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How's my driving? How can I improve with the Reviewer (the Reaper Review) and Agumon Hakase? Yes, the Reviewer's backstory pre-Game is entirely original and Agumon Hakase is also original, but are they believable, consistent, etc?

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Like a bolt from the blue...

My clothes don't fit.

Man the harpoons!

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Like a bolt from the blue, it's time for the Reaper Review.

And away we go!

No prizes here: This is more of a rhetorical question than anything else.

There's nothing quite like coming out of data freeze. But what's this I find?

What sucks the most to discover?
/           MAKE YOUR CHOICE
You've missed some fairly important material in class
You've missed some kind of bounty hunt for anyone and everyone (though at least you weren't on the list)
You've missed saying goodbye to your girlfriend before she vanished off to her world
MAKE YOUR CHOICE           \


There are some things money can't buy. For everything else, there are Reaper Review Lessons: You think you're used to something until it happens to you.
You know, I almost wish the heat wave was in Junk City too, if only so I could finally see my Tamer's face.

I've been with him for almost a year and I haven't even caught him just out of the shower or anything, he's always wearing a stupid hoodie or sometimes even a hat underneath it! I bet if it was hotter here he'd finally wear a little less.

Does anyone else have a weird-ass Tamer who doesn't let you see their face?
[There are the muted sounds of an explosion, and over it, Agumon Hakase shrieking his head off.]

Oh, come on, I thought you were a bad enough dude that you didn't afraid of anything... You're not going to get hurt behind my wall.

[Agumon Hakase is incoherent with panic. The Reviewer sighs.]

Well, that's the last time I pick up the milk at the gas station convenience store. We'll just go to the overpriced shop on campus.

...

Did that explosion just stop?
...I'm very sorry to those who got walled out of Neon's public library. It has been taken down now. For future reference, they can also be broken with a very strong attack. I doubt anyone here has keypins.

...

oh great, I missed some of my finals.
Like a bolt from the blue, I was approached by a market researcher today. I love Submariway and all, but I couldn't help him. Alas, he's looking for digimon and Tamers looking to go to college next fall but I'm already in a course.

The kid looked kinda desperate. If you're in Junk City and you see a Kokuwamon with a blue clipboard and you can scrounge up some opinions on the schools around the digital world and pretend you're thinking about going back to one, go say hi to him. There's a 500BIT Submariway card in it.

locked from hostiles

Like a bolt from the blue...

I have this urge to play Tin Pin.

So, players, any of you still got your decks?

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  • (Anonymous)
    18 Jan 2011, 12:17
    Truly inspiring, touching and moving true stories. Every human being is a bunch of different life stories. Let us keep knowing and learning.
  • (Anonymous)
    17 Jan 2011, 10:26
    Hello, I have browsed most of your posts. This post is probably where I got the most useful information for my research. Thanks for posting, maybe we can see more on this.
  • reaperreview
    30 Apr 2010, 12:08
    For a quickie...2000 BITs. Just enough for the fabric is all.
  • reaperreview
    30 Apr 2010, 05:58
    Sounds good! Good thing I didn't enroll for summer classes. How much will it be?
  • reaperreview
    29 Apr 2010, 07:41
    Okay...I can make you something quick, so you can go out in public. That'll take a day or so. Is that okay?
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