I, Dacien
A Story by Onyx Tao
© 2012 Onyx Tao

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Chapter Fifteen: interlude III
The silence at the Sycllan Council felt like a tangible weight. General Januisz sat stiff and rigid, staring into space. General Wolachya slumped in his chair, contributing to the general malaise with a brooding withdrawal. General Andrei simply sat, waiting for someone else - anyone else - to break the tension after General Sandor had held up the blue pearl with anything but a triumphant smile. Only Timas didn't look any different; Timas was always silent unless ordered to speak.
It was finally, after a long, long, silence that grew that much harder to break, that General Ladislas finally asked, "Is it confirmed?"
General Sandor simply waved his hand at Januisz.
"Yes. Lord Fog was ... selected. Confirmed as Patriarch. Lord Teodor of Lycaili," Januisz said heavily.
"Zachiah, I thought you said," General Ladislas said. "Or Michael."
"Yes," said General Januisz. "Obviously I and my staff were wrong."
"Obviously," said Ladislas. "I heard a rumor that there was other news. Bad news."
General Januisz's face tightened. "Yes. The roan has proved just how unstable he is. He ... made a public announcement. About us. Called us brigands. Offered an amnesty."
"Is that the worst of it?" asked Ladislas, as if he knew exactly what else had happened.
"No," said Januisz, wondering if somehow Ladislas had known. Was one of his staff secretly reporting to him? "Somehow ... he's connected us to Scylla."
The long silence was even deeper than before.
"Am I to understand," General Wolachya asked softly, "that this upstart lowblood has publically linked us to Scylla?"
"Yes," said General Januisz. "I have a mostly verbatim copy of his remarks."
"In ... in what venue?" asked Andrei.
Januisz managed, somehow, not to grit his teeth. "At his confirmation."
"Hardly good news," Ladislas said softly.
"No," said Sandor. "But ... is that the worst?"
"There is the matter of the amnesty," Januisz said. "Lord Teodor has offered an amnesty to anyone not directly involved in the attacks. Anyone but us, more or less."
"Creator's folly," swore Casimir. "Kill him. I propose we kill him immediately."
"The first attempt failed," Andrei said. "Miserably. He is now on guard."
"We got Cresphontes," Casimir said.
"Somehow, they killed the entire commando team. All of our direct action teams have repeatedly encountered stiff, and very effective resistance," Andrei said. "And we do not have an unlimited supply of commandos. In fact, of my thirty commandos, fifteen have been lost. That's half. At any time, eleven are on our outer perimeter, and another two in the inner perimeter. This leaves me with ... count them yourself, two remaining commandos that I can commit to action. Two."
"Where did Sandor ..."
"Sandor took his personal commandos, and those of Lad and Casimir," Andrei said. "Because mine were committed to Cresphontes. It seemed like the logical thing to do, Lycaili is far more remote than the House of the Lost, and my teams are used to operating so."
"Perhaps we should replace you with Sandor," Januisz said.
"Sandor was also permitted to lead his team. My teams were in a pure-commando mode. I am beginning to think that is a severe disadvantage," Andrei snapped. "Sandor, suppose you'd given only your commandos instruction, and they'd concentrated on Chelm."
"It ... would have gone worse," admitted Sandor. "I don't know how much worse, but assuming he was as effective in personal combat as he was with that knife - and I still have no clue how he threw it - we could have lost several commandos, perhaps even failed, since they were under instructions to capture, not kill."
"Could have?" pressed Andrei. "I want your honest appraisal of your expectation. Timas?"
"I expect the mission would have failed, worse than it did. I expect we would have lost some, and possibly all, of the assigned commandos," Sandor said.
"Truth."
"I will not assign another blind mission," Andrei said bluntly. "I have no qualms about losing commandos - that's what they're for, but I do have an issue with losing them and failing the mission. If you want to vote to replace me with Sandor - do so."
"I do not seek that," Sandor said quickly. "General Andrei, I have no qualms about the quality of your organization. I do not think I could do, well, significantly better."
"Truth," said the hybrid mage.
"No more, Timas," Sandor said. "We need to build up our reserve of commandos again."
"Agreed," said Ladislas. "The consensus, as I judged it previously, was that buying mongrels would not benefit us. Are we still of that opinion? Because, I was not, and I am not."
