I bought The Road Trip by Tricia Stringer because I loved the way the cover made me feel. A beach at sunset, comfy chairs to relax in and the dinky old caravan implies a story about a relaxing holiday – seriously, what could possibly go wrong here?
Lots, as it turned out.
Sharyn, who I would describe as slightly high-maintenance, was hoping that her husband Barry was planning to whisk her off to a luxurious and Instagram-worthy island resort for the combination of her 60th birthday and their 35th wedding anniversary, so to say she was disappointed when her husband surprised her by purchasing a caravan and four-wheel drive from an inheritance left to him by his father was an understatement. Worse still, he’d planned for them to spend their upcoming long-service leave on a six-week caravanning trip from Adelaide up to Broome in Top End of Australia in convoy with his mate, Ray, and Ray’s reclusive, odd sister, Kathleen.
Before I get on with telling you a little about what happened next in the story, I’d like to say that if my husband bought a modern caravan with an ensuite, washing machine and all the mod-cons (nothing like the picturesque caravan on the book’s cover) and four-wheel drive combo that set us back around $80,000 to $120,000 without us being in agreement over the purchase, I’d be very, very angry. On a scale on one to ten, my rage levels would have been about twenty, maybe even twenty one or two, even though I enjoy caravanning and camping. In Victoria we need to work for the same company for a little over seven years to build up six weeks of long service leave, and I can well understand that Sharyn didn’t want to spend her hard-earned long-service leave on long, long days of driving, along with the cooking and cleaning and laundry and all the rest of it, which just like at home still needs doing but is far less convenient in a caravan.
From the beginning, the reader realised that Sharyn’s girlfriends were unkind, manipulative and superficial, which left the reader trying to decide whether or not to like Sharyn based on the company she kept. As it turned out, Sharyn’s best friend was Ray’s wife, Julie who died about a year before the story began. Julie had been a good person, but since her death Sharyn had been adrift. The group she was running with were less than impressed by Barry’s surprise too, since their idea of holidays were of glamorous tropical islands, or expensive river cruises, which were taken as much to impress each other with than to enjoy.
Sharyn eventually agreed to the road trip, but from the beginning things went wrong. Barry wasn’t a practical man, and there is more to towing a caravan than people realise. Making sure all of the cupboard doors, fridge and windows are secured before driving off is one of them, and on Sharyn and Barry’s first stop, they opened their caravan door to find the contents of the fridge all over their floor. Weeks later, Sharyn could still smell rank sour cream whenever she stepped inside the van. Once that smell dissipated, the toilet overflowed – yuck, yuck and yuck again.
The chapters alternately followed Sharyn on a holiday she didn’t want to be on, and Kathleen, who was on the verge of a nervous breakdown after giving up her job to nurse her parents, followed soon after by Julie. Kathleen’s finances were somewhat precarious, partly because her father had left the bulk of his estate to Ray, and she was suffering from severe anxiety that was exacerbated by inconsiderate, difficult neighbours who had been making her life a living hell.
I liked Kathleen and wanted good things for her. I wanted her to stand up to her much older brother Ray, who genuinely loved her and was paying her way on the trip, but who expected Kathleen to be his cook, cleaner and maid just because that was the traditional role that his mother and Julie had previously played in his life.
I enjoyed watching Kathleen gain confidence as the story continued, and that she and Sharyn eventually became friends. Sharyn also became a better person as the story progressed, in part because she began stepping up to advocate for Kathleen to prevent Ray from walking all over her, or to comfort her when events triggered a meltdown.
Ray and Barry also learned things about themselves and grew as a result of the experiences they shared on this trip. What I didn’t like about the two men though was their selfishness, which became more obvious when they were together. They often left Sharyn and Kathleen to manage the cooking, cleaning, planning, even though Sharyn always asked/suggested/nagged Barry contribute, which of course she shouldn’t have to. In addition, the men almost always dumped the emotional load of whatever was going on onto the two women to cope with.
The story had a few faults, nothing major – just little annoyances. For instance, I’d have liked to have known where Sharyn worked and what she actually did there. Barry, too. Just a line or two to say who they were and what they did in the greater part of their usual lives would have sufficed.
Sharyn and Barry had regular glitches and petty arguments that would have been resolved by a two-sentence conversation, which interfered with me believing in them as a couple. Don’t get me wrong, I’m well aware that married people bicker and quarrel, but I didn’t always believe in Shazza and Bazza’s arguments. They had been married for 35 years, so I was left thinking that most of their issues only existed in the story as plot devices.
My last bone-to-pick is with the blurb on the back cover, which led me to believe that the story included a murder mystery. Without saying why, I’ll just say that the murder mystery element of the story shouldn’t have been included in the blurb.
However, sometimes you just need a fast, happy read and that’s what I got with The Road Trip. I knew that cheerful, summery cover wouldn’t let me down.
My purchase of The Road Trip by Tricia Stringer continues my New Year’s resolution for 2025 to buy a book by an Australian author during each month of the year (October). I purchased this book from Collins Booksellers in Warrnambool on Love Your Bookshop Day.
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