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While I Grieve's avatar

One of my favourites that I’ve read on Substack too. It’s a stroke of genius… the setting of the scene at the start that a cycle leading to nothing is about to occur… the way you reinforce this with all the ´when I’s’. I saw you say you don’t know how to repeat this… but you will ☺️

Rafa Joseph's avatar

Thanks for the encouragement. I've been working on a bunch of songs lately that I'm planning to post soon. Do you know any good singers?

While I Grieve's avatar

Nobody who’s not famous already 😋 I’ll look forward to your songs!