"I ... would rethink it," said Casimir.
"They're troublesome," muttered Wolachya. "And what if we buy someone attached to obsessives like Iudas and Dellios?"
"They have no reason to look at us," Andrei said. "We didn't buy Xerxes."
"Not my point," said Wolachya. "Simply that mongrels, on occasion, have persistent relatives. And, Andrei, tell me that Dellios' probing has come nowhere close to your operations, regardless of your involvement with Xerxes."
"I had nothing to do with Xerxes!" said Andrei. "Timas!"
"True."
"Again, not my point," said General Wolachya heavily. "The point was that both Iudas and Dellios are investigating the slave trade, closely. Iudas' involvement with money means that he becomes aware, eventually, of almost every sizable transaction. It flows through him, or one of his good friends, and they talk to each other. They may not mention exact dates, or exact sums, and they certainly do not discuss their clients with each other ... but they talk. And they borrow and loan between themselves."
"Should we have Timas pay a visit to Iudas?" asked Sandor.
"I ..."
"No," said Casimir. "He dines with Lord Tarragon once or twice a month. The thing is impossible."
"I was about to say, I did not think it would be a good idea," said Wolachya. "Iudas is not about to discover us, he just makes my life ... more interesting. I merely wish to avoid another one or two relatives looking for their bloodstock."
"A good thing," said Sandor. "Yes. We need to make sure we're buying ... embarassments, something the family wants to keep private."
"Then you approve of this scheme?" asked Casimir. "I thought you were uneasy at buying mongrels?"
"I ... Andrei cannot be expected to maintain the perimeters and on-call teams with so few commandos," Sandor said. "Perhaps each of the rest of us should draft ... two? ... of ours, and turn them over to Andrei. But that means we need to bring our forces up to normal at the earliest moment."
"I dislike it much," said Ladislas. "Very much. But ... I do not see any good alternatives. Two of ours to Andrei, yes, and ... seek to buy ... those who will not be missed. Andrei? Can you do that?"
"I will."
"Januisz?" asked Sandor. "You've had very little to say."
"I am concerned about this amnesty offer," Januisz said.
"What is it?"
"We do not have the details ... Lord Teodor announced it, but did not give the details," Januisz said. "I imagine the next report will have the details."
"You think one of our agents will turn on us?" asked Casimir.
"Not really, but ... think of the damage that would happen if one did," said Januisz slowly. "And if Lord Teodor were to publicly announce everything he learned?"
"Disaster," said Sandor. "It would be a disaster. What if he offers some kind of reward for intelligence on us? How good is Lycaili's intelligence, anyway?"
"Very good," said Januisz. "We have been unable to determine who runs it, nothing beyond a few likely participants. We think Teodor himself was high up, perhaps even the head. Keeping track of Teodor when he was - supposedly - at his estate was difficult. The estate is isolated and lies on unstable borders - perfect for quick travel, for a talented air mage. He could be anywhere he could twist a path.
"I thought that border was too unreliable for travel?"
"Timas?"
"It is too unreliable for multiple persons," Timas said. "If Lord Teodor wished to take only himself - then he could so so reliably. If he wished to take others, then that is difficult."
"But Teodor, Lord Fog, is said to be a brilliant mage. Perhaps he found some way around this?"
Timas shrugged. "The Master who instructed me said it could not be done."
"He wouldn't need to take anyone," Januisz said. "Undetectable, unstoppable, and he could hold the path open while he met with agents far away, or ... modified them. He has a serious reputation as a mindbender."
"Could that be how he got confirmed?" asked Casimir.
"Possibly, although ... he could have bamboozled that brown mage, Sasha, but I don't see how he could slip anything past Lord Winter," said Januisz. "We haven't been able to."
"Perhaps the mages are working together."
"Then Ianthos would have been the obvious choice," responded Januisz. "A violet would be far less conspicuous than a roan."
"And why would his first act be to imprison Xavien Lord Green?" asked Ladislas.
Januisz looked up sharply. "Did I mention that?"
"You should have," Ladislas said. "It seems like information we should have."
"I will have the report copied for you, General Ladislas."
