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Played by interlights.

"You have reached a busy number; please call again later." Heehee, that's what those phones say sometimes when you just keep pressing and pressing and the lady on the other end says that. But um. I'm not here. I think. I could be, but maybe not for you, so if you want to talk to me, you can do it here? Just go 'BEEEEEP!', like that.

( This is the IC contact post for Delirium. Leave a message, and she'll try her best to get back to it. She will try. )

Delirium, from Neil Gaiman's critically-acclaimed Sandman series, is part of an anthropomorphic family of natural phenomena called the Endless. All of them possess a certain level of omniscience and omnipotence, and are pretty much god-mods in that sense. However, they can't practice that same authority in RP, so! Please copy-pasta the permissions form and comment on this entry so as to avoid any god-modding in the game :) Thanks a plenty! You can be as specific or as general as you want with this, but if you were patient enough to give me the blow-by-blow details, that'd be appreciated~.

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[ The youngest of the Endless was perched atop a building, watching the events unfold as she sucked on her thumb. The SFC was placed beside her, and while all you could see consequently was her profile view, the destruction caused by giant Kraken tentacles could easily be heard and felt anyway. ]

...Odysseus should go help out. Hee. Get it? Because of Scylla, and she ate six of his friends and they all almost drowned and visited my sister. Ha...

[ She started giggling, but it died down until she flopped over to her back and hummed a tune that had no melody to herself. ]

Everybody should say sorry to it. Say sorry to it and maybe it'll go away. Or it could get madder. I think it got me wet.

[ Delirium's teeth zoom in as she grins wildly into the SFC. You see her face next, pale and hollow and grimy, and then her flat chest whilst she fixes the device unto a platform.

What you see next is rather strange - at least, for normal standards. For Delirium, it's all good fun.

A fish creature, one of the monstrosities that came from the hole underneath the city, was currently dead and rotting even more on top of a bench by the plaza. It was wearing a tutu and ballet shoes. Delirium is seen fixing it's green wig with ribbons as she speaks out loud for the SFC to hear. ]

Hee hee, I'm going to dress you all up in pretty things. Because you're really icky and sticky and gross, and that's not good. Fishies are pretty and colorful and they swim around - so why don't you swim around? Are you lost, fishie? I can take you back home, and you'll be like a princess too! With dance lessons and everything!

[ Delirium sits on the bench beside it and waves at the camera. ]

Dress them up really nice! Then we'll all have a party! A smelly stinky pretty party with the fishies!