Consumption

On the dead and the living.

The dead are hungry. They roam the caverns
of the mind for fresh provisions: despair,
self-doubt, misery. The feeding table
stretches far beyond any fixed limit,
and their stomachs will never be sated
with the food we do not dare to give them:
our dreams, our hopes, the things we call human.
But I cling firmly to life, and life turns
my eyes away from the ranks of the dead.
This, even as the night sky grows sable
in its blush, is vital to determine
not what the dead owe me (nor I them)
but the future and my role in it:
one grasping for hope from the thinning air.

Note

I chose to share this poem with dVerse for their Open Link Night on Thursday, February 27, 2025.

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  1. Ken Gierke / rivrvlogr Avatar
    Ken Gierke / rivrvlogr

    Hope worth having.

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  2. crazy4yarn2 Avatar
    crazy4yarn2

    I love the way you describe the dead – not anything I want to ever meet.

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  3. Lisa or Li Avatar
    Lisa or Li

    A resonant pep talk indeed. Whatever it takes to keep going. “Don’t let the b*stards grind you down.”

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  4. kim881 Avatar
    kim881

    A haunting poem, Chris, which proves that the dead consume us only until we leave them behind and ‘cling firmly to life’. We still have our memories, but we are not ‘grasping for hope from the thinning air’.

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  5. Mish Avatar
    Mish

    Oh that first line pulled me in. I especially like this…

    “their stomachs will never be sated
    with the food we do not dare to give them”

    Thought-provoking.

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  6. Frewin55 Avatar
    Frewin55

    I don’t know whether, as my life span grows shorter ( I am three score years and ten in a week’s time) I feel more or less urgency to answer the question as to what “my “my role in it” is – legacy or contributions still possibly to be made…

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  7. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar
    Björn Rudberg (brudberg)

    I think we just have to continue… even though it is exhausting.

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