Woooow this was SUCH a ride from start to finish! You write with such powerful imagery, it was so gripping! This line was amazing: 'his face is lightly wrinkled, like an overused shirt'. Can't wait to read more of your stuff!
Woooow this was SUCH a ride from start to finish! You write with such powerful imagery, it was so gripping! This line was amazing: 'his face is lightly wrinkled, like an overused shirt'. Can't wait to read more of your stuff!