Classic Being a Better Writer: Common Stumbles of New Projects

Hey writers! Welcome back! We are on the last days of our vacation here on the site (even if it is a staycation in many respects) and celebrating the New Year, so this week is once more a visit from a Classic Being a Better Writer post of yesteryear.

However, as the last two posts have dug nearly a decade into our archives, today we’re looking at something that is somewhat more recent. We’re digging into the first post of a New Year years ago to talk about common roadblocks and issues with new projects. Fitting, no?

So hit that jump, and we’ll be back with a new BaBW installment next Monday.

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Classic Being a Better Writer: Giving Characters a Leitmotif

Hello again writers!

We’re away from our keyboard this week enjoying the holidays, but that doesn’t mean the writing advice needs to slow down, especially with a backlog as deep as Being a Better Writer‘s! So, while we’re catching up on our reading and gaming backlog, have this near decade-old Classic BaBW post to enjoy! Hit that jump, and we’ll see you with fresh content again soon.

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Classic Being a Better Writer: Holidays

Welcome, writers!

I’m off this week for Christmas, so this week won’t be a new Being a Better Writer post but a returning classic. And it’ll be the same next week as well. But, being topical, we’ve decided to dig back into an old worldbuilding post on the concept of holidays themselves!

Oh, but really quick, there IS one item of news. Everything’s on a Christmas sale this week. That’s right, Axtara, the UNSEC Space Trilogy, all of it. All on sale, all reduced. Even this year’s newest releases, The Phoenix and Blood Less Vile. If you’re looking for a last-minute Christmas gift, go to the books page! It’s through the week of Christmas, so you can even grab them for a bit after, but as always, don’t wait too long!

So Merry Christmas, and enjoy this trip through Being a Better Writer‘s archives! See you in 2026, and hit the jump!

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Classic Being a Better Writer: Sex Appeal, Attractiveness, and Character Description

Hey writers! As foretold with last week’s Being a Better Writer, this week I’m off from making a new post on account of Thanksgiving weekend. That said, we’re taking a look at a classic BaBW post that still sees a regular number of hits because … Well, just look at that title.

No preamble, nothing else to discuss (as said, I’m off for the weekend). So without further ado, hit the jump, and let’s revisit this classic.

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Classic Being a Better Writer: Sanderson’s Three Laws of Magic

Hey folks! As last Friday—which is when I sit down to write Monday’s Being a Better Writer—was a holiday, there’s no new BaBW entry this week. However, that doesn’t mean you’re out of luck for writing advice, because we’re digging out a very old Classic Post for you to dig into. From nearly nine years ago, it’s a BaBW post on Sanderson’s Three Laws of Magic!

So sit back, grab a wand or stave, and get ready for a look at the three laws that guided Sanderson along his path to writing Fantasy that became a global sensation.


This post was bound to happen. Sanderson’s Three Laws have been a frequently requested topic since the very beginning of this blog, and it’s a staple of a lot of writing education these days (especially fantasy), so I knew there would come a day when I had to write about it. Of course, I wanted to ease into the topic first, which I did two weeks ago when I wrote a post about creating magic systems. During that post, I referenced the Three Laws, saying I’d talk about them later. You see, before I got into talking about the Three Laws, which are more about how to use magic in a story, I did want to dedicate some time to the subject of creating magic first, so that there would be a basis for Sanderson’s Laws to dig into.

Now, with that post behind us, the time has come to look at Sanderson’s Three Laws of Magic.

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Classic Being a Better Writer: Fleshing Out Ideas – From Idea to Story

Hey folks! I’m still on break until the New Year, so until next Monday, enjoy a classic Being a Better Writer blast from the past! Merry Yuletide and a Happy New Year!

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Now, I don’t actually remember the circumstances by which this topic came to be on the list (could have been LTUE), but either way, the topic is a good one. Hang out in a writing-centric thread online or attend a writing workshop—sands, even look in the comments of a public page for an author or attend a panel—and eventually, probably fairly quickly, you’ll hear a question or  comment that’s a lot like the following:

I have this great idea/concept/story/character, but the moment I try to sit down and write them, I just run out of steam. I can’t get it/them written. How do I do this?

Now, the exact phrasing may vary, but trust me, you’ll here the sentiment, echoed from a number of beginning writers. And you won’t even have to wait long. It’s a question that comes up all the time.

And you know, to be fair, it’s not exactly a bad question. A poor one, maybe, but not a bad one. And it’s one that’s often reflected by the faces and situations of many more in whatever assorted audience is present than the one who asked. Crud, I’m certain that it’s a question that some of the authors who have been forced to scramble for an answer themselves once voiced, though perhaps internally.

But … it’s still a poor question. I certainly wouldn’t call it a good one. Not poor enough that it isn’t worth tackling in this post, but not the best question either.

Why? Well, let me answer that before I get into the deeper-roots behind the question. The question is a poor one because 90% of the time the individual asking it is asking for a silver bullet. A solution that doesn’t exist. I entirely suspect that if, when asked this question, whoever was asked responded with “Well, are you using X program?” or “Are you sitting in this kind of chair?” there would be a massive sale of said product in the audience that had asked.

Again, I shouldn’t batter these poor souls too badly. After all, they are beginners. But as beginners, when asking this question, the answer they get is hardly the answer they want (and sometimes, they’ll tell you). They’re inexperienced enough to think that all it takes is an idea, a pen or a keyboard, and a little bit of writing, and boom! Story! And the problem with that is that, as all writers know, there is no silver bullet. There’s no magic “thing” or element that anyone can just do to take a story from an idea to a finished product (or at least a halfway competent one). And in that regard, the question is poor.

