I, Dacien
A Story by Onyx Tao
Copyright 2010
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Chapter Five
Inquisition
Colonel-Junior Dusan Scylla of the Raised Hand Regiment walked forward between two silent commando adepts to either side of him, and wondered. He knew his mission had failed; he knew that he, and he alone, bore that responsibility for failing his Clan, and for losing four commandos and succeeding only in removing a tertiary target. He still didn't know what had happened. He had given his commandos their orders, made certain they understood them, and retreated immediately to await their post-mission report. Except, of course, there had been no post-mission report. Instead of two dead Lycaili mages, found dead with a crippled wolven, all four commandos had been neutralized. Neither mage had been slain. Lord Green's Master of Time had been injured — not killed, merely injured — and only Lord Green's Master of Guard had been killed, Havel and Lucas. Both had held the formal rank of tempus master, and even a single commando should have been able to deal with them. Lord Green himself was not formally master-grade, but … Dusan had spent the long, slow trip back home wondering if perhaps Lord Green was a grandmaster. But even a grandmaster should not have survived an attack by a team of four adepts. No non-adept could match an adept at tempus , it was impossible.
Impossible or not, that's the only thing that could have happened. If Havel or Lucas had been grandmaster level, they would have held the rank. It was only Xavien, already a warlord, a general, a master magician, and a lord mage as well, who would have been indifferent enough to his skill not to formally take the title. Except … when had someone as busy as Xavien Lord Green managed to train himself to grandmaster levels? And how had even a grandmaster dealt with four adepts? When he'd received his orders, he'd thought assigning four adepts was ridiculous; a single adept could have dealt with every person in the house. Or at least, should have been able to deal with everyone in the house.
Colonel Dusan was certain that whatever had happened, it had not been magic. No mage had ever been able to stop an adept. Except … something had stopped four adepts, and try as he might, he did not see how it could have been tempus. Or maybe it wasn't magic, and it wasn't tempus , but something else? Something like, oh, those magic weapons Ouroborous had encountered? He'd heard only the vaguest rumors about them, but something that could allow humans to eliminate a force of tempus initiates — now, that seemed more likely to him.
Only he doubted that the Six Generals would see it that way. When he'd arrived back, and started his report to General Januisz, he'd gotten through the quick report only to have the General summon his own, personal commandos and have him placed in solitary confinement. Within fifteen minutes, two more commandos had appeared, bearing General Sandor's brands, and within an hour, there were exactly twelve commandos, undoubtedly all adepts, guarding him. Two from each of the Six. They were relieved every six hours, replaced with another set of silent minotaur tempus adepts — and although Dusan was a tempus master himself, he had no illusions about what might happen in a confrontation between himself and any of those adepts.
He'd been kept in solitary confinement for a surprisingly long time. He didn't think that was particularly good, either. Obviously, something had gone wrong, very wrong, above and beyond the disaster of his mission. He just wished he knew what it was.
He and his silent escort finally reached their destination: a small chamber, deep below the fortress. There were six chairs, in a half-circle: General Januisz, General Casimir, General Walochya, General Sandor, General Ladislas, and General Andrei. All purebloods, pure ebon bloodline and pure white bloodlines, the bloodlines of war. Dusan's bloodline was clean white, but it didn't have the pedigree that could have brought him to the Six. An ebon-white hybrid sat to one side, and Dusan wondered why. Generally, hybrids were trained as adepts, commandos and operatives or just slaves, if they failed their adept training and survived.
“Colonel Dusan," General Januisz said quietly. “I would like you to give the report you gave me to all of us. Leave nothing out. We require the truth, Colonel. All of it."
“Yes, Sir. I received your orders from the courier, who brought three commandos with …"
“Stop," said General Sandor. “The courier — who was it?"
“Major Oleg, Sir."
“How were the orders delivered?" Sandor asked.
“Verbally."
“With what authentication?" asked General Casimir.
“That of General Januisz, your own, and General Walochya's, Sir."
Those were all three of the ebon generals, and General Sandor glanced back at the hybrid.
“Truth," the hybrid said.
“All three," said General Sandor. “Curious."
“Sir, that was enough to authorize the mission."
“Which was?" asked General Ladislas. “The exact orders, if you please."
