What lies beneath our thoughts!

Oblivion

In the efforts of awakening 
The zeal of soul in deep slumber
I pushed myself 
In state of abyss oblivion

Awaiting the Rise from ashes
Phoenix flexing its wings
Aspiring to fly high
Covering the whole dark sky



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Sanjay Ranout

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  1. YAM Avatar
    YAM

    The metaphor is great. Wisely used.

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      Sanjay Ranout

      Thanks Yam

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  2. P. J. Gudka Avatar
    P. J. Gudka

    Fantastic poem.

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      Sanjay Ranout

      Thanks Miss Gudka

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      1. P. J. Gudka Avatar
        P. J. Gudka

        You’re most welcome.

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  3. daisy Avatar
    daisy

    A powerful journey from darkness to awakening, beautifully expressed.

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      Sanjay Ranout

      Thanks Daisy.

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