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Category: Earth
“It’s ‘ The Sit’ That Counts!”
Un-dirt garden – sit!
Then go back and re-dirt same!
Do not forget: sit!
“Thermodynamics’ Third Law (Revised)”
I can feel my body
going back to Earth each day,
as it justly must*!
*(when I counted that last line’s alternate in the original I realized “After Math” had stuck again! as it justly does – because after man came – and still does – recess. The old “but plenty remains” now just a second thought relegated back to the dust, as it were)
“Third Law Of Thermodynamics Appears”
I can feel my body
going back to Earth each day –
but plenty remains*!
*(so many just-off lines: ‘as it justly must’ among the better lines traded for one that fits…like my corrupted swipe at the NY Times: “All the News That’s Fit To Print” became to me “All The News That’s Print To Fit!” So one day I will come back with my reviser hatchet overhead!)
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