This is my first time playing Samurai Jack, so suggestions on how to improve would be appreciated. But I'm not opposed to hearing what I'm doing right either! So with that said.
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[Jack's been here only a few hours. This had to be a trick of Aku. Especially after venturing outside and finding the air near impossible to breathe. He managed to take a few steps before turning back to the barracks. He wasn't going to survive out there.
He's covered in dust and coughing. Help him out here!]
He's covered in dust and coughing. Help him out here!]
[Everyone's favorite Samurai is at it again. Training with that sword. Bother him. He needs it.]
Is there something beyond the farm?
[There is a bit of noise in the background. It sounds as though Jack is preparing for a journey.
If you're passing by his pod, you will notice that he has absolutely nothing packed. He has a simple straw hat on his head and his sword strapped to his side. His capybara insisted on following him, so there he is toddling along by Jack's side.]
[There is a bit of noise in the background. It sounds as though Jack is preparing for a journey.
If you're passing by his pod, you will notice that he has absolutely nothing packed. He has a simple straw hat on his head and his sword strapped to his side. His capybara insisted on following him, so there he is toddling along by Jack's side.]
[See Jack. See Jack's shiny new sword. See Jack shirtless and training with this new blade (it is not his father's after all so he must become acquainted with it!).
Feel free to bother Jack :D]
Feel free to bother Jack :D]
[Jack had gone to his quarters. It took him about 15 minutes to figure out how to open the door. But when he did, he opened it in hopes of seeing his belongings there. He searched high and low, but fff his sword was not there.
He's concerned about this and it shows.
He's heard people speaking out of the strange device, so he decides to give it a whirl. 2938209382039203 tries later, the audio feed cuts on.]
If my most gracious hosts can hear me, I would like my sword returned to me.
He's concerned about this and it shows.
He's heard people speaking out of the strange device, so he decides to give it a whirl. 2938209382039203 tries later, the audio feed cuts on.]
If my most gracious hosts can hear me, I would like my sword returned to me.
Comments
Rum?
Y-yes. Thank you.
What is that?
I wouldn't go out there, if I were you. Are you alright?
[He pulls out his bottle of rum and takes a…