Fiction: Dottie and the City of Oz (Part 5) #amwritingfiction


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Fire in the sky, fire in the mountains grey with speckled trees; fire neared the field’s of grain. Dorothy squealed as they skipped closer to a gated city of emerald jewels and verdant brick. A knocker lay against the door and Dorothy jumped as the Tin-man lifted rapped on the gate three times.

“Who’s there?” A man dressed in armor in a kelly green helmet peeked through the door.

Dorothy approached. “Good afternoon. We’re here to see the magician — your magic man. The four of us have been travelling a far way and need help to end the fires caused by the wicked witches across the land’s of Oz.”

Chloe the lab pup lay against Dorothy, her head buried in the girl’s’s shoulder. Dorothy turned towards the guard. “Please sir let us in.” The Tin-man and Straw-man stood beside her in solidarity.

The Tin-man leaned against his ax. “We’d be grateful; we know we can aid everyone in ending the fires.” The Straw-man and Lion-man crossed their arms attempting to appear serious.

The guard lifted the visor on his helmet. “Well, we’ve had a lot of refugees with the fires. But, the magician has men out fighting the blaze and keeping it from consuming the city — razing the fields. Tell me more about why you seek our magic man?”

Dorothy stretched her arms and Chloe slid to the ground; she pointed to her ruby shoes. “Well you see, these are the first wicked witch’s shoes; my house fell on her. Both witches started the fires and I need these shoes off to go home.”

“We require the remaining witch’s broom to end the fires.” She spread her arm out towards her companions. “These are my friends, they need help too — a heart for the Tin-man, intelligence for the Straw-man, and courage for the Lion-man. Chloe, my dog and myself (Dottie), need to return to a place called Kansas.”

The guard (gatekeeper) twirled his bottle green beard. “I can let you in. There’s a long line-up to see the magician. A lot of people need his help; especially, with the fires destroying livelihoods and enslavement due to the witch’s. It’s not going to be easy to see the great magician, few do.”

Then, the gates opened with a boom. Dust rose and Dorothy and her friends entered. Chloe bounced around their knees and greeted the guards inside the city gate. As they meandered they were overwhelmed with the amount of people inside. Some wore all green, and some wore clothing in charred red or yellow, depending from where they originated.

The straw-man decided to halt for a rest. He leaned against a stone-wall, arms crossed and hand under his rosy cheek.”So, where to do we find this magician?”

“They’re posters along the city walls. A lady back there said to head to the centre of the the city, that we couldn’t miss the magician’s black building.” The Tin-man gazed around the bustling city’s where people of all kinds shopped and chatted. “Let’s keep going. Oil my joints first, would you, Dottie?”

Dorothy aided the Tin-man. She regarded Chloe as she plodded along, yawning in sleepiness. The journey was a lot for a puppy, even a growing Labrador. Her companions were sleepy too. “Perhaps we all need to find an inn first? Then, we can continue after food and rest.”

“Good idea, Dottie; my paws ache.” The lion-man yawned roar-like. “After, we can get courage and whatever else from the magic man.”

Hours later Dorothy skipped towards the city centre with her friends, noting the jewelled emerald stones in the city walls as sunlight bounced off them. Oz had a unique green-hued beauty and the people were kind and welcoming. The city’s ambience of ingenuity was diverse from the surrealism outside its walls.

She straightened her red bow, and patted chestnut curls half-dry from a recent bath. “Okay boys, let’s find us the great magician.”

They followed a path marked by many white and lime-green posters advertising the magician’s ‘awesome’ power. The posters led to a gleaming onyx building with open doors. The group joined a line to meet the mysterious magician.

“I hope he’s a good magician,”Dorothy mused. She bent to scratch Chloe’s ears.

“Oh he is, I’m certain.” The straw-man squeezed Dorothy’s hands. “They’re tales far and wide of his talent. He’s not evil; in fact, he’s infinitely good.”

“I hope so.” The Lion-man shook and quivered.

Noticing his constant fear, the Tin-man patted the lion’s back. “You don’t have to be anxious here, we’re safe now. The fire fighters keep the smoke away from the city, along with the magic fighters. You’ll get your courage soon.”

Still, the Lion-man shook and Dorothy tapped her chin in thought. “I think the Lion-man can’t help his anxiety or fear.” She turned towards him. “Am I right?” He nodded, head hidden in his neck.

Dorothy twisted to face her other friends. “Some people are afraid of the unknown, and even the everyday. I don’t think the Lion-man can stop his anxiety. I imagine having his home destroyed like the Tin-man hasn’t helped.”