“'Teodor Lord Fog Lycaili would be arriving within forty-eight hours at the house of Xavien Lord Green. Neutralize Teodor and Xavien as primary targets. Traveling with Teodor is Benelaus Ouroborous; consider him a secondary target. There is a wolven on the grounds; consider him a tertiary target. Deal with them, and return to base for debriefing.'" Dusan quoted.
“That was all?" General Januisz asked.
“Yes, Sir. I was traveling as a gem merchant, with one commando. Major Oleg brought me my orders, traveling as a cloth merchant."
“Did you see Major Oleg after that?" asked General Ladislas.
“No Sir, I did not." Dusan waited for a moment, and then continued. “After Major Oleg left, I proceeded to Winegarden Vale — instructing the commandos to remain out of sight. I contacted a local jeweler to keep my cover intact, and scouted House Green. It seemed fairly open, and the wolven was easy to locate. I waited for the other targets to arrive, and when they did, I gave the commandos their orders. Wait twenty-four hours, wait until the primary targets are together, eliminate the wolven, the primaries, and the secondaries. Rejoin me at our rendezvous site." Dusan sighed. “I don't know what went wrong, but I was waiting for nearly two days before I found out just how poorly the operation went." He felt the stares of the bulls around around him. “I scouted House Green with the commandos personally . Havel — the Master of Guard — didn't notice us. Xavien didn't notice us! I drew up commands, orders, briefed the commandos — it should have gone like clockwork."
“No," said General Sandor. “It didn't. We know a little more about that than you do, I think." He glanced back at the hybrid.
“Truth, all truth."
“I … respectfully, I would like to know what happened, Sir," Dusan said.
The generals glanced at each other, and finally General Walochya nodded. “We're not sure yet. We believe Lord Green was involved; it may be that your scouting tipped him off."
“Sir, I followed standard procedure. There was no sign, Sir, none ."
“Nevertheless," General Walochya said. “Lycaili, of course, identified the commandos as ninja , and has surrounded their mages and Patriarch with a fairly impressive guard."
“May I know why the Lords were targets?"
“It might be because Lord Green and Lord Fog appear to have developed a way to trigger a mage-transformation," General Walochya said softly.
Dusan blinked. Might ? “Sir?"
“That's our best guess, in case," General Sandor said.
“Guess? Sir?"
“The problem, Colonel," said General Januisz heavily, “is that neither I, nor General Walochya, nor General Casimir authorized your mission."
“Sir? But …" Dusan paused. “Sir, all the authentication words were there!"
“Truth," called out the hybrid.
“So it appears. But I did not send mine to you, and I have never spoken those words aloud, nor written them down, nor communicated them in any way save to you, and never intended or allowed, by accident or purpose, that they reach you for the mission your describe, or any other mission," General Januisz said.
“Truth," the hybrid said again.
General Casimir nodded. “And that goes for me. I have not sent you the code we agreed on, nor shared it with any person living or dead at any time, and never intended to activate you on purpose or accident for this mission or any other."
“Truth," the hybrid said.
“You've already heard my affirmation," General Walochya said quietly. “Nor I. Although I wonder if perhaps this might not be some plot of our counterparts. You've been quiet Andrei; I begin think you might know something."
The white minotaur bristled just as the hybrid called out “False."
“Ah," said Walochya. “Just making sure Timas was paying attention. I don't think that, actually. But I do think that the only other person who knew those codes — a person who knew all of them, as a matter of fact, was you , Colonel Dusan."
Dusan nodded. “Yes, Sir. I have never divulged them, I have never written them down, shared them with any person. I've tried not to even think about them, never give a hint, nothing, Sir. Sirs."
“Truth."
“So you believed your mission came from us?"
“Yes, Sir."
“Timas?"
“Truth," the hybrid said.
“From all of us; not a rogue mission?" asked Sandor.
“Sir, I serve my Clan, my entire Clan."
“Truth."
“Answer the question as I asked it, Dusan," said Sandor.
“Sir, I believed the mission came from the Clan as a whole, and was not an attempt to plot on behalf of or against any particular bloodline."
“Truth."
“And you've never planned to advance your bloodline at the expense of ours," asked General Sandor disbelievingly.
“Stop!" interrupted General Casimir. “This is exactly the kind of questioning that we agreed would be off limits."
