Nice:
× Visited Aunt Susanne when she was ill.
× Visited Mother's grave.
× Assisted Nanny in arranging a vase of roses.
× Prayed at least once a day for the duration of Luke's disappearance.
× Attended my studies and all required functions and duties.
× Delivered several proposals including a request for a new educational facility.
× Negotiated with Father about Dorian General Grants' imprisonment.
× Arrived in the audience chamber early and remained attentive throughout.
× Aided the ambassadorial party in the areas of healing, gathering supplies, and warding off monsters.
× Didn't protest despite the harsh environment and uncomfortable pace.
× Apologized for poor conduct.
× Offered to help with dinner.
× Searched for the others and heeded the advice of the City's residents.
Naughty:
× Left the castle even though Father said I would not be able to travel with the ambassadorial party.
× Told falsehoods to the maids so that sneaking out would be possible.
× Eavedropped on Luke and Dorian General Grants even though the act was almost entirely unintentional.
× Proceeded to use this gained information as leverage so I would not be sent back home.
× Soiled my favorite gloves, although I suppose it couldn't be helped considering the dismal state of the factory.
× Behaved inappropriately towards persons of high military station and others, including but not limited to Colonel Jade Curtiss of Malkuth, Sergeant Tear Grants, Fon Master Guardian Anise Tatlin, and Guy Cecil.
× Particularly Sergeant Tear Grants and Fon Master Guardian Anise Tatlin.
× Mistreated a
× Got angry with Luke.
× Ruined lunch.
× Boasted.
× Proved inexperience in battle and otherwise, and caused trouble for everyone.
× Slayed monsters.
× Allowed myself to become jealous.
× Wondered wh
[A new(?) face appears over the network. It belongs to a young woman with light hair and olive eyes. The face is also upside down.]
[She peers into the communicator screen curiously for a moment, tapping a button or two experimentally with a gloved finger - oh! it's making a beeping sound whenever she touches it. But after a few moments, she turns her head away as if distracted, and a worried frown creases her mouth. Fascinating as it is, there are far more pressing matters at hand. Far more pressing. She finally speaks - but to herself.]
Where is this place? It doesn't appear to be in the Zao Desert at all. They couldn't possibly have...
[She draws her arms in closer.] --No. I'm certain there's a perfectly reasonable explanation. Well then. If they are unable to return for me, I must simply take charge of matters and search for them myself!
[She peers into the communicator screen curiously for a moment, tapping a button or two experimentally with a gloved finger - oh! it's making a beeping sound whenever she touches it. But after a few moments, she turns her head away as if distracted, and a worried frown creases her mouth. Fascinating as it is, there are far more pressing matters at hand. Far more pressing. She finally speaks - but to herself.]
Where is this place? It doesn't appear to be in the Zao Desert at all. They couldn't possibly have...
[She draws her arms in closer.] --No. I'm certain there's a perfectly reasonable explanation. Well then. If they are unable to return for me, I must simply take charge of matters and search for them myself!
This post is for making plans.
Let's say you have an amazing idea for a thread that you would like more participants for, or perhaps you've thought of something that you would love to see Natalia get involved in. Maybe I've mentioned something previously that has yet to come to pass and you still want it to happen. Tell me! This can be for gamewide plotting, memes, dressing rooms, anything at all! Likewise if there's a post you'd like Natalia to tag into, drop me a link and I'll give it a look at my earliest convenience.
Let's say you have an amazing idea for a thread that you would like more participants for, or perhaps you've thought of something that you would love to see Natalia get involved in. Maybe I've mentioned something previously that has yet to come to pass and you still want it to happen. Tell me! This can be for gamewide plotting, memes, dressing rooms, anything at all! Likewise if there's a post you'd like Natalia to tag into, drop me a link and I'll give it a look at my earliest convenience.
As a friend of mine has told me, refining a character's voice is a constant work in progress. If you have concerns regarding my interpretation of Natalia, please note them here along with any suggestions you feel may help me to improve my playing of her or my writing in general. Specific examples are also extremely helpful.
I take all critiques seriously, but I ask you to understand that sometimes real life comes first, and that I may not always be able to respond immediately. Thank you in advance for your consideration. :3
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I take all critiques seriously, but I ask you to understand that sometimes real life comes first, and that I may not always be able to respond immediately. Thank you in advance for your consideration. :3
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