Mulching

Archaeology of the front yard.

With heavy hands we spread the dead
chips across the lawn. Each piece splits
the glove just enough for us to get a feel
for what the wood used to be: some cell
in a tall tree, somewhere in a crowded
forest. A few are stained in blood
the color of cooked earth, because I was
careless in caressing one or two bare-
handed. Look here, on the right hand:
how this wound, puncturing earthen skin,
spurts out a little red the exact shape
of the piece that pierced it. And there on
the ground the culprit lies, waiting
its turn to sink into the soil, unheard
and unseen until the healed hand will
turn it over between this fall and the fall
to come for another scattering of the dead.

Notes

I wrote this poem a few days before the beginning of fall as my parents decided to mulch the front yard. Thanks to Punam (via dVerse) for the invitation to share it more widely!

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  1. kim881 Avatar
    kim881

    Now thatโ€™s a different kind of โ€˜scattering of the deadโ€™, Chris. Iโ€™d forgotten about mulching โ€“ and you describe it so beautifully in your poem. I love how you focus on details such as:

    โ€˜โ€ฆEach piece splits
    the glove just enough for us to get a feel
    for what the wood used to be: some cell
    in a tall tree, somewhere in a crowded
    forestโ€™

    and the alliterative phrase โ€˜the color of cooked earthโ€™.

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    1. csquaredetc Avatar
      csquaredetc

      Thanks so much for this, Kim!

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      1. kim881 Avatar
        kim881

        You’re welcome, Chris!

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  2. Ain Avatar
    Ain

    The details run so smoothly, but more important, I really like poetry that narrates a happening, and think is particularly difficult to do. The fresh blood, the cuts exactly in the shaspes of what made them really give the verse that freshness and immediacy.

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    1. csquaredetc Avatar
      csquaredetc

      Many thanks, Ain—I’d argue that it’s hard *not* to think about “freshness” in the context of gardening, so I’m happy that quality shines through for you in this poem!

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      1. Ain Avatar
        Ain

        Yes..a better word needed by me…the fresh blood gives an immediate, potent image..

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  3. erbiage Avatar
    erbiage

    a great concept, holing in on the mulching process. The spirit of the tree taking one last stab before sinking into obscurityโ€ฆ. A great write!

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    1. csquaredetc Avatar
      csquaredetc

      Thanks so much for these warm and insightful comments, Eric!

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  4. seanatbogie Avatar
    seanatbogie

    There is a complementary existence happening here in the spilling of blood toward propagation that ensures another season of life.

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    1. csquaredetc Avatar
      csquaredetc

      Well spotted, Sean! I think it’s impossible to conceive life without loss, and I suppose that’s one of poetry’s greatest gifts: taking something lost and channeling it, as in mulching, toward something new.

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  5. M Avatar
    M

    vivid and wry ~

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  6. Bjรถrn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar
    Bjรถrn Rudberg (brudberg)

    love the way we get new life from decay, independent of what we spread, it will come to use in spring to come.

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    1. csquaredetc Avatar
      csquaredetc

      Well said, Bjรถrnโ€”even the slight scar on my finger can’t disagree with the eventual arrival of new life!

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  7. paeansunplugged Avatar
    paeansunplugged

    The cycle of life. A seemingly ordinary task holding deeper meaning.

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    1. csquaredetc Avatar
      csquaredetc

      Haha, this is high praise Punam! But many thanks all the same for reading, and for the well-timed prompt ๐Ÿ™‚

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      1. paeansunplugged Avatar
        paeansunplugged

        You are so welcome, Chris. ๐Ÿ˜Š

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  8. Frewin55 Avatar
    Frewin55

    Gardening is an artificial management of nature that is ever demanding and here you link mulching to the natural recycling of material and even give your own blood to the process – by the way – that is some red wood chip – what tree is it from?

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  9. Indira Avatar
    Indira

    Wow! Beauty lies in details. Great poem.

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    1. csquaredetc Avatar
      csquaredetc

      Thank you for your lovely comment, Indira!

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      1. Indira Avatar
        Indira

        My pleasure, dear.

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