The Tin-man nodded. “You’re right, for some creatures the loss of home, their livelihood, and especially, freedom causes trauma. I’ve met many people who’re anxious and sad, a permanent sickness they deal with on-top of everyday troubles and responsibilities.”

He patted the lion-man’s arm. “I’ll remember you need understanding and remind the Straw-man too. I’m a happy-go-lucky guy, but I can’t sympathize with others to well due to my lack of heart.”

The Straw-man patted the Lion-man too. Bits of straw stuck to his fur. “I can’t often think as others, but I’ll remember to reassure too.”

“I appreciate that.” The lion-bowed. His quivering ceased and he peered ahead of them.

The line inside the magician’s castle had lessened and they we’re almost at reception. “Look we’re next to be helped.” The Lion-man pointed ahead.

Dorothy smiled at her three friends and petted Chloe. She approached the receptionist feeling out of place in her dirty blue and white dress.

The receptionist wore a shiny emerald jumpsuit. She chewed a wad of gum and peered at Dorothy with bored moss eyes. “Names?”

“Dottie, Tin-man, Straw-man, and Lion-man.”

The receptionist tapped long nails against her lips. “Hmmm, it’s going to be awhile. I’d sit and get comfy if I were you.” The receptionist pointed to the start of another long line where people sat, stood, and chattered.

Chloe plodded in-front of Dorothy, hair on end. She growled in protection and the receptionist stepped back.

Dorothy marched forward. “Listen lady, we need to see the magic man as it’s imperative to ending the fires. We’re tasked with defeating the last wicked witch. The magician — whoever he is — needs our help to end the carnage. Not to mention, we’ve personal problem’s to be solved to aid everyone in Oz and beyond.”

The woman smirked. “As I said, take a seat over there where the new line starts.” The hard black floor waited for the four of companions and Chloe. Dorothy groaned inwardly, but noted the receptionist’s name tag.

“Wilma, we need to see the magician now.” She glared at the woman and pointed to her ruby shoes.

Wilma’s moss eyes widened. “Those were the first witches. Everyone knows those shoes. How’d you get them?”

“Gertrude the good fairy (witch) fastened them on my feet and they’re stuck. I need them unfastened. I also need to kill the remaining witch and retrieve her broom. Understand now ?”

Wilma pinched the bridge of her nose and shook her head. She left her booth and her heels clicked against the floor. She disappeared behind a large silk-blue curtain and a door slammed.

Ten-minutes later she returned to reception nibbling het manicured nails and rubbing her arms. “This never happens, but you can follow me to meet the great magician. He never gives out-of-turn appointments, so I would make your point quick.”

Dorothy smiled at Wilma in thanks and turned to her companions. “Ready?” They followed the receptionist behind the silk curtain.

As they walked, Dorothy closed her eyes. “I wish this whole thing wasn’t so weird. I wish I was home. There’s so much way to go to get there.” She squeaked, she hadn’t met to say those words aloud (beneath her breath at most).

The Lion-man patted her head. “Soon Dottie, soon. We’ll fly away home on eagles wings soon.”

“You think?”

The lion patted her once more. “We’ll get through this. As you told me, we can’t help but be scared, but in the end we’ll conquer despite fear.

Dorothy grinned; they walked on following Wilma through a door and up an ominous staircase. Here goes nothing!

(Thanks to Frank L. Baum, The Wizard of Oz).


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Fiction: Dottie Moves On — The Straw-man Part 3 #amwritingfiction


Credit: Lindsey LaMont via Unsplash.


Acrid ash gathered on the yellow brick road, fat and in voluminous piles from caramel skies. Dorothy’s eyes’ teared.

“Hey you, girl, girl over here.” She jumped. A man made of straw hung from a wooden dowel; he waved.

The straw-man’s face wrinkled when he smiled and his eyes lit a sapphire-blue. “Hello, not to be rude, but can you please let me down? The fire’s are too close. I don’t wan’t to burn with the corn.”

Chloe, Dorothy’s lab pup, barked and shimmed beneath the fence. Dorothy climbed overtop, candy-red shoes catching on the rungs. She stumbled amongst the corn until she reached the straw-man.

Far behind Dorothy the sky was red and smoke-black. The pungent aroma touched everywhere, and Dorothy’s hair, clothes, and Chloe’s fur stunk of it. At least Dorothy had grown somewhat used to it.

She brushed the ash off her dress and Chloe’s sleek coat.The dog ran to sniff at the straw-man who waved awkward arms and legs at Chloe and Dorothy.

“Hello there. I’m Dottie, short for Dorothy. My lab’s Chloe. Who put you there anyways? Where I come from scarecrows aren’t alive.”

