bpo-33649: Edit asyncio eventloop doc - second pass #9233
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Looks good! I've left a few nit comments.
Doc/library/asyncio-eventloop.rst
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| loops and should use the :func:`asyncio.run` function to initialize | ||
| and run asynchronous code. | ||
| Application developers will typically use high-level asyncio functions | ||
| to interact with the event loop. In general,high-level asyncio applications |
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Missing a space in general,high-level -> general, high-level
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| Consider also using the :func:`asyncio.run` function instead of | ||
| manually creating and closing an event loop. | ||
| Consider also using the :func:`asyncio.run` function instead of using | ||
| lower level commands to manually create and close an event loop. |
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Would it make sense to change "commands" to "functions" or "APIs"?
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| * *family* can be set to either :data:`socket.AF_INET` or | ||
| :data:`~socket.AF_INET6` to force the socket to use IPv4 or IPv6. | ||
| If not set it will be determined from host name | ||
| If not set, it will be determined from host name |
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Maybe "If not set, it will be determined" -> "If not set, the family will be determined"?
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https://bugs.python.org/issue33649