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Writing

Notes from Revision and Self-Editing for Publication

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Jim’s book is designed to eliminate the intimidation factor that comes with revision and self-editing. You’ve finally gotten a manuscript completed. Time for a drink. But put on the brakes! Now it’s time to start all over again at page one and start the revision process. Most writers dread this stage. Thankfully, Jim’s book will give them techniques to use during the initial writing phase that will minimize the amount of revision that’s required, as well as guidelines for editing what remains and positioning the work for the best possible odds of a sale.

Skimmed through — mostly not what I need, though may have been helpful earlier in my writing life. Doesn’t get to revision until page 196 out of 268.

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Music

Listened to Coming or Going

Listened to Coming Or Going by White Arrows from Dry Land Is Not A Myth

With Mickey Church on Vocals and Guitar, Andrew Naeve on Electronics and Guitar and John Paul Caballero on Electronics and Guitar, this Los Angeles-based indie rock group created a fun new sound on their debut album “Dry Land is not a Myth”, released in 2012 after about 2 years of writing and studio work.

This song popped into my head today — I’ve been listening to another White Arrows song a bunch, so maybe that did it 😉

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Art and Design

Read Ori Gersht: History Repeating

Read Ori Gersht: History Repeating

History Repeating is the first comprehensive survey of the Israeli-born photographer and video artist Ori Gersht (born 1967). This richly illustrated book presents the best of Gersht’s achingly beautiful images, and explores how he intertwines spectacles of painterly and narrative imagery with personal and collective memory, metaphysical journeys, contextualized spaces and the history of art and photography. Be it in the scars left on the sunlit yet war-torn buildings in Sarajevo, the white noise of his train journey to Auschwitz, or the clearing of trees in a forest that once stood witness to mass murder in Ukraine, Gersht’s vision bridges a history that is full of violent horror and a world of emergent, transcendent beauty. From the radiant optical glow of pollution in the atmosphere to his freeze-frame shots of shattering floral arrangements frozen by liquid nitrogen, Gersht’s calm is one that comes after the storm. In his 2010 series of Japanese landscapes, the ghostly visual static of cherry-blossom petals echo the militarism and sacrificed youth of World War II and the more recent nuclear fallout of Fukushima, but in their own extreme transience, they also manage to embody the possibility of spiritual renewal. History Repeating demonstrates the thin line between beauty and brutality and the sublime draftsmanship behind history’s various traumatic scars. History repeats itself: first as tragedy, then as unexpected beauty.

The cover of this has a lovely ephemeral landscape so I expected landscape photography, some of which I got, as well as still lifes and portraits and video stills. I’m not sure this is a coherent body of work for a viewer, though the moody lighting, low contrast colors, and fuzziness are consistent across much of it. I wish they hadn’t wasted so many plates on video stills, which just don’t translate well to the printed medium.

I didn’t read the essays, just skimmed here and there, and learned that Edgerton created a photographic device that became the detonator for the atomic bomb????! The essays included reference images from the text, which was appreciated except that they were often too small to be very legible.

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Romance Science Fiction

Read Galileo’s Holiday

Read Galileo’s Holiday

ce miner Riley works alone in the depths of space, and that’s the way she likes it. She’s proud of her independence, and when her ship gets destroyed by raiders on the icy surface of Galileo, she’s not sure she wants to rely on rakish trader Leo and the kindness of a band of settlers to survive.Despite her attempts to keep her distance, it’s not long before Riley warms to the family atmosphere of the settlers’ station. As Galileo’s Holiday approaches and she develops feelings for the handsome, charming Leo, she questions whether she really wants to remain alone.But Leo is hiding cargo the raiders want, and when they come back for it, everyone on the small station is in danger. Riley will risk anything to protect her new friends-because if the raiders succeed, the choice between Leo and a life alone won’t be Riley’s to make.

I liked it but wish the relationship had been fleshed out much more, especially transition from dislike to like — I wanted to see more of a reason that she softened on him and they got together.

(Read from the anthology A Galactic Holiday)

(23,000 words)

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Fantasy Romance

Read Kilts & Kraken

Read Kilts & Kraken (Gaslight Chronicles, #3) by Cindy Spencer Pape

Magnus, Baron Findlay, longs to bring the wonders of the steam age to his remote island home, but his hands are full fighting the vicious kraken ravaging the coast. When he’s swept to sea during battle and washes up on the shore of an isle in the Hebrides, he is near death.
Struggling to establish herself as one of the first female physicians in Edinburgh, Dr. Geneva MacKay is annoyed when The Order of the Round Table sends her north to care for an injured highlander. To heal him, Geneva escorts the handsome warrior home, just in time to defend the villagers from another onslaught.
As the attacks escalate and they work together to fight off the threat, neither Geneva nor Magnus can resist the overwhelming attraction between them. But as their relationship deepens, a new threat arises-from within the village itself…

Knew nothing about this going in and it was just the light fare I was looking for. It would have benefited from fleshing out a bit, but I thought it worked like this. I appreciated the importance of their relationships with their friends, new and old.

