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Please remember this Lightning is more derived from Dissidia Duodecim and not Final Fantasy XIII.
Some Headcanon Notes
Yes, my Lightning has some vague memories but as of now, I'm assuming her memories allow her to find some of her home world castmates familiar but not know her relationship with them, unless it's Serah and then she'll probably have more to go on. She remembers some events but not the context of them.
Lightning has no memories of FFXIII. She'll find Roses familiar and comforting but that's it. She will not be remembering any of the events of FFXIII or even recognize her own cast mates from that game. This Lightning is literally taken from Dissidia with only the history from that game as her background.
She does, however, still have the l'Cie brand from FFXIII but she doesn't know the story behind it or what it is exactly. Because I assume the progress of her brand "froze" when she was summoned to Dissidia, it is more like a standard tattoo than anything else though it still allows her to use her magic and special skills in Dissidia.
Also, if anyone gets a view of her brand and know the context, I have it in my headcanon that her brand will be in the last stages, right before the eye completely opens.
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