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from reference/setup-tools/kubeadm/kubeadm-init.md to setup/production-environment/tools/kubeadm/kubelet-integration.md

includes edits I just proposed in #15421 and kubernetes/kubernetes#80136

…md doc

from reference/setup-tools/kubeadm/kubeadm-init.md to setup/production-environment/tools/kubeadm/kubelet-integration.md

includes edits I just proposed in kubernetes#15421 and #80136
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This section in reference/setup-tools/kubeadm/kubeadm-init.md seems to significantly overlap with setup/production-environment/tools/kubeadm/kubelet-integration.md - looks like someone copy/pasted it at some point?  The information in kubelet-integration.md looks more up to date than this (e.g. there actually is no `--allow-privileged=true` or `--network-plugin=cni` here?).  Therefore lets delete the sections content, and have a short line linking to the other one.

If this is accepted, then kubernetes#15421 is moot (because kubernetes#15423 moves it to the new place).
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thanks for the PR.
please remove quotes around project names, such as kubeadm, kubelet, systemd.
quotes should be used if we are talking about a binary. k/website is not very consistent in this regard.

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@neolit123 Please use GitHub's cool suggest a specific change (Pt. 6) feature - instead of describing the change requested in words, just click that Icon before the aA B which let's you kind of "inline edit" and counter propose. It's easier because faster for both the reviewer (you) and the Pull Request author (me) to "parse" and easily accept.

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@vorburger i know how the feature works. :) i'm leaving the edits to you.

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@vorburger i know how the feature works. :) i'm leaving the edits to you.

done. LGTY now?

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using the new feature to correct a couple of quotes.

…elet-integration.md

Co-Authored-By: Lubomir I. Ivanov <neolit123@gmail.com>
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Can I do anything else to help finally get this merged?

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…ation.md (#15424)

* remove doc from kubeadm-init.md which is duplicated in kubelet-integration.md

This section in reference/setup-tools/kubeadm/kubeadm-init.md seems to significantly overlap with setup/production-environment/tools/kubeadm/kubelet-integration.md - looks like someone copy/pasted it at some point?  The information in kubelet-integration.md looks more up to date than this (e.g. there actually is no `--allow-privileged=true` or `--network-plugin=cni` here?).  Therefore lets delete the sections content, and have a short line linking to the other one.

If this is accepted, then #15421 is moot (because #15423 moves it to the new place).

* shorten link re. removed doc from kubeadm-init.md

as requested in #15424 review

* drop https://kubernetes.io from link in kubeadm-init.md

* Revert "shorten link re. removed doc from kubeadm-init.md"

This reverts commit f128ce7.

* fix bad wording

* update kubeadm-init.md based on kbhawkey review feedback

* remove duplicate sentence in kubeadm-init.md
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Can I do anything else to help get this merged?

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Leaving final /lgtm to @neolit123. 👋

/approve

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/unassign @tfogo
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https://github.com/kubernetes/kubernetes/blob/master/build/ might actually change in the near future due to the work SIG Release's new engineering team are doing, so ideally we don't want to have the same wrong link in multiple locations.

but let's revise this once/if that refactor actually happens. thanks.
/lgtm

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wahyuoi pushed a commit to wahyuoi/website that referenced this pull request Sep 9, 2019
…md (kubernetes#15423)

* porting some information from kubeadm-init.md to kubelet-integration.md doc

from reference/setup-tools/kubeadm/kubeadm-init.md to setup/production-environment/tools/kubeadm/kubelet-integration.md

includes edits I just proposed in kubernetes#15421 and #80136

* improve wording re. systemd in kubelet-integration.md

* removing quotes and adding the in kubelet-integration.md

* Update content/en/docs/setup/production-environment/tools/kubeadm/kubelet-integration.md

Co-Authored-By: Lubomir I. Ivanov <neolit123@gmail.com>
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