I'm all ears [ critique sticky post ]

and no, I ain't perfect, nobody walking this earth's surface is. But girlfriend, work with the kid. If there's something I'm doing wrong, something I should know that I don't or if I'm acting some way that you think I shouldn't, leave a comment here and I'll do my best to fix it. characterization crit, writing crit and general praise are all welcome. Comments screened, anon enabled.