This time I am combining 2 haikus and prompts in a single post
the first one is for One Single Impression
http://onesingleimpression.blogspot.com/2010/10/prompt-137-lonely.html
Prompt – Lonely
Lonely flower bloomed
Dead of the night, silent breeze
Waiting for sunlight
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and the next one is for 3 Word Wednesdays..
http://www.threewordwednesday.com/2010/10/3ww-ccx.html
Prompt = Absolve, Hiss, Ridicule
and here’s my haiku for the same
~::~ Error ~::~
Innocent error,
Hissed and ridiculed for life
No absolution.
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I hope you liked both my pieces in case there are any areas of improvement please feel free to let me know.. I am afterall just an amateur poet..
Thats it from Megzone for now..
Keep Smiling..!! Keep Rocking..!!! Keep Blogging…!!
Cheerios..!!


Although I enjoyed both poems, the flower blooming at night touched me most.
thank you soooooo much Martin 🙂
I liked the second poem for 3WW ..Nice 🙂
hey thanks Uma 😀
Both were amazing megs but i would say the first one touches the most…the flower awaiting the sunlight 🙂 simply amazing 🙂 nice one
aaww..thank you dear 🙂
m glad you liked them 🙂
nicely done.
thanks Thom 🙂
Princess of Haiku???? I think so xxx
awww…amanda..that was very very sweet o you 🙂
how i wish i was 😀
I loved the first one Megzzz!! Soft words and the imagery it creates is beautiful and calming 🙂 You are doing good at Haiku’s too!!
aaww..thank you so much Nanka 😀
Enjoyed both. The second one made an impression–in terms of how harsh we can be on ourselves at times.
thank you dear Gabrielle 😀
I relate to the 2nd poem, too.
absolutely no error in the haikus as far as I can see!
Megzy I am loving the Haikus pouring out of your heart..:D
Supaaar job!
aawwww…thankkk uuu sooo much Vibbzyyy 😀 😀 😀 😀
❤
first one is awesome and second one hilarious. i just loved the pic you used in the first one.
aww..thank u so much trisha 😀
Shubho bijoyadashami (Happy Vijayadashami)! May the blessings of the Goddess shower down on you and your loved ones forever.
shubho bijoya to you too trisha 🙂
love your magical words.
heyyy thanks ji 😀
Welcome To link in a poem to our potluck today, thanks a ton!
http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/2010/10/poetry-potluck-seven-deadly-sins.html
Both the haikus are lovely…
the secong one is superb… 🙂