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Art and Design

Read Marimekko: In Patterns

Read Marimekko: In Patterns

Internationally beloved Finnish design brand Marimekko’s iconic patterns grace home décor, apparel, and accessories, and have informed and influenced tastemakers worldwide for over half a century. Richly illustrated with photographs and prints both classic and new, this vibrant volume (launching along with covetable notebooks and postcards) offers a behind-the-scenes tour of the brand’s creative process. A colorful legacy is revealed, along with the innovative creators—from 1950s pioneers to twenty-first-century masters—who have shaped the company’s heritage and continue to make visual magic today. Rare sketchbook pages, in-depth looks at particular eras, and page after page of gorgeous designs make this a book sure to enchant anyone interested in fashion, art, or the patterned and color-drenched world of Marimekko.

A well-designed and structured book that puts the bulk of its pages towards showcasing the patterns, which is what I’m here for (unlike the Liberty book I read earlier this year). It includes profiles of designers, a description of the design process, selections of fashion made with the fabric from many eras, and a history of the company.

I appreciate that each pattern lists its designer and year, and thought it was a smart design choice to display them as they are on the roll of fabric. Although there’s a huge range in the type of patterns they make — graphic, geometric, hand drawn, monochromatic, rainbow — for the most part they all feel like they belong together. Their philosophy, apparently, is “empowering contradictions.”

They seem to have a well-spread sampling across the years (though there were a surprising number that I really disliked). Some patterns feel very of their time, which makes sense that decorative elements might be tightly synced to the aesthetic of the era. Interestingly, my favorites are mostly from the 2000s.

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Music

Listened to Attica

Listened Attica by Linea Aspera from lineaaspera.bandcamp.com

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Music

Default by Django Django

Listened Default by Django Django from Django Django

from the album Django Django

Cool multimedia video: they must have filmed, printed out and painted over a lot of frames, then stop motion filmed them taped to the wall.

I’ve heard this song before but not in a while. I dig the retro sound of the guitar, almost surf rock-y. Reminds me I also like Hot Chip’s remix of their song Glowing in the Dark.

(Via Sylvia)

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Activism Comics History Memoir

Read The Silence of Our Friends

Read The Silence of Our Friends

A New York Times-bestselling graphic novel based on the true story of two families–one white and one black–who find common ground as the civil rights struggle heats up in Texas.

This semi-autobiographical tale is set in 1967. A white family from a notoriously racist neighborhood in the suburbs and a black family from its poorest ward cross Houston’s color line, overcoming humiliation, degradation, and violence to win the freedom of five black college students unjustly charged with the murder of a policeman.

The Silence of Our Friends follows events through the point of view of young Mark Long, whose father is a reporter covering the story. Semi-fictionalized, this story has its roots solidly in very real events. With art from the brilliant Nate Powell (Swallow Me Whole) bringing the tale to heart-wrenching life, The Silence of Our Friends is a new and important entry in the body of civil rights literature.

I can see how this could have led to Powell working on March. There’s tension here throughout the story, as well as humanizing details.

This does a pretty good job transforming real life into a narrative story. There were a few parts I wasn’t clear why they belonged, like the blind daughter learning a braille typewriter.

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Romance Science Fiction

Read Dark Space

Read Dark Space (Dark Space, #1)

Brady Garrett needs to go home. He’s a conscripted recruit on Defender Three, one of a network of stations designed to protect the Earth from alien attack. He’s also angry, homesick, and afraid. If he doesn’t get home he’ll lose his family, but there’s no way back except in a body bag.

Cameron Rushton needs a heartbeat. Four years ago Cam was taken by the Faceless — the alien race that almost destroyed Earth. Now he’s back, and when the doctors make a mess of getting him out of stasis, Brady becomes his temporary human pacemaker. Except they’re sharing more than a heartbeat: they’re sharing thoughts, memories, and some very vivid dreams.

Not that Brady’s got time to worry about his growing attraction to another guy, especially the one guy in the universe who can read his mind. It doesn’t mean anything. It’s just biochemistry and electrical impulses. It doesn’t change the truth: Brady’s alone in the universe.

Now the Faceless are coming and there’s nothing anyone can do. You can’t stop your nightmares. Cam says everyone will live, but Cam’s probably a traitor and a liar like the military thinks. But that’s okay. Guys like Brady don’t expect happy endings.

I didn’t realize how important to the plot a past rape would be 😬 I might have skipped it if I’d realized. This book had a lot of pretty intense things happening and a lot of uncomfortable things happening — would not recommend this as an entry point to sci-fi romance or m/m. I did turn out to like it overall, and will try the next book.

This was interesting to read after Ocean’s Echo, which also involved two guys stuck in the military forced into a mental bond (though I would class that on the other side of the romance line). This one is ten years older, and I suspect some of the less comfortable consent comes from its age.