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How's my driving? How can I improve with Hikaru and Monodramon? Yes, they're practically original characters, but are they consistent, believable, etc?

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Mom, Dad, it's me.

[deep breath]

I keep waking up and there's less people around. Just about everyone in the Bakery's gone home. And the only reason I know or think they're at home or at least not in this world any more and not, well, it's Tetha, is because I can't contact their digivices any more.

It's getting worse and worse here every day. I keep hearing about Tamers getting kicked out of their homes; I think the only reason why I haven't been kicked out of this building yet is because everyone's just disappearing on their own anyway. There was a freaking skywriter the other day! And everyone's saying to get out. DATS is saying to get out.

Dad, you don't talk about it much but I'm beginning to think it's getting like how your government was before you moved to New York.

I'm getting scared. I don't know what to do, who to trust.

I wish you were here.

I don't wish you were here, because then you'd be in danger too.

I wish you could hear me, and tell me what I should do.

audio as always; bold is Monodramon

Oh, come on! I unfreeze and both my mom and my friend are gone?!

THAT'S IT!

I'M OUT OF HERE!

[A few moments of silence.]

I really don't think you can will yourself home.

SHUT UP I'M GOING TO TRY.

[A shorter silence.]

This is broadcasting, isn't it.

Yep.

Well, FINE THEN! [And he still sounds mighty annoyed.] HAPPY BIRTHDAY, UNCLE KOU!
AAAAAAAAAAGH MAKE THEM GO AWAY!

Hikaru?

WHAT ARE REAL WORLD BIRDS DOING IN THE DIGITAL WORLD ANYWAY?!

They're not; what are you talking about?

The...PIDGEONS. And seagulls and--

[stunned silence from Monodramon as Hikaru lets out another shriek]

You're twelve years old; I thought you were over that.

SHUT UP! There just weren't any here until now!

There aren't any here now, either...

[the sound of footsteps running away from the dropped D-Comm and the door of the Bakery slamming]
First Shuichon-chan leaves, then Olette-san and Uehara-san disappear, and now I try to call Seihi and she's gone too!

WE'RE DROPPING LIKE FLIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIES!! HOW MANY BRAINBREAKERS ARE LEFT?! WHO WILL BE THE NEXT BAKER TO BE VOTED OFF THE ISLAND?!

AUDIO; all replies are audio as per usual

I CAN'T BELIEVE I FORGOT MY OWN BIRTHDAY! I've been twelve for almost two weeks and I totally didn't notice until now!

Monodramon, I can't believe you forgot!

I wasn't looking at the date any more than you were! And you can't complain about your mom not knowing if you didn't tell her when it was! Anyway, you still got a present even if you didn't notice your D-Reader beep.

...Huh, really?

[tap tap tap SPARKS, HIKARU SHRIEK, Monodramon sigh, tap tap tap]

Oh, hey! Thanks, Ave!

AUDIO

[Monodramon's laughter is very, very distant.]

You know what? I don't even want to know what a hole's doing outside the Bakery.

I'll call for help!

STOP LAUGHING AT ME!

VOICEPOST, DUH; after Duela's post

how did I only realize now that you're here MOMMY!

I mean, uh... [ahem]

MARIA CHRISTINA PEÑA SANTIAGO!

[silence]

what the heck, no one around here has a Kamemon for a partner!

Hiiiiiii!
Takato-san, Mimi-oba, everyone here at the Bakery: Thanks for everything.

V-mon and everyone else at the studio: It's an absolute blast working with you guys. If I could pick anyone to do what I love doing with, it'd be you guys.

Laura, Anei-chan, Hitomi-chan, Seihi-chan why am I the only boy here? We may all be from different timelines but that doesn't mean we're not family. You guys... GIRLS rock.

ALL the Brainbreakers: Keep being awesome.

Jun-oba, Taichi-oji, Ken-oji, Hikari-oba, Miyako-oba, Takeru-oji, Yamato-oji, Aunt Tatum, Ryo-oji, Kou-oji, Mimi-oba again, Jyou-oji, Sora-oba: I may be from the future of another timeline to you guys BUT like I said to the Brainbreakers from our world, I still see you all as family. So. I love you all.

Ave: I know you've had a bit of a rough time here and I'll always be here to help you, I promise. I also know that you've got some awesome new friends and a great boyfriend here. I'm proud of you. Love you like a sister.

Katsuro: I think you could be a surprisingly good influence on Ave. And you make her happy, so, yeah.

BUT IF YOU BREAK HER HEART I WILL BREAK YOUR FACE. White Day next month? Is also Pi Day. Is also her BIRTHDAY. I EXPECT GREAT THINGS FROM YOU.