The straw-man chuckled and flung bits of hay as he talked and waved his arms. “Well, I don’t know why I’m alive. Some of us are, some of us aren’t. I send the crows away, those exasperating things. But, I get sick of hanging here; mostly, I’m afraid of the fires.”

“Here let me help.” Dorothy stretched herself on tippy-toes and with both arms lifted the scarecrow off his peg. Her shoulders and arms ached and the straw-man fell onto the ground. Chloe bounced and wagged her tail and the straw-man reached to pet her with misshapen fingers.

Dorothy laughed. “She likes you. Chloe doesn’t like everyone. Here, you’re missing much of your straw.” She aided the straw-man until he stood. Together they put his body back together with straw.

She poured water into a little bowl for Chloe, then peered at the straw-man. “What shall I call you?” The scarecrow chortled. “I’ve no idea. We don’t think well, us scarecrows. No brains. But maybe one day. Straw-man a fine name, Dottie.”

Dorothy tapped her finger against her lips. “Well I’m on my way to kill the second wicked witch, Straw-man. My house killed the first, but they’re both responsible for the fires. They’re destroying homes and livelihoods for slave labor. If I do it, Gertrude (a good fairy) says I can go home and get these awful red shoes off my feet.” She peered at them with distaste.

The scarecrow blinked. “Unbelievable! Perhaps, if I accompany you I might find someone to help me too, along the way? So I can learn and think as most creatures here do?”

Dorothy nodded stretching her arms behind her. “Well, today I met you, and Gertrude told me I wouldn’t be alone on my journey. Perhaps, we shall meet other creatures too?”

The scarecrow grinned his mouth an orange-red slash. “Let’s hope so, then we shall both solve our issues, with Chloe too of course.” The pup bounced circles ’round the pair.’

Dorothy climbed over the fence and the scarecrow took her hand; she stood to aid him. The smoke grew thicker, and Dorothy coughed. Ash flew in the air as snow.

Grabbing Chloe’s empty water bowl she put it away. She drank water from a bottle in her basket and offered the scarecrow a sip. “Don’t need that but thanks. So, how do we kill this witch?”

Dorothy shrugged. “I don’t know yet. But, we need her broom.”

“Well, there’s this guy I know.”

“Okay?”

“He’s a powerful man of sorts. I heard of him, he might help.”

“What’s his name?” Dorothy squeaked.

“Well, he’s a magician of sorts. I’ve heard stories. Perhaps, if we follow the yellow road to Oz, we’ll find him there?”

“Sounds like a plan.”

Dorothy was aware that although she was no longer alone, the light wasn’t right in Oz nor was it with Gertrude. Even the chroma of the fire was wrong.

Here the corn was too perfect and the birds were too bright a blue or shiny a black. The lands of Oz were surreal with a quality she couldn’t place.

Nevertheless, Dorothy smiled at the scarecrow. What else could she do?

“To Oz then, Dottie?” The straw-man patted himself fixing his attire.

She nodded than looked behind at Chloe to pass her fingers through the lab’s fur. “It’ll turn out.”

They continued past the field of corn. A feeling of unease prevailed throughout Dorothy’s body; especially, due to the gathering snow-like ash and wicked-red fire. In front, as ever, lay the winding amber of the yellow brick road.

(With regards to Frank L. Baum, The Wizard of Oz)


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Fiction: Dorothy – The Beginning #amwritingfiction


Credit: Saatchi Art by Simone Kilworth


The storm was a wicked one. Dorothy’s Aunt’s house creaked, and the windows clattered; her feet slipped. She flew backwards onto her bed. Her head banged against the headboard.

A dull throbbing pierced Dorothy’s temple and she whimpered. Beneath her, the house tilted, and wobbled in flight. Was this really happening?

She called for Chloe her Labrador puppy; her vision faded to black. When she awoke a peculiar brightness assaulted her from the bedroom window. She attempted to comb out her hair.

“Chloe, where’s this? Where are we?” The lab yipped.

She peered into the dresser mirror, surprised to find blood on her fingertips.

“Just a scratch I guess.” A small slash lay by her left ear.

She turned to the window and squinted against the lush green leaves and opulent flowers. Water trickled a brilliant blue in a pond nearby. She left her bedroom and opened the front door. The sun glared and the peculiar scenery didn’t sit right with her.

She gazed around realizing she was alone with Chloe in the house.

“I’ve never seen nature so strange, as if it’s fake. What do you think, Chloe?” The dog peered at her with chocolate eyes and licked her hand. She ran to lap at the water in the blue pond.

She sighed and opened the door; a pair of sparkling red slippers sat before her.

