Woooow this was SUCH a ride from start to finish! You write with such powerful imagery, it was so gripping! This line was amazing: 'his face is lightly wrinkled, like an overused shirt'. Can't wait to read more of your stuff!
I didn't expect to be shocked in anyway, but the first line got me good. Nice. As much as I want to be completely destroyed by this, it's not possible, because my favorite song, Sy Borg, is about a guy named Joe who joins the "Church of Appliantology" and then proceeds to engage sexually with just about anything you can plug into the wall.
Oooooh... You should do something in that universe.... :D
This story was such a fun read that kept me hooked all the way through! :)
love this!!
Oh, this is so fun. Immediate follow!
there's something about ready funky, good short fiction that really butters my bread fr fr
holy shit haha! i LOVED that first line! girl, you should be compiling an anthology of short stories you've written?!
Best first line. Love this ridiculousness.
hahaha thank you thank you it's a life commitment to the bit
oh man you really should write book! i ate this right up
this is the best compliment anyone has ever given me thank you xoxoxoxox
I loved this! so funny!
Woooow this was SUCH a ride from start to finish! You write with such powerful imagery, it was so gripping! This line was amazing: 'his face is lightly wrinkled, like an overused shirt'. Can't wait to read more of your stuff!
Stunning!!! I could read pages pages more of this.
Very memorable! Loved reading this. And this is why we never Google or look people up on Reddit. 🙂 Well done!! 👏
I didn't expect to be shocked in anyway, but the first line got me good. Nice. As much as I want to be completely destroyed by this, it's not possible, because my favorite song, Sy Borg, is about a guy named Joe who joins the "Church of Appliantology" and then proceeds to engage sexually with just about anything you can plug into the wall.
Oooooh... You should do something in that universe.... :D
omg that sounds like an insane song I am looking it up right now haha would love to explore appliance whore universe content
Well, it's a 2-hour long concept album so start at the beginning. There are crew sluts and sexually abusive dads who linger in the tool shed, too!
i don’t think ive ever been more interested in anything this is phenomenal
Yeah, that’s a crazy one! I love it!
thank you <3 means a lot coming from such a fabulous author