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Kyle David Perry's avatar

The transition to talking about Ray’s eyes was downright spooky. I dig the formatting and your use of italics! Officially on edge and waiting for chapter 4!

Tyler Poole's avatar

I love this so much! Thank you!

Jace Wright's avatar

I love the balance of the all-too-common and supernatural terror! Thank you for sharing!

Jace Wright's avatar

It’s interesting how the protagonist has the same name as the app I found you on haha

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Riker Rhodes's avatar

I absolutely LOVE the description of the creature waving. That was so immersive to me.