Thursday Poets Rally ~ An Evening Of Life..!!

This is yet another Loop poetry. Though this was created by Hellon, I was introduced to it by none other than Raji..

Rules of loop poetry are very simple and as follows:

There are no restrictions on the number of stanzas nor on the syllable count for each line. In each stanza, the last word of the first line becomes the first word of line two, last word of line 2 becomes the first word of line 3, last word of line 3 becomes the first word of line 4. This is followed for each stanza. The rhyme scheme is abcb.

Variations:

1. Stanzas, writers choice on the number, no rhyming, the last word, first word scheme is maintained.

2. One long stanza, no limit on number of lines, no rhyming scheme, the last word, first word scheme is maintained.

3. Couplets mixed with 4 line stanzas, the last word, first word scheme is maintained in the stanzas. It can also be used in the couplets. Rhyme scheme is ab, cc, defg, hh, ii, jklm, nn, oo.

So here’s my loop poetry for the day.. I wrote it on my way from office..

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An Evening Of Life….


Cloudy pleasant Evening…

Evening spent travelling..

Travelling through narrow roads..

Roads filled with traffic..

Traffic that seems unmoving..

Unmoving to fast pace of the city..

City that never does sleep…

Sleep, the only thing that eludes me..

Me a crazy insane character..

Character who has a fetish for poetry…

Poetry the best way to set myself free..

Free to soar like a bird..

Bird of desires and dreams..

Dreams make up my life..

Life that’s unpredictable..

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YIppeee..!!!! yes yes not only cos its Thursday and time for the Poets Rally but also cos I won the Perfect Poet Award… aaahhh..!!! bliss.. complete Bliss…!!

http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/05/14/week-18-the-perfect-poet-award-announcement/

Its been quite sometime since I had that award on my posts…. 😀

Thanks a ton JI 🙂

Here’s my award…

And my Nomination goes to Raji for sheer passion towards writing especially poetry…

If you are a poet and would like to dedicate one day of the week for poetry and meet a whole new world of poets you too can join the rally..

http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/05/19/thursday-poets-rally-week-19-may-20-26-2010/

Ji has also been gracious enough to shower me with these awards for being a part of the rally..

The Most Open-Minded Poet Award

The Most Honest Poet Award

The Most Intelligent Poet Award


http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/05/15/poetry-award-for-week-18-thursday-poets-rally/

Thank you soooooo much Ji 🙂 you are indeed the sweetest…

That’s it from Megzone for now..!!

Keep Smiling..!!  Keep Rocking..!! Keep Blogging..!!

Cheerios..!! :mrgreen:

Intertwined for Eternity…!!

Raji   the queen of Style Poetry.. did this today… Loop Poetry

and here I offer my humble attempt at loop poetry..

This is the second variation of Loop poetry.

There we sit

Sit on a seat

Seat of a park

Park full of blossoms, a treat

Treats in red

Red the color of love

Love me, he does

Does he, but know?

Know that I

I too love him

Him, the man

 Man of my dreams

Dreams of love

Love so sweet

Sweet like music

Music, the language

Language of the souls

Souls that are intertwined

Intertwined in love for an eternity…!!!

 

Loop Poetry is a younger sister of Blitz form of poetry… where the last word of the first line forms the first word of the next line and so on..

This poem is on the second variation of the Loop Form where its a continous poem, no paras, no rhyme scheme, no limitation on the number of lines.

For more details on the Loop Form please visit Raji’s Blog