“I have not," Dusan said loudly. “I have never favored or disfavored any pureblooded minotaur for his bloodline."
“Truth," said Timas, actually sounding a little surprised.
“That will do," said General Januisz. “Colonel, do not answer any further questions along that line."
“It had to be asked," Casimir said.
“It did not have to be answered," Wolochya said. “Colonel, I thank you for your service to our clan, in the best traditions of our blood."
“This changes nothing," General Andrei said, speaking at last. “The problem is the same. Someone has used us — someone who knows this mage-creation secret, someone who attempted to remove it from Lycaili, and fixate attention on us."
“How do you know they know the secret?" asked Casimir. “You deduce that from their targeting Lords Fog and Green. But if they wanted nobody to have the secret?"
“No. Such idealism is at odds with their demonstrated powers of reconnaissance," said General Andrei. “I think we must assume the worst. An enemy who knows everything about us, and will soon have as many mages as we have commandos." Andrei grimaced. “Does that put anyone in mind of … a possible enemy?"
The room was quiet as the generals considered this.
“No," General Sandor said. “We would have heard a hint, a suggestion, something if they were still around."
“I think we just did," General Andrei replied coolly. “Our course is clear. We, too, must acquire this ritual, and if Lords Fog and Green are too well guarded, well, we know that two apprentices were made, and we know where one of them will be in about eight days. And conveniently close to us, at that." He looked around at the dubious faces of the other generals. “Unless there's a better suggestion?"
General Januisz nodded. “We could open negotiations with Lycaili."
“A better suggestion, not an idiotic one," General Andrei said. “They know about ninja. Nothing else, and we are in no danger."
General Januisz looked around the room, and then nodded. “Very well. That just leaves one thing. Colonel Dusan?"
“Sir?"
“This is, as you can imagine, rather sensitive information."
“Yes, Sir. I won't breathe a word, Sir."
“I know you won't, Colonel, and I'd like to thank you."
“Sir? It's my duty."
General Januisz nodded, and gestured. “To keep a secret? Yes it is." Powerful arms locked around Colonel Dusan, as a sudden feeling of dread shot through him. “I'm not thanking you for that. I'm thanking you for volunteering to join the commandos."
I find it interesting that the wolven slave master was a minor target, or at least was suggested as such. The Wolven centric chapters in the previous arc gave the impression he was a more major target. It's interesting to see that the Major was so easily and thoroughly tricked like that, the minotaurs know telepathy exists. Pulling a series of code words out of somebody's head is a real threat. I wonder if that's been used against them in the past.
I also find it interesting that they mistook Dapple for his former master. That will almost certainly come back to haunt them.
Now all we need is some minotaur loving. :)
Hi Teiran —
They don't know about Dapple yet. They don't know how Teodor and Xavien escaped. They had to pull in all of their intelligence gathering activities, which were never very strong in Lycaili to begin with (it's not an interest of theirs, and they think of Lycaili as a bunch of sissy pacifists anyway). When they find out about him, and they will find that out, they will have conniptions, especially when they realize Kanail is there, too.
Colonel Dusan is now the only witness to a serious fiasco by the Scyllan governing council; the council not only lost control of four adepts (not acceptable) but lost all four of those adepts, and got snookered into a war by their most hated enemies of all time — Xarbydis (or so they think. It might be Xarbydis. It might be someone else. Ah ahm not saying!)
And yes, Colonel Dusan, for all intents and purposes, will soon cease to exist, allowing the council to pin the blame for whatever went wrong on him. He may even survive training; he has the tempus ability to become an adept …
Cheers,
Onyx Tao
Hi Sanmer —
As it turns out, there are a number of different players at work, none of whom have perfect situational information, and some of whom have made decidedly suboptimal decisions.
But yes, Senior of Redding Clave mindfucked a number of Scyllan operatives. Pulling codewords out of someone's mind would be very difficult for anyone other than a handful of air-affined mages, and the truly gifted and practiced ones at that. Teodor, for example, is air-affined, but he views mindbending with such distaste that he practices it only when he absolutely has no other choice. It's not something he's good at.
