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Copy improvements for Jetpack Section #13916

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Restore

restore android

  • Restore confirmation Are you sure you want to rewind your site back to 28 October 2020 at 03:39? This will remove all content and options created or changed since then. -> Are you sure you want to revert your site back to 28 October 2020 at 03:39? Anything you changed since then will be lost.
  • Restore confirmation button Confirm restore site -> Confirm
  • Restore in progress button Ok, notify me! -> Let me know when finished!
  • New couldn't find status screen heading New -> Hmm, we couldn’t find your restore status
  • New couldn't find status screen bullet1 New -> We couldn’t find the status to say how long your restore will take.
  • New couldn't find status screen bullet2 New -> We’ll still attempt to restore your site.
  • * [ ] New couldn't find status screen bullet3 New -> We’ll notify you when its done.

Backup

  • backup in progress button Ok, notify me! -> Let me know when finished!

Scan Current

This is copy for how scan currently operates

scan v1
Copy updates

  • Fix threats description The scan found [N] potential threats with [SiteName]. Please review them below and take action. We are here to help if you need us. -> The scan found [N] potential threats with [SiteName]. Please review them below and take action or tap the fix all button.. We are here to help if you need us.
  • Threats fixed heading Don’t worry about a thing -> Risks Removed
  • Threats fixed body You resolved 2 threats just now and everything looked great. Run a manual scan now or wait for Jetpack to scan your site later today. -> You resolved the 2 threats listed below and your site is now risk free.. To review your site again run a manual scan, or wait for Jetpack to scan your site later today.

Scan with proposed new flow

In a comment on pcdRpT-cM-p2 I suggested this new flow for scan - having 'fixed' as a separate screen to the main screen, and treating the flow as an overflow. If we are able to take that on, copy for that flow (pictured) follows.

scan v2

  • You resolved [N] threats just now -> You resolved [N] threats
  • The last jetpack scan ran just now and everything looked great. Run a manual scan now or wait for Jetpack to scan your site later today. -> The last jetpack scan did not find any risks. To review your site again run a manual scan, or wait for Jetpack to scan your site later today.

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