I won't fail, but a lot of men will

06 April 2012 @ 07:07 pm

and no, I ain't perfect, nobody walking this earth's surface is. But girlfriend, work with the kid.

If there's something I'm doing wrong, something I should know that I don't or if I'm acting some way that you think I shouldn't, leave a comment here and I'll do my best to fix it.

characterization crit, writing crit and general praise are all welcome.

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