She studied her stockinged feet, somehow having lost her worn shoes. Dorothy tapped her chin and and decide to try the shoes on. As she did a jolt ran through her and she shuddered as the shock fastened the shoes to her feet. “Eek.”

She sat on the front step desperate to remove them but they wouldn’t come off.

She wiped at a tear and gasped to feel a bow in her chestnut hair, the same hue as her shoes. The sparkling color reflected in a window nearby. She combed her fingers through her hair uneasy.

“Oh my Chloe. I don’t want to wear these forever?” Both shoes and bow were fastened too tightly to remove.

She peered again at the brilliant opulence around her. A perfect little city with ultra-bright vegetation.

A shiver ran through her, a premonition. “Where is this anyways?” An aroma of burning trees and brush assaulted her nostrils.

“That’s not a good thing Chloe.” The sleek pup gazed at her and barked. She patted her awhile then watched as he went to the pond to drink.

“Ah yes, the fires.” A tiny fairy appeared beside Dorothy. Chloe barked, fur standing on end, but wouldn’t step closer. At least, Dorothy assumed the creature was a fairy; she’d only read stories of them.

The fairy sat on her skirt. “Dorothy? I’m Gertrude.” She bowed.

“Dottie is fine,” Dorothy sputtered.

“Okay, then. Dottie you’ve our thanks. Your house fell on one of the wicked witches.”

“A real witch?”

“Yes, of course.” The fairy crossed her arms. “You missed the second witch though. Miscalculation there. But, you do have her sisters shoes on — that’ll help you get the sister.”

“I want the shoes off please; they’re very tight.”

“Shouldn’t have put them on in the first place.”

Dorothy gasped. She wanted to flick the little sprite away. “Are you a good witch then. Or, a fairy?”

“A witch of sorts. Better than the one you killed and her evil sister. They both started to fire, trying to smoke us out of our homes into slavery.”

“So, you need me to kill this other witch too? I’m not good with that. Killing the first was an accident, I think.”

Gertrude laughed. “Of course, you need to kill her silly. It’s your only way home.”

“No one else can?”

“Just you I’m afraid.” Gertrude sat and stretched.

“There’s the fires too. The remaining sister is still burning Oz and it’s surrounding lands. She’s more powerful I’m afraid.”

“I see. I’m only a small girl though. What can I do?”

Gertrude tittered again. “Not that small. Besides there’s only one left. You’ll need her broom too I think, to get home I mean.”

Dorothy eyes widened. “This is much to much for me .” Chloe sniffed at the fairy and growled. Gertrude rapped her nose with the wand and the lab yawned and curled into sleep.

The tiny witch turned to Dorothy, “Dottie, you’ve little power for a witch killer, much less than most. Shouldn’t have put on the shoes if you didn’t want the job, I say.”

“I don’t. . . ”

Gertrude interrupted. “You’re not alone, Dottie. It will work out. You’ll have help; I promise.”

“Help?”

“Friends along the way.”

“Are you sure I can do this?”

“Yes, Dottie. Now, you and your furry friend better hurry. Merely follow the yellow road. It’s everywhere. It will take you where you need to go.”

Dorothy arose from her the door of her Aunt’s house. She closed it and called Chloe to her. The scent of smoke made her cough periodically.

Gertrude flew above her and tapped her wand on Dottie’s forehead. “A little blessing to help you along the way. You’re gonna need it.”With that the fairy disappeared.

Chloe barked at her as she faded into the blaring sunlight. Dorothy hesitated, but having nothing else to do followed the winding road with bricks as yellow as amber.

“Here we go Chloe.” The dog bounded in front of her, not fearing what was ahead, but Dorothy did.

(With thanks to Frank L. Baum, The Wizard of Oz.)


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Sunday Photo Fiction: Lost Dreams


Thanks to Alistair Forbes for hosting SPF.


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Credit: A Mixed Bag


Fifteen-years ago Chloe had visited the County Hotel for the first time in Aisling.

As a young woman, she loved how most of the boutiques and fine dining in the city were here. She adored the opulent movie theater and grand Opera House nearby. The area bustled with tourists and business people alike.

But Chloe’s favorite neighborhood Le Solas Na Greine, had aged. She decided this would be her last stay at the County Hotel. She noticed how much the decor of the hotel was worn. Even the blankets and sheets were threadbare and Chloe was afraid to go outside, except to catch a cab.

Now she visited a new hub of the city, the neighborhood of Lasaim. Yet, she was still upset such a lively and vibrant neighborhood as Le Solas Na Greine, was now the poorest and most frightening place in the city to be. It tainted her fondest memories of vacationing here.

She hoped in the future a new generation of politicians and citizens would revive her neighborhood. After all, didn’t the name of the city Aisling mean dream?


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