"And I am also concerned about our agents in Lycaili," Ladislas said. "Perhaps we should withdraw them."
"There is no need. They are all loyal. Timas attests to them," said Januisz.
"They must guess we have agents," said Ladislas. "And they will hunt for them."
"They will find nothing," said Januisz. "They have impeccable cover, and their reports are oral to my factor in Venrir."
"No," said Ladislas. "I think we should withdraw completely from Venrir, Lycaili, and Ouroubouros. At the very least, Lycaili. They have surprised us unpleasantly over and over, and if they take one of our agents alive ... we lose much."
"They are safe," insisted Januisz. "And we must have eyes if we are to know how to attack."
"Why must we attack?" asked Ladislas. "Why must we continue this confrontation?"
"They started it," said Wolachya.
"We don't know that," said Ladislas. "And even if we did ... so what? Let us withdraw for a hundred, two hundred years."
"Lycaili sits on the gate to human lands! We must have that gate!"
Ladislas shook his head. "Our current course will not gain it for us, that is more than reason to change course."
"And I suppose you have a plan?"
"As a matter of fact ... yes. We do." Ladislas indicated the other two Pristine minotaurs. "Ungoliant and Tepes want that access every bit as much as we do. Ungoliant is willing to ban commandos, but ... they will want something for it. And so will Tepes."
"Mog Ford, you mean, and Howling Pass," said Casimir. "If Lord Teodor's attention is on us, then ... he might be willing to offer that, if he thinks it hurts us." The ebon minotaur turned to Januisz. "Jan, it's ... not a bad strategy. And it gets us out."
Januisz just looked at Casimir.
"I won't vote against you, Jan, but I think ... I think it's worth considering."
"But we will still need eyes in Lycaili," Januisz said. "Unless you can replace them."
"My agent returned a little after your report came," Ladislas said. "I intend to retire that agent."
"Permanently?" asked Wolachya, sounding interested.
"He is not available for your training programs," Ladislas said coldly. "He is a pureblood, bloodstock, and loyal to our clan."
"Perhaps he would volunteer," said Wolachya. "For the good of the clan. Since he's bloodstock we could keep him to duties inside the inner perimeter."
"No," said Sandor, opening his mouth a moment before Andrei. The last Pristine general nodded to Sandor, who continued. "We surrendered Dusan because there was reason. I think it is not we who owe you a candidate. Perhaps ... perhaps the fellow who spilled the soup. And failed to report it. Lubor, wasn't it?"
"Lubor is bloodstock," growled Casimir. "And he did not spill soup, a human stumbled over him. He was given training too advanced for him. We cannot penalize him for his Master's error."
"We can keep him inside the perimeter," Andrei said with a smile. "And ... remind me, again, precisely whose error Dusan was converted for?"
"We had to, to show our agents that we cannot tolerate ..."
"Errors? For any reason? Such as spilling soup? Which is what his error led to, I point out." interrupted Andrei. "Such as spilling soup? And how exactly was Lubor being trained when he was spying on Iudas? When he was caught?"
"He wasn't caught!"
"They knew he was there,"
"They supposed it," Wolachya said. "He was not directly detected."
"Well, and he didn't have to be," said Andrei, angrily. "Lubor should be converted. He should have been converted when you discovered he'd lied about his mission going smoothly."
"He thought it had!" Casimir said.
"Which only goes to show how poor at thinking he is," said Andrei. "He should leave the thinking to those more capable of it. Dusan showed a great deal of promise, but Sandor and Ladislas agreed that we could not let something like that pass. But an Ebon seems to get a free pass, and ..."
"It is NOT because he's Ebon!" shouted Casimir.
"Oh? Should I ask Timas to verify that?" said Andrei coldly.
"This is not an argument we should be having," said Januisz. "Please. Sandor?"
"I agree," said Sandor. "Move on."
"Vote," said Andrei. "I vote we continue this discussion."
"No. No good will come of it," said Casimir.
Januisz shook his head, and then said, "No."
Ladislas was silent, and then said, deliberately, "Continue the discussion, and then turned to stare at Sandor.
Sandor shrugged, unwilling to override the other two Pristine generals. "Continue. I am sorry,"
"Not sorry enough to quash the topic," said Casimir.