Cheers,
Onyx Tao
MY thoughts are that the three minotaurs DID order the hit. That is easy enough to believe with the "mage ritual threat". Then upon the failure the cackling crazy minotaur strips them of their memories ordering the hit and watches as hilarity ensues. My big reason for this is the truthsayer hybrid. I feel the wolven telepathy way would have been more difficult to disguise from the truthsayer somehow.
Also you'd have to hijack a courier. Easy for both races. One specializes in control, the other HAPPENS to be minotaurs, who tend to blend in quite well with... MINOTAURS.
Occam's razor though says I'm horribly horribly wrong and silly and that there's a simpler more elegant solution.
Hi ReadEragon —
Sometimes mindbending is easy to see, and sometimes it is not. With luck, Sasha may give some details to his apprentice, explaining what is and is not possible with that very specialized art.
I will say that, in general, the wolven are much, much better at it than minotaurs.
Cheers,
Onyx Tao
They're everywhere
Everywhere. Yes! Under the floor boards, behind the ornamental plants, lurking in the heating ducts, crouched behind the last shelf in the pantry ... Everywhere!
Hi Crazy One —
That's an interesting question. I can, in the sense that it's totally within my CSS mojo, but the font size is set to the default size for some really good reasons. There's no way for me to pick an absolute size that will be good for everyone, so I set relative sizes, and the story text is at 100%. I don't think setting it larger or smaller is a good idea.
Most browsers use [CTRL][+] to increase the page sizing. Alternately, you can go into your browser options and increase the default font size. As another option, there's a PDF at FurAffinity (user onyxtao) that should be readable. Failing everything else, I'd be happy to send you the word processor file (it's a .odt, Open Document Text, format. Older versions of MS-Word may not read it) if you PM me your email address.
I hope one of these suggestions works for you. Setting the default text size to something other than normal is just not a good thing for me to do.
Cheers,
Onyx Tao
"Knowing where the trap is - that is the first step in evading it. This is like single combat, Son, only on a larger scale - a feint within a feint within a feint... seemingly without end."
Hi Noisy Bob —
Oh, there are still a few mysteries left, I trust. But we are seeing most of the players at this point.
Cheers,
Onyx Tao
Hi Crazy one —
I didn't even know the PlayStation Portable had a browser …
I'm being read on a PSP. That's … that's … strangely cool! I mean, it shoudn't really matter to me what sort of browser is being used, or what the platform is, but … it seems to, strangely enough. I'm curious, how did you hack it?
And thank you for letting me know!
Cheers,
Onyx Tao
Hi Beefy the Bull —
It seemed like enough curtain had been pulled back on the Scyllans and that they were major enough plot widget thangies that a few lines spent clarifying just what the heck they were doing would be not without some value for even the casual reader.
Cheers,
Onyx Tao
Hi BtB —
I had to spend a little setup time getting everyone in place; if I'd had the full plot of this before I finished Cold Blood then I could have done some of it in the last chapters, but …
But I didn't, and so I needed to set things up. And then I needed to give a hint as to just what was happening on the side of the Bad Guys.
And now I've got it set up!
Cheers,
Onyx Tao
These Scyllans seems cold and unpleasant - much as I love minotaurs, I would probably not enjoy the company of these guys.
Reflecting on ReadEragon's thoughts in the comment above, I must say I am still thinking that Wolvens are the ones behind this.
I guess it's entertaining for you as the writer to see us readers speculate and ponder, eh?
I don't think it is good for Lycaili to get the attention of clans like Scylla and Ungoliant, which is now happening. But I am sure that's one of the main points within this story.
Well, this chapter gave me chills down my spine, just like some good movies manage to do now and then. Most enjoyable, like all of your writing!
Hi Svansfall —
Always glad to hear from you!
Some minotaurs are, indeed, nicer than others. The Scyllans are a fairly authoritarian and cheerless lot who are distrustful of each other and the world at large, a world-view that has intensified through the generations. They didn't start out quite this bad, but paranoia is paranoia is paranoia and without the grounding effect of reality — and they have deliberately disconnected themselves — paranoia has nothing to feed on but itself.
There are, as I told ReadEragon, a number of actors, all with incomplete information informing their deeds. Although I will say that the Scyllan worldview is enough on its own to elicit suboptimal responses.
Cheers
Onyx Tao
Wow. I have trouble imagining myself reading anything on such a small screen ... an iPad, maybe, but anything much smaller than that just doesn't seem like a good interface to me.
