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Improvement - page 7
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In the song i like, _Sun will rise_, by Bonobo (listen to it to understand; the lyrics aren't easy to get online), there's reference to how the sun will always rise and that you should mak good of what sunlight you get, even if it's only a little.
Michii's sunrise is interrupted by clouds. Hoping to make them more vivid in the coloured version but with the start of my own school the balance in my time needs to be re-struck.
Not also what happens outside on the street. When i was on holiday in Zaragoza i saw people down 5 floors below me and it was hilarious how they looked. Sure, it's like 4 hours before society time in the werewolf world, but three people are still there.
The wine bottle's supposed to say "vi-vidosto", "mente-frutto", and "Charles-Frances", but turns out you can't see the entirety of a cylynder from one angle. Meh.
I underdelivered here but IDRC what with my coffee woes (turns out i've lost my tolerance and it makes me feel like some insect curling up and dying) and having to entirely change how i sleep (i use melatonin to sleep before 00:00 on good days (rn it's 23:30 so i'll probably have another 01:00 night again ????) and on weekends i still stay up until 03:00). I'll see if i can go back to improving the amount of effort i put in. Maybe i'll do writing again because it's something harder to judge from glances.
I've been sent this long comic series called "Friday forbidden tales" and i'm finding it very interesting what with reference to the Korean language and the culture of Korea intersperced with social commentary. I'd reccomend it. Maybe my panelling will begin taking from it. What i can't really take is the inclusion of Hanja (i'd be using Hanzi though because i prefer Chinese grammar), even though i'd like to. I've dug myself into a hole with my conlang and i've been very happy staying in it.
Meh, northern spanish is a fun beast to behold anyhows. I don't usually consume much Asian media - all i've done recently was listening to stamina rose (introduced to me by Pisca's discography), that thing about getting it done because someone on discord sent me it from their youtube feed, Squid Game (which i watched when it came out so that was quite some time ago). I enjoyed each.
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