Inheritance

Another poem on the poetics of cultivation. In memory of my paternal grandmother (嫲嫲).

The peach tree planted by the fence
is swaying with the morning wind,
its stony marble fruit too fond
to plunge into the spongy ground.

An heirloom of my grandmother,
it changed hands from one to another
when we sold her house after she’d passed.
I remember how with joy she grasped

so many from her windowsill
in midsummer, when the still
tree’s branches stretched far and wide
enough to let her strong arms guide

their way through thick viridian
sheets to seize pink fruit: children
born from years of tender labor.
I wonder whether she'd preferred

them over her other living kin,
huddled in the crowded kitchen
while she watered, raised, and fed
the tree with her calloused, earth-bruised

hands and firm, unyielding fingers.
Later, I learned that the buyers
who purchased her house in Queens
covered the wilding peach tree grounds

with concrete shaped into a driveway:
dense compacted slabs of gray,
the yard now someone else’s plot
where once our lives had taken root.

So as I wait for these peaches
to ripen, wait for the branches
to relinquish their fleshy stones
into my greener unskilled hands,

I know, too, that each fruit borne
will yield the love she sought to earn:
taste of constant diligence,
scent of sweet magnificence,

texture of her caring hand
that one day we might understand
her quiet generosity:
harvest ripe with ancestry.

Note

I shared an edited version of this poem (which was first posted on Saturday, July 13) with dVerse for their Open Link Night on Thursday, August 1, 2024.

Sadly, the peaches in this poem never had a chance to ripen this season---they were devoured by a marauding squirrel just days after I drafted it.

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  2. Mish Avatar
    Mish

    This is so moving and tender. I love the nostalgia infused throughout this piece, the ponderings and memories attached to your grandmother’s peach tree. I’m sorry about the squirrels in your note. We have had the worst year ever for squirrels eating our flowers and tomatoes.

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      csquaredetc

      Thanks so much for reading Michelle, and for your squirrel-related sympathies! I’m sure the heat here in the Northeast hasn’t helped anyone, but it was still frustrating to see the peaches decimated in a day. Already I can picture my grandmother chasing them off from her grave…

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    msjadeli

    Sweet reveries. Best not to think about what happened to grandmother’s tree. So sorry the squirrel nabbed the peaches on yours.

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      csquaredetc

      Thanks for your sympathy, Lisa—we’ll be more careful with the tree next year!

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        msjadeli

        You’re welcome. I keep saying I’m going to spray my fruit trees (2 apple, 1 pear) so I can eat the fruit, but it has been, so far, left to the insects, deer, and the rest of the critters.

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    merrildsmith

    I really like the interconnection between the tree/fruit and ancestry/family. It sounds like your grandmother was a very special woman. Better luck next year with the peaches!

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      csquaredetc

      Thanks for your kind comments, Merril! Truth be told, I wish I knew my grandmother better; we couldn’t communicate easily for many years because of a language barrier, but I’ll always remember her as a diligent gardener.

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        merrildsmith

        You’re welcome, Chris.

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    Ain Starlingsson

    Lovely tribute, v nice rhythm, so easy to read, really nicely done

    I do like squirrels so I was a little bit happy.,

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      csquaredetc

      Haha, thank you for your comments Ain—as unfortunate as the peaches turned out for us, I have to give the squirrels some credit for their cunning!

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    kim881

    A heartfelt tribute, Chris, and I love the scene you set in the opening stanza, and the personal history woven into your poem. I also enjoyed the portrait of your grandmother with her ‘calloused, earth-bruised hands and firm, unyielding fingers’. It must have been heart-breaking to see your grandmother’s garden covered with concrete. At least you have the peach tree, even if the squirrel stole the peaches.

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      csquaredetc

      Thanks so much for your warm comments, Kim. It’s strange to realize that the space where I used to live has been remodeled after someone else’s preferences, but I guess that just comes with moving on. And I’m thankful the tree is still healthy; it just means we’ll have to prepare for a better harvest next season!

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        kim881

        Fingers crossed!

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  7. Kim of Glover Gardens Avatar
    Kim of Glover Gardens

    The paving-over of the tree is such a poignant metaphor for the larger loss. The memories are all that is left now, but to have them conjured whenever you see or eat a peach is lovely. Really nice poem.

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      csquaredetc

      Thanks for your warm comments, Kim! I agree that seeing the earth repaved was hard to understand, but perhaps the silver lining is that the new family gets to enjoy the house on their own terms. I’m also thankful the tree itself is still thriving; it may well be the most treasured possession my grandmother left for us.

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    paeansunplugged

    Such a warm remembrance! Love the flow and the rhymes.

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    1. csquaredetc Avatar
      csquaredetc

      Many thanks for reading, Punam, and for your equally warm comments!

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        paeansunplugged

        You are welcome, Chris.

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