Though I recently dropped from damned, I would still very much love to receive feedback on how I'm doing. Should you have any concerns or advice on what I can do to improve my performance, please leave a comment to this post to let me know.

I do prefer input that is as specific and detailed as possible, as this will best help me determine how to improve. But if it's something that seems "off" but which is too vague for you to pinpoint, it is perfectly fine to just say that, too. Just so long as you keep it constructive and avoid saying something like "You suck!" without providing some kind of justification. ;) (Conversely, if I did something right or you would like to provide positive feedback, I would like to know that as well!)

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Thank you so much in advance.

This one is sort of like others you may have seen around, but I have added a few sections specifically for Landel's. Feel free to gank, modify, or do whatever you wish to it.

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If you need to know whether something else is okay to do and it's not listed here, please feel free to comment here to ask! :D

Ah, one other thing. I do need to mention that while he is supposed to be adept at reading people in canon, I, the mun, am not. I even have trouble divining implicit info from posts. So... if I have him in a thread with your character, please let me know what would be okay for him to infer on his own (and whether I have overlooked something that would be obvious to the average person). I want to avoid info-modding, but not so much that his perception becomes OOC. =P

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NOTE: Per this comment, Sergeant Taura has taken most of the smaller items.

[Copies of the primer, the three maps, the list of clubs/organizations, the list of monsters, and the timeline occupy several pages.]

Note: This is the current application for Damned's App Cycle 13.

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