Comments - The Road to Burden: Chapter 3 - by Tyler Poole

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Kyle David Perry

The transition to talking about Ray’s eyes was downright spooky. I dig the formatting and your use of italics! Officially on edge and waiting for chapter 4!

I love this so much! Thank you!

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