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Improvement - Page 2
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Pages, for now, take as much effort as 500-750 words do on normal-ish days. I'm sure that as i get better it'll both become easier and harder.
Writer's block won't stop me giving to the furry community. Sure, it'll make absolutely cringe dialouge i can't be arsed to make read better but at least you can undertand what a scene looks like at the same level i describe them.
Note the way the teacher is a human; they imported people to work in teaching because they provide an alternate view and in some cases, better lessons. And sure, whilst the schools and colleges are funded by the south
The dialouge is cringe. The characters are drawn poorly. IDRK though because these are the pages i want to compare page 20 to and laugh at.
I am not a good artist by any stretch of the imagination but that's ok because i've betted to myself that with regular practice, i'll become a good enough artist by the time i'm 20.
I've found a song i'm obsesisng with https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=blMqNTPgVak and i'm going to implement the lyrics into the comic in some places; listen out for something like "the sun will rise without fail (and) even if you only get a little bit, work with it". The sun has rose above Michii quite well but it's blocked for him for now.
Writer's block won't stop me giving to the furry community. Sure, it'll make absolutely cringe dialouge i can't be arsed to make read better but at least you can undertand what a scene looks like at the same level i describe them.
Note the way the teacher is a human; they imported people to work in teaching because they provide an alternate view and in some cases, better lessons. And sure, whilst the schools and colleges are funded by the south
The dialouge is cringe. The characters are drawn poorly. IDRK though because these are the pages i want to compare page 20 to and laugh at.
I am not a good artist by any stretch of the imagination but that's ok because i've betted to myself that with regular practice, i'll become a good enough artist by the time i'm 20.
I've found a song i'm obsesisng with https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=blMqNTPgVak and i'm going to implement the lyrics into the comic in some places; listen out for something like "the sun will rise without fail (and) even if you only get a little bit, work with it". The sun has rose above Michii quite well but it's blocked for him for now.
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