"Cas," and Januisz laid a hand on the other Ebon's shoulder. "They do have a point."
"This is different!"
"In that Lubor is your current bedwarmer?" asked Andrei.
"He's bloodstock," said Casimir. "Dusan wasn't. That's the difference."
"We need commandos," Ladislas said. "And he can continue to be bloodstock, after he's converted."
"We don't convert bloodstock," said Casimir.
"We don't often convert bloodstock," said Sandor. "We have."
Januisz looked at Sandor. "We have, but, could I, ask, as a favor, a personal favor, from you to me, that we put this discussion off until our next council? Just ... give us some time?"
"So that you can assign your precious Lubor out-perimeter, so he is conveniently unavailable?" asked Andrei.
"Let him be confined as if he were awaiting conversion, and we can move on," said Ladislas. "That is as much compromise as I feel like offering, today."
"Would that be acceptable?"
"No," said Casimir. "Absolutely not."
"It would," said Januisz, looking away.
"Jan!"
"It will be acceptable," said Wolachya, slowly. "Absent a decision, he will be freed, of course. All we are granting is time. We are not agreeing to convert him."
"Yes. Fine. Nor not to," agreed Andrei. "That's what tabling the discussion means."
"That would be ... five to one. Lubor to be confined," Sandor said, "to be released after our next council." The Pristine general looked around the table, but nobody added anything. Casimir crossed his arms and stared angrily at Andrei, who returned only a bland look.
"I believe we'd decided to step down our campaign in Lycaili, and press for access through Ungoliant and Tepes?" asked Sandor.
"Yes," said Januisz, and Wolachya nodded.
"Good. And we'd direct Andrei to see if he can find some low-profile bulls to acquire for conversion," said Sandor.
"Did we decide that?" asked Januisz. "I don't remember a consensus."
"Vote, then," said Sandor.
Januisz shook his head, and then said, "I don't like it, but ... yes."
"Yes," said Ladislas, simply.
"Yes," said Wolachya. "But low profile. I don't want anyone coming after them!"
"Yes," said Andrei.
"No," said Casimir.
Sandor sighed. "No, although it hardly seems worth voting. Andrei, you may proceed."
"I have a question," said Ladislas. "For General Januisz."
"Of course," said Januisz.
"I know I suggested pulling your agent - or agents - from Lycaili," said Ladislas. "But if you're not going to do that, we need to know how they made the Scylla connection."
Januisz nodded. "I've already instructed them to find out, and I suspect my agent is already working on that."
"Does it matter?" asked Sandor. "I mean, if they've made the connection, it's a little late."
"It matters," said Januisz. "We need to know what happened, why they know - and how much they know. They obviously don't know where to find us, or they never would have sent anyone to the House."
"So what do they know? I doubt even a wild blade like Lord Teodor would reveal everything he knew," Januisz said.
"We need to find out more about him, too."
"I've instructed our agents in Ungoliant and Tepes to get their information on him." Januisz said. "We'll have all the information we could want in a few days."
"Good," said Sandor. "It seems to me that we've exhausted the potential for useful discussion, so if there is nothing else?"
"Yes," said Casimir. "One thing. What about Lord Teodor's son?"
All of them looked at Timas for a moment, and then five of them looked back at Casimir.
"What about him?" asked Sandor.
"Perhaps he would be leverage, the way we'd thought Bryant might be?"
The six of them looked at Timas, for a long moment, before General Sandor asked the question. "Timas? Did you wipe the roan hybrid already?"
"Yes," said Timas.
This time, none of them broke the silence.

Always happy to see a new chapter. Read it quickly before bed, but like all of your stuff it needs gone over with a fine toothed comb to get a good grasp of it. (not an insult, just that there are lots of cogs turning in the complex Rube Goldberg device of the Cold Blood Universe, which is a major portion of it's charm)
Rube Goldberg? I hope it's not [i]quite[/i] that contrived ...
See my response to Kokushi for a quick [i]dramatis personae[/i].
Cheers,
Onyx Tao[/color]
Hmmm...now I think of it, is it extremely important that Dacien has all of his old memories? Just thought of Chelm because it was mentioned. Chelm only remembered being a Minotaur.