Now, that said, it wouldn’t take much to “fix” it so that we can give it a real answer. If we rearrange it a little, tweak a few of the words a bit, we get something much more workable. Something like:

I have a good idea/story/concept/character, but the when I sit down to try and write it, I start having trouble. How do I take it from an idea to a finished work? What are the steps there?

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Classic Being a Better Writer: Dialects

Hey folks! I’m out of the office this week attending Thanksgiving, so this week’s Being a Better Writer post is a blast from the past! November of 2017, to be specific. And it’s a pretty nifty one. Give it a read, and I’ll see you next week!

When you go to the grocery store, what do you call the wheeled apparatus that you collect your groceries in? Is it a shopping cart? Or is it a carriage? Or a trolley?

I’m willing to bet that a good number, if not most of you said “shopping cart.” But if you were from the American northeast—say, Connecticut or Rhode Island—there’s a high chance that you said “Carriage” instead. Or that you might say “bubbler” instead of “water fountain.” Or “soda pop” instead of “soda.” Or crud, maybe you’re even one of those individuals who calls all sodas “coke.” You know, as in “Get me a coke,” followed by “What do you want?” and “Oh, a Pepsi.”

All of these differences (and many, many more, from snow machine to snowmobile) are examples of what are know as “regional dialects.” Which makes today’s post a bit of a companion piece to last week’s on accents. And, I must admit, this topic wasn’t on the list, but after a comment about the concept by reader ocalhoun (no, I don’t know how you pronounce that either, but I’ve always read it as “o-cull-hoon”) brought up the subject, I realized that it was worth posting about, rather than just giving it an offhand mention as I had previously done.

So, dialects! What are they, how do they come about, and—this part is a bit key—what separates a dialect from an accent? Because yes, they are two different things. You can have two individuals with the same accent but a different dialect.

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Classic Being a Better Writer: Names

Hey folks! I got sick this weekend, so today’s post is a look way back into the archives. November of almost ten years ago, in fact!

But it’s a neat enough post. If you’re new around here you may have never read it before, and if you’re a veteran, you know the value of studying things you already know to refresh your memory.

So without further ado. here’s a Classic Being a Better Writer to sink your teeth into. Enjoy.


See, naming things can actually be pretty tricky. When creating a world from scratch, or even just a redesigned/repurposed version of our own world, often one of the first things a lot of young writers do is assign their characters, places, and things very interesting names. It’s kind of a trope by this point, but if I had to guess my prediction would be that to the new writer, the goal is to excitedlyshow you how fantastical their world is. So they don’t have people with names like Joe or Samantha. They have people with names like Krul’Qa’pin or something like that.  And they live in the city of Byulnqualalaltipo! Aren’t those fantastic?

Well, in sense, sure. They’re also completely unpronounceable, for a start. And that is just the start.

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Classic Being a Better Writer: The Death Spiral

Hey there, writers! It’s Labor Day, which usually means I take the day off and don’t post anything for Being a Better Writer. But this year, only one of those things is true! Yes, I’m still taking the day off—I did over 80,000 words worth of work last month, so I do feel I deserve a small break—but rather than just wish everyone a happy Labor Day, I’m dropping a classic Being a Better Writer post anyway so that the studious reader is still rewarded! After all, with 10+ years worth of archives to dig through, there are a lot of posts to revisit. Maybe it’s time to look back at some that didn’t get quite as much attention, you know?

Save that today we’re totally not doing that. The Death Spiral is one of those posts that constantly sees hits as well as requests from folks online to drop a link so they can check it out. It’s linked by no fewer than eleven other BaBW posts. It’s not exactly unknown.

But that’s because it covers some pretty important writing skills, plus has an attention-grabbing name. Never once, however, has it been the focus of a Classic BaBW post.

So today we rectify that. The original text starts below. Enjoy your labor day, and enjoy the read.

BUT FIRST … a quick word on Labor Day: If you’re in the US, don’t forget what it’s in celebration and memoriam of. Memorial Day, which is honored with much patriotism across the country. Flags and social media posts about remembering fallen soldiers who secured US freedom.

Memorial Day is meant to honor fallen workers who secured labor protections and freedom and paid for it in many cases with their lives. Whose families were shot, bombed, gasses with chemical weapons, and dynamited by employers who epitomized the very worst kinds of greed. Workers who fought back against them, and secured protections for themselves and families for the freedoms those same soldiers were fighting externally.

Don’t forget what Labor Day is about. When we do, it emboldens those who would like to bring those days back. And they’re quite prominent right now.

Now, that aside, on with the show.


So, about that topic. As I mentioned, it may seem like an odd title for the first post of 2017. After all, “death spiral” doesn’t exactly imbue much confidence, does it?

No. It doesn’t. Which is exactly why I think it makes a good topic for the first post of 2017. Because for many young writers, a death spiral is something they get trapped in with no idea of how to get out. And for the new year? Nothing could be better for some of those writers than realizing it and breaking free.

Right, enough pontificating. Let’s dive right in and answer the question on so many minds right about now: what is a death spiral?

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Classic Being a Better Writer: Digging Deeper With Characters

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Good news, folks! I’m almost back!

Almost. In transit, either physically, mentally, or both, but that’s still almost. Which means the return of new Being a Better Writer posts at last!

But soon. Not today. No, today we’ll be revisiting a classic post once again, this time from 2017! Titled Digging Deeper With Characters, which is pretty self explanatory.

So hit that jump, and dive in! See you soon!

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