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Star Wars Chapter 25
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Finally getting back to the main story, it's going to be a lot more action packed.
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Chapter 25: One Year Latter
A lot of time had passed since that last mission. Now Nicholas was 15 and Huraz-Alaz was 14. Both had grown much stronger as Jedi. It was a good thing since the trouble of systems breaking off from the Republic had really begun. This separation movement was revealed to be under the leadership of Count Doku. And thanks to this, it had made it difficult for the limited number of Jedi Knights to maintain peace and order in the galaxy.
However not all was bad. While this had been going on the two Padawans had made friendships with a number of people. In the Senate, they were Amidala, who had become the senator of Naboo, and Bail Organa. This made sense for training in politics and since Nicholas was originally from Alderan, it made sense to get to know the representer of his home planet. There wasn't one for Huraz-Alaz's home world, but that was okay. In terms for Jedi, Anakin, Obi-wan, and a few others had also been added to the list and even sparred with the Padawans.
Now Nicholas and his master Neron were back at the Jedi Temple after reporting to the Council on their latest mission. The young male felt excited but anxious. The first was that it had been almost ten years, the least amount of time needed before he could be promoted to the rank of Knight. The other feeling was because of a whole different matter. "You seem on edge," the older Jedi said, sensing his Padawan's feelings.
"Not at all," Nicholas responded in a sure voice but still felt that way. The biggest difference for him were the glasses. Even with the Force his eyes still needed them. They were designed for combat and couldn't be broken easily. Other than that and his height, his robes were more traditional Jedi like.
"I haven't felt you this tense since that time we got into that brawl during the second to last mission we did."
"You feel into that headache, and I rescued you Master."
"Oh," Neron answered and both couldn't help but chuckle as they remembered that time in their minds. "In any case, you're sweating. Relax; take some breaths."
"I'm sorry I haven't seen her in one year, Master," Nicholas replied. "I don't know how much Huraz-Alaz will have changed." The older Jedi just smiled with amusement, having gone through something similar before.
The two made it out to the entrance to meet up with the Nelvaanian and her master. It wasn't long before the two females made it and walked right up to the males. "It's great to see you again Master Bonga," Neron said.
"It's been far to long," she replied. Huraz-Alaz stepped out and Nicholas eyes couldn't help but widen with shock. Something inside him stirred; like nothing he'd ever felt before. While she hadn't gotten that much taller like him, her robes were more blue in color. But the biggest thing was her beauty; it had begun to really blossom and her chest even with the Nelvaanian's robes were more noticeable.
"So here is your apprentice," Neron stated. "I almost didn't recognize you."
The young female smiled and then turned to see his Padawan and her eyes also went wide with shock. What got her besides the height, clothes, and accessories was that Nicholas had gotten to be quite handsome. She also felt something in her; but this had always been there since they were kids. "Nicholas?" Huraz-Alaz asked in shock. He came walking up. "My goodness; you've grown. And stronger to."
"Yes," he answered. "So have you. I can sense it. And more beautiful as well." Realizing what had been said, the male blushed somewhat but was able to quickly cover up what had been said. "Well; for a Jedi I mean."
The Nelvaanian couldn't help but let out a giggle. "And sometimes you'll always be that little boy who crashed landed on my home planet all those years ago."
"Well… Shall we catch up?" he suggested. Huraz-Alaz looked to Bonga and the older female with her hand showed she could. The two Padawans found themselves walking all the length of the temple, just sharing what they had been up to. But not yet when it came to current events. That would be for another time. There was one thing the female didn't mention as well. That would come very soon. However as the two talked, Nicholas was left to wonder what he had felt. Nothing came to his mind so the human put it to the back of his mind, not knowing it would come up again.
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Now I couldn't get this up on May the 4th since that day fell on a Thursday and it didn't work for me. Maybe next year I'll be on time. So an early Star Wars Day to everyone and the next one's going to be good.
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Chapter 25: One Year Latter
A lot of time had passed since that last mission. Now Nicholas was 15 and Huraz-Alaz was 14. Both had grown much stronger as Jedi. It was a good thing since the trouble of systems breaking off from the Republic had really begun. This separation movement was revealed to be under the leadership of Count Doku. And thanks to this, it had made it difficult for the limited number of Jedi Knights to maintain peace and order in the galaxy.
However not all was bad. While this had been going on the two Padawans had made friendships with a number of people. In the Senate, they were Amidala, who had become the senator of Naboo, and Bail Organa. This made sense for training in politics and since Nicholas was originally from Alderan, it made sense to get to know the representer of his home planet. There wasn't one for Huraz-Alaz's home world, but that was okay. In terms for Jedi, Anakin, Obi-wan, and a few others had also been added to the list and even sparred with the Padawans.
Now Nicholas and his master Neron were back at the Jedi Temple after reporting to the Council on their latest mission. The young male felt excited but anxious. The first was that it had been almost ten years, the least amount of time needed before he could be promoted to the rank of Knight. The other feeling was because of a whole different matter. "You seem on edge," the older Jedi said, sensing his Padawan's feelings.
"Not at all," Nicholas responded in a sure voice but still felt that way. The biggest difference for him were the glasses. Even with the Force his eyes still needed them. They were designed for combat and couldn't be broken easily. Other than that and his height, his robes were more traditional Jedi like.
"I haven't felt you this tense since that time we got into that brawl during the second to last mission we did."
"You feel into that headache, and I rescued you Master."
"Oh," Neron answered and both couldn't help but chuckle as they remembered that time in their minds. "In any case, you're sweating. Relax; take some breaths."
"I'm sorry I haven't seen her in one year, Master," Nicholas replied. "I don't know how much Huraz-Alaz will have changed." The older Jedi just smiled with amusement, having gone through something similar before.
The two made it out to the entrance to meet up with the Nelvaanian and her master. It wasn't long before the two females made it and walked right up to the males. "It's great to see you again Master Bonga," Neron said.
"It's been far to long," she replied. Huraz-Alaz stepped out and Nicholas eyes couldn't help but widen with shock. Something inside him stirred; like nothing he'd ever felt before. While she hadn't gotten that much taller like him, her robes were more blue in color. But the biggest thing was her beauty; it had begun to really blossom and her chest even with the Nelvaanian's robes were more noticeable.
"So here is your apprentice," Neron stated. "I almost didn't recognize you."
The young female smiled and then turned to see his Padawan and her eyes also went wide with shock. What got her besides the height, clothes, and accessories was that Nicholas had gotten to be quite handsome. She also felt something in her; but this had always been there since they were kids. "Nicholas?" Huraz-Alaz asked in shock. He came walking up. "My goodness; you've grown. And stronger to."
"Yes," he answered. "So have you. I can sense it. And more beautiful as well." Realizing what had been said, the male blushed somewhat but was able to quickly cover up what had been said. "Well; for a Jedi I mean."
The Nelvaanian couldn't help but let out a giggle. "And sometimes you'll always be that little boy who crashed landed on my home planet all those years ago."
"Well… Shall we catch up?" he suggested. Huraz-Alaz looked to Bonga and the older female with her hand showed she could. The two Padawans found themselves walking all the length of the temple, just sharing what they had been up to. But not yet when it came to current events. That would be for another time. There was one thing the female didn't mention as well. That would come very soon. However as the two talked, Nicholas was left to wonder what he had felt. Nothing came to his mind so the human put it to the back of his mind, not knowing it would come up again.
X
Now I couldn't get this up on May the 4th since that day fell on a Thursday and it didn't work for me. Maybe next year I'll be on time. So an early Star Wars Day to everyone and the next one's going to be good.
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