"When I got out of third,
I went to first again…
in a stadium — homeless and absurd."
Reading the first 2 lines I was confused, until the "homeless" pun hit me and stunned me completely. This is amazing writing. Love it.
Thanks so much, Reisson! I was in a sort of trance while writing most of this, and didn't know exactly what I meant by it. But I love double and triple meanings and entendres so much they even arrive in my dreams. 😄
"When I got out of third,
I went to first again…
in a stadium — homeless and absurd."
Reading the first 2 lines I was confused, until the "homeless" pun hit me and stunned me completely. This is amazing writing. Love it.
Thanks so much, Reisson! I was in a sort of trance while writing most of this, and didn't know exactly what I meant by it. But I love double and triple meanings and entendres so much they even arrive in my dreams. 😄