Dad? I'm...sorry I yelled at you when you freaked out over me... It's a totally normal reaction and the first version of you who was here also kinda freaked out and I was kinda out of line. I hope you can forgive me, cos. I still love you.

Mom and Dad, back home, 2028... I miss you. Try not to worry about me too much; I'm doing okay and so's Chibimon, we're looking after each other. Love always, this little light.

BACKDATED; VOICEPOST

So, for everyone who was in the Brainbreaker Secret Santa... It's time for the big reveal! Thanks, Tora-chan, for helping me out with typing this all up! Find your name and beside it is your Secret Santa! Okay? Go!

TEXT.Collapse )

I hope you had fun getting into the Christmas spirit, even though some of you have never celebrated it before!

Merry Christmas, everyone!

Oh, everyone here at the Bakery, I put your presents under the tree!

Presents for the Adventure crew.Collapse )

(OOC: Why do I feel like I've missed someone in the Secret Santa? And Bakery crew, gifts are...up to you. :D;)

VOICEPOST

Hey guys! Good effort considering half of us don't know each other, heh, whoops, but I hope you had fun!

So uh... Here's Santa Hikaru with your Secret Santa presents! I'll let you know who your Santa was on Christmas, 'kay?

Let's see if Chibimon can work this out...

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(OOC: If I missed anyone, tell me OOCly. :) Thanks for playing!)

VOICEPOST; have an upset gogglehead!

...Dad's gone... That's the way it works, yeah? D-Comm frequency's not on your 'Comm any more, they've been sent home...

Cheer up, little dude! Go and bug--

IS THIS REALLY THE MOMENT?!
Hey everyone! Okay, so American Thanksgiving always makes me think, "ack, it's a month to Christmas", and that reminds me of our Chosen 'family' Secret Santa back home! Only this year not being at home I can't real~ly do it with my effective cousins, 'cept Ave, so I thought this year it might be fun if us Brainbreakers did Secret Santa!

Basically what happens is everyone's names go in a hat and I'll pick someone's name out of it for you, and whoever you get you have to get them a present! Only they're not gonna know it's you, cos it's to~tally SECRET. What we usually do is all presents have to be in to the person running it - usually Mimi-oba but I don't mind doing it this year! - preferably by the 20th so they'll be delivered on the 23rd, and then on Christmas day - that's December 25th - we find out who got who!

A-and you don't have to spend any money on the present if you don't want to, you could make one! Draw a picture, write a poem, whatever! Last year Haruki-kun had me and he made me a mix CD and a batch of brownies and it was awesome!

If you have any questions or anything, just ask me. And tell me if you're in!

EDIT:
Okay, I forgot some of you guys don't have Christmas on your worlds, sooo...

[RECORDED AS TO ADELLE]
It's meant to be celebrating the birth of Jesus, the son of god. Only lots of people who don't believe in him celebrate it anyway because, like, it's celebrated by giving presents and sharing and being nice to other people and all that!

(OOC: I'll give y'all a week to sign up for this because I know Thanksgiving is eating your souls. :) And then I'll tell you OOCly by LJ private message probably who your kids got for the Secret Santa. Yay!)

BACKDATED

Hey, um, Ken-oji! Happy birthday, dude! This is from me and Ave because she's kinda stressed right now.

[Attached is a Fairymon's visor.]
Hey, everyone! Uhhhh... Sorry for all the yelling on my last post a few weeks ago, I was running around trying to find someone and I didn't realize my D-Pod--

D-Comm!

--sorry, D-COMM was on. Anyway! I'm Motomiya Hikaru, and my partner's--

I'm Chibimon!

--yes. So. Sup, new digital world? APART FROM EVERYONE GOING CRAZY. THIS NEVER HAPPENED TO RYO-OJI BACK HOME, THE VIRUS JUST MADE HIM--

SPOILERS, Hikaru!

Ugh, what's the big deal with the whole spoiler thing, anyway? Alternate timeline or whatever! How the hell does time wobble anyway, it's TIME.

You've spoiled enough already!

Okay, okay! Um... I probably should've done this earlier, but Jun-oba, Daisuke-san said you were here too? Hi! I'm kind of your nephew from the future. PLEASE TELL ME THIS VIRUS IS NOT MAKING YOU NUTS TOO.
AVELINE~

Motimon!

IZUMI A~VE~LI~INE~

MO~TI~MON!

AAAAAAAAAAVEEEEEEEEEEEEELIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIINE!!!

MOTIMOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON~

[This, unfortunately for the listener, continues for a minute. Poor, poor listener.]

Hey, when did my 'Pod stop play--

THIS ISN'T A D-POD

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