I wonder what other non-traditional displays I've been read on ... I know about a Kindle for certain :-)
Cheers,
OT
It's good to know, for some strange reason! Thank you for telling me.
Cheers,
OT
Cheers
OT
Always a BIG fan of the Cold Blood, stories... or, well, it's now under a different name for good reasons. Glad to know you started back writing these again after a long break.
One quick note I'd like to bring, and by no means do I say this in a wrong way, the format could use a bit more... well size. I had issues reading this last chapter, feeling as if the fonts had gone down a mark. I'll probably need to drag them to notepad and manually change the format.
Won't stop me from reading it though! hell, even if it was as tiny as ants, I'd find a way to read it ;) Keep up the good work.
JustAWolf
I hear you. I've had another person say the same thing ... the weird thing is that I have never messed with font sizes, other than setting them large for the titling. The font size of the text/story itself is whatever the page inherits from SoFurry.
Cheers,
Onyx Tao
But I have to ask: When is Dacien getting his life prolonged? There's no reason to delay it, since he's a minotaur now, and, if I remember correctly, all the minotaurs get it done regardless. Love your work and I hope it continues,
Alexander Crestfallen
Excellent question! I'd wondered if someone would ask.
There is a reason to delay it: Dacien isn't an adult minotaur yet, at least not by minotaur standards. They consider adulthood to coincide with mental maturity, not physical maturity, so Dacien still has another ten years to go or so. Yes, Dacien is mentally mature (since he was so as a human, and the change is primarily physical rather than mental) but that's not obvious. So minotaur go by their own expectations, which is physical maturity + 10 years. And physically, Dacien is very young - barely at past the brink of physical maturity.
If it's done before then, it slows the aging process down to the point where the minotaur doesn't mature mentally until around 80 or so, and that's a major drawback in the eyes of the old, established, grumpy old bulls who control - er, regulate - such things.
I'm glad you like the series. There's more coming, just at my general slow rate :-)
Cheers,
OT
There was another thing that bothered me when I was reading. It was said that Minotaurs didn't take humans as apprentices because they generally wouldn't live long enough to become a mage. Dacien asked Teodor how minotaurs had managed to learn the magic in the first place if they barely ever had the chance to use it. The question was avoided, and it rather irked me. But what I don't understand is why the empire can have human mages whilst the human's living with the minotaurs can't be as accomplished.
Another interesting question!
Minotaur apprenticeships to mages do take about a hundred years or so, because the apprentice is both learning magic and what will be required of him as a mage lord. But they also have the luxury of long apprenticeships because they can. It's a bit like the difference between getting a 2-year associate degree in Computer Science, and pursuing a 12-year doctoral path in Computer Science. Both can 'program' (and the first one might actually be a better programmer than the second), but the PhD will (well, should) have a much deeper understanding of the theory, range, and principles of algorithms.
Teodor punted on the question because, obviously (to him, at least) before minotaurs figured out how to extend their lives, mages got significantly less mentoring time and were considered 'proficient' as lords much sooner. There's no other way it could have been. Xavien was rationalizing his prejudice, nothing more, nothing less. It might seem like a strong rationalization - but as you adroitly observe, it's clearly and demonstrably false. At that point, Teodor was still concealing his plan to transform Dacien, and didn't want to hint or suggest at anything, so it was a topic to be avoided — Teodor's intention was always to have Dacien serve a long (minotaur) apprenticeship.
Cheers,
Onyx Tao
I am currently writing on next three chapters. They're a little interlinked, in that each has events that affect the other two, but the characters and places are far, far away …
I'm just slow. But steady, so more is coming, eventually.
Cheers,
Onyx Tao
From what I understand, there are certain stages when talking about Minotaur and Human mages. From what I get, the stages are these: Latent Mage, Potential Mage, and Awakened Mage, in that order.
I was wondering on Dacien's progression through these stages, and exactly how they happened.
Now, as far as I know, you gave two possible paths to how he progressed, but never said which one was true (because the minotaurs don't know, and it probably doesn't matter all that much in the scheme of things, or maybe it does. I don't know, you decide.).
