This was really a great experience to read, even though it felt a bit too short. Idk this may be due to generally audience don't consume long form reads. Yet the world your telling need a lot more context it's just feels well crafted which need more beautiful pages in its journal to capture all the desired aspects . Will be waiting for next part .
Thank you for the comment! Yes, it might be a bit short, but it had to be that way since it represents a specific period in Saba’s life - a preparation for what awaits her in the upcoming parts.
This was really a great experience to read, even though it felt a bit too short. Idk this may be due to generally audience don't consume long form reads. Yet the world your telling need a lot more context it's just feels well crafted which need more beautiful pages in its journal to capture all the desired aspects . Will be waiting for next part .
Thank you for the comment! Yes, it might be a bit short, but it had to be that way since it represents a specific period in Saba’s life - a preparation for what awaits her in the upcoming parts.
That's exciting to hear.