I'm half lost in this chapter, really. Mainly because I'm bad at remembering the names of these people in this chapter. Dusan was mentioned again...though, I'm not sure if you did that on purpose.
Cheers.
Sandor, Andrei, Ladislas -- the three Pristine generals, representing the remaining pure Pristine bloodlines of Scylla.
Casimir, Wolachya, Januisz -- the three Ebon generals, representing the remaining pure Ebon bloodlines of Scylla.
By fiat, they also 'represent' the remaining White, Black, and Brown bloodlines, but because these are lesser lines, they don't get representation on the Council. (That is a pity, because they might inject some sanity into the proceedings. An odd number of additional councilors would also end the perennial stalemates of the Scyllan Directorate.)
Dusan was the unfortunate Pristine held responsible for the initial raid on Lord Green's estate.
Cheers,
Onyx Tao[/color]
Do you know, I answered all the questions [i]except[/i] the one I started out to answer? That first one, about Timas and Dacien.
Timas was accurate; he did go in and strip out Dacien's memory. He needs to go in and do it again, to get what he missed the first time, but that's what he generally has to do, to strip enough memory and experience out to make effective, mindless, obedient killing machines.
Cheers,
Onyx Tao[/color]
I don't suppose Teoder will be able to - or at least try to - heal Dacien, after Dacien's been completely wiped clean...or, although it may not be the most noble thing to be or say, I do suspect Lord Green could consider it as a option - that it may be a effective way to control someone who holds the power as danger as Dacien's. He is worried about Dacien's royalty.
I wonder what Sasha will do though...
Dacien is now fitting in to the category of victim, so Teodor has some reason other than Dacien's power or being Teodor's son, to argue keeping Dacien alive. Right?
Since if Dapple is to be keep alive. Or Byrant. Or Dusan, at this point.
Timas is not free to be anyone's friend; he is simply unfree, period.
The extent of the damage to Dacien is ... spoiler material, so I must regrettably decline to discuss this point :-(
Dacien's magery remains, and it is that practical point that makes him 'dangerous', regardless of what else has been done to him.
Cheers,
Onyx Tao[/color]
Just as how they are trying to decide on what to do with exists Ninjas.
Dacien's power over magic represents completely new territory. A side-effect of his power is that he can enable magic in others. A [i]side-effect[/i]! What other impossible things can he do?
And what sort of destabilizing effect will / can he have on society at large? That's what Teodor was afraid of -- a clan that can have as many mages as they trust, or more, would be pretty much unstoppable, and could -- would -- lead to internecine clan warfare to prevent such an advantage from materializing.
Because there is a window, between Dacien's triggering magery, and that individual becoming a mage, there is a window where some clan attempting to become uber-powerful would remain vulnerable to a concerted strike by others, and it [i]would[/i] happen. No clan trusts other clans to that extent.
In fact, Teodor is terrified that if this particular power of Dacien's is uncovered, it will lead to warfare [i]regardless of what he (Teodor) does.[/i]
It's a far greater threat than the annoyance (although they are extraordinarily annyoning) of ninja.
Cheers,
Onyx Tao[/color]
Essentially the same reasons States have wanted land since the beginning of time. The nub that is Scylla is small, no more than a hundred or so bloodstock (the others, per Scyllan custom, don't count) and their land holdings are tiny, a small, pocket universe that was used as a forward observation point. Although the Creators left spells to open up more universes (each time a 'border' is referred to, it's a crossing point between two universes) and terraform them -- those spells are now classed as 'war magic', forbidden by treaty, fragmented, kept secret by the clans that possess them, and although their original use is remembered, nobody quite knows what spells and in what order they are needed to create another universe. A great deal of research and experimentation would be needed to restore that capability to minotaur society.
Scylla wants to seize large chunks of human land, enslave the humans, restore themselves as a clan, and rule the multiverse. I don't think they put it that way to themselves, but ... that's what they [i]want[/i]. That these desires are, to put it mildly, delusional, doesn't enter the picture for them. They don't have the minotaur-power to hold the large lands they'd need, much less the military or mage-power to dominate the other minotaur clans. But they dream evil dreams, nevertheless ...