The first explanation was that he went through all three stages in roughly 48 hours. That, of course, is unheard of, since it takes at least six months for a potential mage to become awakened. However, given Dacien's affinity for magic, it could be that Teodor pouring his magic into him is all the catalyst he needed.
The second possibility was that he was exposed to some very potent magicians while touring in the army. His tour, if I understand correctly, had been going on for roughly five years. It just so happened that Teodor pushed him over the edge and he became awakened. Given the fact that, in general, the longer it takes for a potential mage to become awakened, the stronger the mage, and assuming that Teodor is correct about Dacien being as potent a mage as himself or Lord Chimes, Dacien's five years of exposure account for how strong he supposedly is.
So now I'm wondering which is is right (or if they're both wrong). Any clarifications would be appreciated.
Hi Alexander —
They are both wrong, although Dacien's being exposed to human mages is the working minotaur theory. The minotaurs don't know much about how magic or mages work. They know there's a pre-mage phase (and that's what Dacien was in) in which someone who is going to be mage shows us, but that person isn't yet a mage, has no signature, and is in general as helpless as any non-mage. They believe (but are wrong) that exposure to high levels of magic hastens this process. Given their observations, it's a reasonable belief, but they have correlated the effect to the wrong phenomenon.
Going over borders hastens the process.
Dacien went through Mog Ford (a border), Howling Pass (another border), and The Great Gates (another border (it's not called out in the story because Dacien doesn't know he went through that one)) before he even got to Maze, and then Trand dragged him up to Mistingrise, which itself is in a range of shifting borders. Given that, it's almost surprising he wasn't an active mage when Teodor met him in the first place.
What's a border?
That's something I don't explain well in the story, because everyone, everyone, everyone in the story knows what a border is and it's not unusual or surprising or wierd to them — it's just the way it is.
The minotaurs, humans, and other critters of this setting live in a huge set of (very small) interconnected universes, and the places where one can cross from one universe into another are the borders. Some are permanent, some are reliable (but occasionally closed), some are intermittent (open or closed, either to a schedule or apparently at random) and some are fleeting (such as the paths around Mistingrise). That's one of the reasons Teodor asked Trand to stay the night: the night fogs around Mistingrise are riddled with fleeting paths. Even a minotaur can get lost in them.
Hope that helps!
Cheers,
Onyx Tao
I'm sure it would be a tricky process, but it would allow their mages to awake faster.
But knowing that, what exactly determines how powerful a mage becomes?
Now, out of curiosity, did the minotaurs use to travel between borders more often than they do now, and does travelling between borders allow latent mages to to become potential mages?
Hi Alexander —
It would allow then to speed the process up, quite a bit. It doesn't make anyone a potential mage, so the technique would be strictly limited to those minotaur (and humans) already exhibiting mage potential. All they know is that keeping potential mages with active mages appears to speed the process up — and it does, because mages tend to travel a lot (and thus, they take their soon-to-be apprentices) through many borders. As Teodor says, they don't know much about the process at all, and as it turns out, some of the (reasonable) things they believe are just wrong. It's not their fault; their aren't a lot of potential mages, they have no way to know how long a mage should have taken, everything else held constant, and it's not obvious to anyone why going through a border would have any effect on it whatsoever. And, partly, they don't really understand the significance of a border.
Cheers,
Onyx Tao
Hi Alexander —
Like most authors I know, I'm just a little egocentric, and proof that persons are not merely reading my stories but actively thinking about them to the point where they can ask good questions about them is quite a stroke to my ego.
You are more than welcome to continue!
Cheers,
Onyx Tao
Since the topic I originally brought up were mages and them becoming awakened (and since I've a few more I haven't yet asked), I'll continue along those lines.
You'd said that Dacien passed through three borders before arriving at Maze (side question - which tribe, if that's the correct term for a group of Minotaur, does it belong to?), would I be correct in assuming that just about every other human goes through a similar journey once they're captured? Because if so, than most human potential mages should awaken very shortly upon entering Minotaurian lands. If that were the case, I'm sure minotaurs would find that humans awaken significantly faster than they do. But seeing as neither Teodor nor any other Minotaur has mentioned (or noticed) this, I'm presuming that Dacien's journey was unique among human prisoners.
That being said, what would be a normal trip be for a human prisoner?
