Discovery

For my niece.

She takes the toy in her one-month 
hand still growing and shakes it.
The rattling sound shakes the

air in kind, colliding particles
of plastic with her laughter.
Already she's learning the texture

of things bearing names not her
own, which is to say words have
no use to her at this age one calls

tender. Language being what it is, it's
hard not to think at once of that soft
hand, and the imaginary jingling

of currency entering another's
palms—more weathered, let's
say—in exchange for the toy

now shaken. One wonders how
the words she'll one day learn could
ever compete, whether the world

still unfolding itself before
those growing limbs could keep
its unspoken promises waiting

for her to discard them—break
them
, she might learn to say—
for better, lasting pleasures.

Notes

I chose to share this poem with dVerse for their Open Link Night (December 12, 2024).


Responses

  1. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar
    Björn Rudberg (brudberg)

    This is a wonderful way to imagine the journey we must all have made through your tender niece… and soon she will talk, but these first steps she will never remember..

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    1. csquaredetc Avatar
      csquaredetc

      Thanks for this, Björn—how wistful indeed to realize that words will become her world…

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  2. lillian Avatar
    lillian

    Ah….the innocence of early childhood that must, over time, make way for reality. You’ve written about it well….

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    1. csquaredetc Avatar
      csquaredetc

      Many thanks for reading, Lillian! I too am wistful about the innocence of childhood, but I find writing to be an even more beautiful gift that arrives with age.

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  3. msjadeli Avatar
    msjadeli

    As you describe, baby steps along the way to another place, one with words. Hope you are enjoying your holidays, and it sounds like you are with your infant niece.

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    1. csquaredetc Avatar
      csquaredetc

      Thanks for this, Lisa! Wishing you a happy holiday season filled with wonder as well 🙂

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  4. kim881 Avatar
    kim881

    What a lovely discovery, Chris, made by us all but unique for each of us. I love the detailed observation in the lines:

    ‘The rattling sound shakes the

    air in kind, colliding particles
    of plastic with her laughter’.

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    1. csquaredetc Avatar
      csquaredetc

      Many thanks for reading, Kim! Wishing you a holiday season filled with new discovery and wonder 🙂

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      1. kim881 Avatar
        kim881

        Merry Christmas, Chris!

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