welcome to hear Toph screaming and slamming doors and being pissed in general.))

[COUGH COUGH] uhg... What the heck's everybody freaking out about, now?

[--CHOO HAAACK SPIT! Ughh.... Silence....]

Hey, c'nstruction team? Ngh, you got 'arshal all finished, right? I th--[she starts coughing for quite the expanse of time.] [...] Nebermind. I'm going back to bed.

((ooc; disappearance explanation is go? She's been off and on getting sick more than a week. She will be answer tags, since she JUST woke up from sleeping--damn sneezes.))

[Apparently she meant to use audio]

Hey, Construction Team! So, long story short: I need somebody to take over construction 'til my chip is out. I don't care who, but I want work on Marshall started right away.

By the way, me and--[Very suddenly a hand appears on the screen, grabbing Toph's head and startling her into dropping her comm.

The video spins and as it does one can hear--.]

GUESS WHO?![The comm hits the floor, to get a look at Sokka covering Toph's eyes and grinning like a moron. Toph, on the other hand, looks none too pleased.]

Sokka, are you forgetting something?

Forgetting wh--[...] Oh...

((ooc; BASICALLY I just need a person to make an IC start and finish announcement on Marshall 4th floor. I'll continue to run OOC organization.

[The feed has been switching between off, video, and audio for some time now. During the moments of video one might see a clean white room, or maybe bedsheets and a glimpse of her green outfit, or on occasion nothing but darkness. You may have heard her sigh, move in her bed, or sniffle a little.

If you've tuned in to figure out if she were back yet in the last few hours, sorry, she's been avoiding talking to anybody. By now she's settled down and gotten over the fact she died, so she's a more pressing issue at hand.]

I need my chip out.



((ooc; UGH, yea I have to go to mom's soon, so tags might come back a little late? Anywho, Toph's back some... I think six hours later, and she really has no idea how she died, either.))

[BACKDATED AFTER THIS POST]

This has to be some sort of joke... [She's a bit out of breath] Whoever needs to restrain somebody, tell me your apartment or where you are and I'll be right over there! Can't believe this--

[She seems to end the feed here--but, then something else goes out--]

[TEXT]

adhf

((ooc; Why the keysmash? She landed on her communicator as Muraki killed her (or will soon at least), so NO RESPONSES ;; abd SORRY ABOUT MY TIMING FAIL; it was late at night when that post went up, so I couldn't manage it and well... orzzz;))

HEY, SMART ONE [pissed off, blind staring at the communicator.. Whoever you are--]

NEXT time you plan to leave a note on my forehead, HERE'S A NOTE FOR YOU.


I'm blind

[angry growl, then throws the communicator aside, grumbling.]

[ooc; response to THIS post.]

October, huh? Guess that makes me thirteen... [she flicks a booger to the side, obviously not all that thrilled. She then picks up the communicator, lays down on the couch, and all you can see is the ceiling.]

Hey! Construction team! I need a hand full of you on Latimir's fourth floor. There's a hole in it I didn't mention that needs some repair. We'll check it out tomorrow, won't take long.

As for the rest of you, Katara showed up here not to long ago. You know the drill: mess with her and I'll turn your face upside down. That makes all of us, right? Unless you forgot to mention any other new additions to the team, Sokka.

[siigh] There anything fun to do around here? I don't care what, anything's more fun than sitting around here.