Cheers,
Onyx Tao[/color]
Nobody is a villain in his own story. If Sandor or Casimir were telling the story, it would be a thrilling tale of resistance to the crushing domination of Xarbydis, capped by a cowardly attack to destroy them. After tremendous heroism by the great hero Dashid (who was Ebon, according to Casimir, and Pristine, according to Sandor) the shattered remnants of Scylla found shelter and began to regroup, and planned to reclaim their honor and status as a clan ...
What neither would tell you -- because they do not know -- is that Dashid (who was roan ;-) ) [i]would not recognize Scylla today[/i]. Nor would most of the Scyllans from that day. Their goals and methods have warped and twisted and under successive generations of totalitarian, ends-focused leadership, transformed into the sorry pack of scoundrels that you see.
They are blinded and crippled by their ideology.
Cheers,
Onyx Tao[/color]
Another great chapter still enjoing the rising action of this story. The amont of detail you put into writting makes your work a joy to read.
Peace
Stonecold
[i]blush[/i]. Thank you! I appreciate it, very much!
Cheers,
Onyx Tao[/color]
Haven't you heard that all truly stupendous fuck-ups are [i]done by committee?[/i]
At least, I [i]hope[/i] the incompetence to which you refer is the Scyllan Directorate. :-)
Cheers,
Onyx Tao[/color]
great job, can't wait until the next chapter.
Stay golden
Stoner
Thank you!
Cheers,
Onyx Tao
Well, now I remember why I love your writing so much. I read this yesterday, but failed to comment because "reading yesterday" consisted of staying up until four in the morning to read nearly all of 'I, Dacien' to reorientate myself. So, forgive me if my comments are not specifically about this chapter, I don't want to post each on the chapter it's relevant to.
Dacien's situatuation is quite...interesting. I find myself wondering how far in the training he'll go before being pulled away, or if perhaps he'll complete it. I also wonder how his Mage abilities are going to affect his Tempus speed. If I remember correctly from the first 'Cold Blood' series, Dacien did something with the time resistance when they carried him in Tempus. If that phenomenon results in him being able to accelerate his Tempus abilities, it would be devastating if he completed the conditioning as well.
As Dacien is having his memories removed, I'm sort of surprised that he's still thinking rationally. I might have a misconception, but I thought that ninja, or those with wiped minds, wouldn't have the types of thoughts that Dacien is still having. Although, now that I think about it, Dapple seems to be able to think clearly enough, although it seems at odds with the other ninja's inability to adapt to changing circumstances.
Teodor being selected as Patriarch...wasn't entirely unexpected, actually. Although my thoughts as the announcement got closer were more to the effect of: "Wouldn't it be funny if..."etc.
Poor Teodor. One of his sons is mortally wounded, and it sounds doubtful if he'll recover, and the other is captured and is now a threat that needs to be neutralized. Rough few days for him. It seems that ever since Dacien came into his life, his quiet peace that he enjoyed has gone out the window.
I hope Zebra hasn't been forgotten with all that's happened.
Looks like the council is regreting their haste in wiping Dacien's mind.
As a closing comment, reading this had now made me want to go and re-read the beginning of it all...*growls* there goes the next twelve hours...
Oh, and I hope you don't leave us wondering about Dacien's condition for too long!
Thank you! Comments such as these are truly a pleasure to read. There are few higher complements an author can receive then someone's saying 'oh, I just had to reread everything', and one of those higher complements is [b]definitely[/b] 'oh, I have to go reread it again'!
I won't discuss future events, other than to say the point of this novel is Dacien's coming-of-age, so to speak. The previous story was his induction, in this one, Dacien goes from principally acted-upon to principle actor, and so events lead to that.
The mindwiping process is not strictly required for the creation of ninja, it just makes the process easier. And (I think I may have addressed this in a previous comment) Dacien posed some special problems for Timas. First, Timas wants to avoid admitting that Dacien is particularly different -- but he [b]is[/b] different. Because he has such limited exposure to minotaur etiquette, protocol, and socialization, the kind of massive excision that Timas generally performs would wipe everything away, and he'd revert to his human / feral expectations. That would give the entire game away, so instead Timas made many, many, many small excisions. This is both why Dacien retains most of his personality (but not specific memories), and why it's taking so long for Dacien's mind to stabilize (heal). Ordinarily, Timas will go in two or three times, wiping memories away each time. For Dacien, Timas had to go in much more carefully, and to finish the job, will need to go in several more times.