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Just out of curiosity, I'm guessing that neither Teodor nor Lord Chimes traveled much when they were in their apprenticeship. I'm guessing because you'd said that they'd taken 4-5 years to awaken.
And finally, you never did answer my question concerning what determines how strong a mage's magic is.
I'm just hoping I don't become a nuisance by this point :P
Hi Alexander —
All of the human prisoners had the same journey. Dacien and Erik / Lathe were the only two potential mages, and they both awakened.
A mage's strength is not correlated with any other physical event or characteristic.
The extension spell that minotaurs use to slow their aging slows the process of becoming a mage, as well as making it less likely. Thus, a human would take a year where a minotaur would take from 5-10 years. Mages are rare, very rare, something like 1 in 1000, so 2 potential mages in 6000 human prisoners is actually a pretty good take (since of the total 6 mages you might expect, some will have already become mages, and some will still be in pre-potential state).
Cheers,
Onyx Tao
Now, early on in Cold Blood, Teodor mentions uses Golems to illustrate a point to Dacien. I've forgotten the point, but I was wondering as to what role golems play in your world and why we've not seen or heard from them since.
Another thing I've been wondering about is how Dacien influenced time when piggybacking a ride on a minotaur. From what I read, Dacien just facilitated the minotaurs' journey through time.
It did confuse me, though, because they seemed to be able to move faster and for longer periods under Dacien's bubble, but they still seemed to have taken the normal amount of time to arrive at their destination, both in and outside of tempus. I'd really appreciate any clarifications on what exactly happened.
Also, I was wondering about the implications stemming from Dacien's magic (or use of magic) affecting tempus. It seems that minotaurs erroneously figure that magic cannot influence time, but Dacien seems to have proven them wrong on that matter.
Would it be that when Dacien learns to use tempus, he'll be able to also influence time the same way he did as a human? Wouldn't it also mean that other mages and could do the same? The Warmaster (or it might have been a Warlord, I don't quite remember) that had been escorting Dapple, Dacien, Benelaus and Teodor did mention that he thinks he might be able to recreate what happened, now that he knows that it's possible.
I'm sure Kanail and Teodor could make giant leaps concerning tempus and how magic could be used to enhance it by observing what Dacien can do.
Now, the final thing I wanted to address was Sasha as Dacien's master. I know that his signature is undesirable, and I was wondering if one of the reasons the Patriatch chose him was that if people didn't have to worry about his signature, they'd get to know him better.
He, along with a lot of strong minotaurs, seem to have signatures that make them undesirable to have around. Having Dacien there might make benefit Lord Doze more than the others, regardless of the fact that he's probably the best suited to help him learn how to use a lens, and through that, magic. That and his experiences seems like they'd help Dacien adjust better than if he were to be apprentice-shipped to another Lord.
I guess what I meant to ask is if having Dacien tutored by Sasha is the most beneficial (for both parties) of all other possible situations?
I'm also thinking that if I next want to ask a question, I should probably just comment normally instead of just replying. This is getting rather narrow :P
Hi Alexander —
A new comment would be good, since alerts to you only happen on replies to your comments, and yes, we are starting to have a lot of white space over on the left side of the page!
Golems are mechanical constructs powered by magic, built by some clans. Since programming them is difficult, and building them requires a very specific set of mage-gifts (Water, Fire, Air), they are not seen as useful as human labor, even for drudgery jobs, since humans are adaptable and golems aren't. Essentially, a clever set of mages invented golems, and minotaur society as a whole yawned and asked, "what's the point?"
What happened with Dacien in tempus was an involuntary interaction of his signature (damping the interaction of magic with reality) with altered time. There is indeed a strong connection between magic fields and time, and we will see more of this later.
Dacien will indeed learn tempus, but he won't like it, and his father will be appalled. That's all I'm going to say on the matter.
Cresphontes put Dacien with Sasha for logistical and political reasons which will become clear later on. For the third time, your line of questioning anticipates story developments. That's good, I want that to happen, some of it is foreshadowing, some of it's 'yeah, that's what would happen', and I hope it makes the story flow better. Which is not answering your question, because to do so would give away a major plot point. Sorry!
Do feel free to keep asking questions … I just have to restrain myself when they concern What Is To Come. After the plot point comes out, if it's still unclear, ask again, and I'll have more liberty to discuss it.
