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Phoeby's avatar

I loved the way you turned the city and the forest into two completely different truths — one dazzling and restless, the other patient and real. The final lines stayed with me most; they feel like a quiet revelation. Beautiful, atmospheric writing.

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Thank you so much for reading this piece it was a beautiful reflection on the duality of life!