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Kate's avatar

Wow, this is amazing! I love this especially: "She didn’t even bother looking back toward the city. Why bother? It had never looked after her." And the ending. Very dynamic.

Allison Ink's avatar

Why, thank you so much! :) This was explosive to write, and I love hearing how it affects people. I appreciate you!

Diana Shah ✦'s avatar

WOW 🫶🏼 so moving and inspiring. very beautiful. this part really stayed with me “so she chose the fire. the first spark came from her own blood.”

Allison Ink's avatar

:) :) Thank you for reading. I’m so glad you enjoyed Serena.

Dana Hidalgo's avatar

Wow! I felt and saw every word in my head. I could see Serena in my minds eye. I found myself sort of wiggling around, following Serena’s movements. That was so much fun to read. Thank you Allison!

Allison Ink's avatar

That is such a thoughtful, fulfilling compliment to receive as an author. I so appreciate you. 🤍

Hannah Torkelson's avatar

Oh wow, Allison! You are a woman of many talents!

Allison Ink's avatar

Thank you! :) I appreciate you.

Josie Thames's avatar

My heart is still racing.

Allison Ink's avatar

🙂 thanks for reading! 🖤

Gary L Taylor's avatar

That was fantastic. A great response to the prompt.

Allison Ink's avatar

Thank you! Appreciate you, Gary. 🖤

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Allison Ink's avatar

Thank you, my friend. 🖤