Cheers,
Onyx Tao
Up to the point of the Lord of Bones doing some clever maths after noticing that there seemed to be less mages then there once used to be -- no, they did not know it interfered. Even now, they only suspect it's the extension spell. They do not [i]know[/i].
And since only Teodor, Cresphontes, and Dacien know the details of the mage-awakening spell/ability/process, even the few persons who guess (simply because having two sons of a mage known as a brilliant experimenter and innovator suddenly spontaneously become mages is [b]incredibly suspicious[/b]) have guessed the details wrong. They think Dacien is effect, not cause, and believe that Teodor is the key.
The only decision made so far was to hold off on using the mage-awakening to see how it turned out, and then Dacien was kidnapped and the point became moot. There will certainly be a lot of discussion once Dacien returns, especially given that Chelm has turned out so ... promisingly.
Cheers,
OT
But just now, you mentioned that Dacien's signature dampens the interactions of magic with the world. That, of course, includes the suppression of other mage signatures. But I was wondering if the effect is subtle enough to work on most other types of magic.
For example, I was wondering if the reason Dacien can overhear long-ranged conversation was because his magic weakened the spell enough for him to hear it.
Also, I'm willing to bet you can't give me a full answer on the next few things, but I'll ask anyways.
1) Does Dacien's signature (or whatever magic he employs) dampen magic to a point where it disrupts the bond between mage and lens, making him unsuitable to be the latter?
2) If Dacien were to attempt a particularly taxing spell, would all of the excess magic he spends be powerful enough to, say, disrupt an enchantment or negate another spell, like magical lighting?
3) You mentioned that Dacien can 'empower' another mage, allowing them to focus entirely on control, while he provides the power behind spell. If I understood what's happening correctly, Dacien allow a mage to use all of their magic in a spell (so they wouldn't have a signature whilst operating with Dacien, and whatever magic is still being leaked would probably be suppressed). Knowing that, can Dacien naturally use AII of his magic while casting a spell? If so, I guess that would be why he's so overwhelming when he's using anyone as a lens (or, alternately to my initial guess, when he's being used as a lens).
I'm also sure I had something else I wanted to ask, but I've forgotten since I've started typing this out. Maybe I'll remember later.
Dacien's magic interferes with other magic in strange ways. His ability to overhear long-ranged magic is because he can sense magic, and he senses the conversation; the way he senses it is as the conversation it is.
1) Dacien's magic does not interfere with a mage and lens unless he actively wills it to do so. It does suppress both signatures (if Dacien's power is greater than the combined power of the mages whom he is suppressing).
2) I'm not sure. It could certainly damp other spells temporarily, but most ongoing spells are more focused in intent than his signature suppresses. I think it would just damp them noticably.
3) Yes. This is exactly the opposite of a lens; Dacien can focus power into another spell. We've seen him do this. To an extent, this is why Dacien is so hard on his lenses -- he's sending a LOT more power into their spells and reinforcing the lensed spells. It's possible he could learn not to do this.
Using Dacien as a lens ends up feeding more magic back into the original spell, in an erratic manner. To say this is bad is an understatement. Dacien will never be a good lens.
And if you ever remember your forgotten question, feel free ;-)
Cheers,
OT
So we get to know who was behind the attack at Lord Xevien’s house: this Scyllans that Teodor found in Master Kanail’s father letters. Thou it seems they did not order the attack. So who could it be that wanted both Lord Fog and Lord Green dead and at the same time blame it on the Scyllans? This definitely is getting better and better.
And I sort of feel sorry for Dusan, he basically has been given a death sentence, even if is death while being alive.
Dusan did sort of get screwed there, no question. On the other hand, he deserves it and it's only a shame that EVERY Scyllan isn't getting his just desserts. The world would be a better place ...
Cheers,
OT[/color]
So EVERY Scyllan is the same? Do all of them follow the same trend? I would have thought that only the goverment was like that, not all the people.
Scylla is more like a cult than a clan. Dissension is not permitted, and the two major factions are the Ebon and Pristine sides, neither of whom trust the other. The Pristine think the Ebon are too aggressive, and the Ebon think the Pristine are too namby-pamby, and ALL of them think they're plotting against the others.
Because they ARE plotting against the others.
All for the good of the clan, of course.