Dapple ... the circumstances around Dapple and Kanail's situation is unusual. I'm not sure it will ever come out in the story, since few bulls ever knew much of the details besides their father, but I have hopes of working it in. Perhaps the Iudas-Dellios-Xerxes-Travis storyline will lead me there eventually (it does intersect).
I made a small, or not so small, plotting error. I started the Socks/Dellios plotline too late; Socks should have been introduced much, much earlier. Socks intersects the main plotline -- Dacien's -- at a very specific point, and he may be two or even three chapters from being able to do that. So we will have to see a lot more of Socks before Dacien can advance.
And again, thank you for your words. It is comments like these that are part of the true pleasure I take from putting these stories up!
Cheers,
Onyx Tao[/color]
Don't get me wrong, the ability to empower and weaken, to shape and alter magic both while it's being crafted and after it has it has been cast is extraordinary in and of itself, but, as broad a spectrum as it covers, does not stop it from being very circumstantial and specific. How do you empower magic that isn't there? How do modify magic that isn't present? The answer is that you can't. Which is why Dacien can do nary a thing against the mundane and simple. Ultimately, Dacien needs magic to be able to use his gifts effectively.
But that's still not quite right. It explains some parts of the picture, but not all of it. There's more to it than that.
During the happenings of Cold Blood, Dacien was unable to tell the difference between fire and water magic. It's fair to say he has an affinity to neither. Similarly, Xavien removed any inklings of Dacien being and earth mage, and Sasha has done the same with air magic. So that really only leaves him with his affinity for magic.
But again,that's not all to there is to it, since there have been weird occurrences around our dear Dacien. Such as his ability to awaken a person's magic, or his ability to 'shroud' people while they're in tempus, or, even, his unintentional amplification of the transformation magic that Teodor has been using on him. Magic that Lycaili called Creator Magic.
So were does that leave us? We know that Dacien has a fair shot at being to use Creator Magic, which, as I understand it, isn't quite the same kind of magic that mages normally use. Would it be strange if I said that all of the 'weird occurrences' that have happened to Dacien could be explained by him unknowingly using (or influencing) creator magic? I don't think so, but feel free to correct me if I'm wrong.
Either way, it's still horribly interesting to think about, and I'm always waiting to see what Dacien, the individual capable of making his own choices, will react to the circumstances he finds himself in. His actions, and what he can do with magic, interests me more than anything else.
Edit:
I probably could have been clearer when I wrote this. I'm well aware that Dacien's affinity is magic. I understand that it goes beyond just being good with magic and that you can't quite tell me (or anyone else) more because that would ruin the story. What I probably should have asked (because I tend to ask questions instead of commenting) was something along the lines of "Is Dacien's magic more practical to have on hand than another mage?'
I'm sorry for any confusion I might've caused you :P
Dacien's magic is more useful in conjunction with another mage. He can learn and use spells, but he has no intuitive knowledge about what they do (most mages [i]do[/i] have such intuition). So he will need to memorize, carefully, what effects go with what patterns.
We will, I promise, see more of the amazing things Dacien can do (and there are some quite astounding things ...) but, obviously, not quite yet :-)
Cheers,
Onyx Tao[/color]
I've got some ideas of where this will go, but I won't raise my hopes unnecessarily. Compliments on Dacien figuring out a way to keep some level of identity or goal though 'meta' thinking by the way.
I hope to see more of this story, and applaud you for carrying it this far already =)
Wait, what am I gonna read now?... t.t
Eight days? It took me four years to write ... albeit, not the entirety of that time. There were long stretches wasted on foolish things like food, shelter, health, and [i]Heroes of Might and Magic V[/i].
But I will finish it, and quite possibly this year :-)
If you have not already encountered Draugr, Tank Jaeger, FireFromHeaven, or NoisyBob, you might wish to do so.
Cheers,
Onyx Tao[/color]
And thank you for the suggestions, though I am finding difficulty in locating "Draugr."
Friendly greeting,
Domino
You're welcome. Try http://draugr.sofurry.com/ for Draugr's writing.
Cheers,
Onyx Tao[/color]