The night stumbled
The grief rushed in currents of air
As he gave his final good bye
Her tears of sorrow,
Washed away by his words.
Huddling under overcoats
His mischievous laugh
His care; his swing of love
His cradle of passion
Shadows of things that used to be
hinders her ability to see
into the loneliness of the starless wintry night.
As she walks along this passage
Wondering where he is now,
Does he stare in to space wondering too?
Is he happy, or lonely as she?
She sat there
Tossing rocks in to the calm shimmery water
Wondering what would have been if they had a chance…

waaoohh nice 🙂 lovely
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Thanks (:
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hey hey dont feel like that its ok dear…… it happens in life dont feel upset…
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I’m not upset 😛 And thank you so much for you concern 🙂
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anytime 🙂
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😦 sad.
Sometimes we pine for people who have moved on. It’s terrible never really knowing where a relationship will end. The feeling of missing and wondering what could have been sucks. Thanks for writing and sharing such a lovely poem.
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Yeah! Wish if we were able to know before hand who will be there till end (:
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Beautiful.
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Thanks Darren (:
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=D
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Beautiful 🙂
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Reblogged this on Love, Jeni and commented:
So intense. Takes me back just 15 weeks ago; my break-up. Still haunting me. Dead of winter. My dead heart. My broken soul. Your words speak directly to me…beautiful ❤
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I’m so sorry for your loss.. Be strong..
Keep smiling 🙂
Take care =D
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Thank you Geethu ❤ I will do so 🙂
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This is very touching and very moving…and I have been where you are quite a few times in my life. A hard lesson, at the end of the day, we are making this life journey on our own and our fulfilment cannot be found in another human being…we are all transitory, but we can have soul mates/ companions along the way to share the experience, and learn these lessons together. A virtual hug being sent your way…Thank you for your openness…
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Aww.. Thanks a lot 🙂
*hugs*
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You are most welcome!
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Really love don’t need any physical presence…
Gorgeous lines…
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true (:
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Hey,
Really nice and beautifully summed up the emotions:)
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Thank you Shruti 🙂 Glad u loved it =D
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