It has been 2022 days
since these four walls
became my desert island
of seclusion or is it senility...
Each day, I repeat
like the false echoes of a shell,
"brave the world
surf the waves, crash if you must"
I write my grievances
and my joys
on parched paper, and sometimes
slip them onto WordPress,
my message in an opaque bottle
that bobs and bobs
out into the cyberspace,
to be read or not...
I do not expect rescue
to fill the silence
I'm content to build
my sand castle, again and again
shape it anew
with each tidal wave
that laps at the shores
of grief, desolation, and joy
©Heather Carr-Rowe
The Skeptic’s Kaddish W3 Prompt # 169 is given to us by the Poet of the Week Lesley Scoble. She asks us to write a narrative poem in any poetic form of our choice. I chose the Desert Island.
Here are the guidelines:
This week, you are the inhabitant of a realm set apart.
Option 1: The Desert Island 🏝️
You’re alone on a desert island. It may be literal—or metaphorical.
Why are you here? What led you to this dilemma? How do you feel, truly? How are you surviving—physically, emotionally, spiritually? What are your hopes? How might you escape? And crucially: do you even want to?
Let solitude shape the rhythm.
Option 2: The Fantasy Castle 🏰
You inhabit a castle—not just any, but one infused with fantasy.
Who are you? Are you a monarch weighed by secrets, a dragon curled beneath the stone, a gargoyle watching centuries unfold, a princess awaiting—or resisting—destiny… or something else entirely?