devour me
or I will consume you
This flash fiction is a response to HVR’s prompt below. Here we go. She’s dark and hot and will consume you.
The sky split open like a wound the night Serena chose the fire.
She stood at the edge of a dead lakebed where the ground cracked into sharp lines beneath her boots. Sirens wailed far behind her. The wind pulled at her coat and carried the scent of burning pine from the distant mountains. She raised her hand, and the storm answered.
Serena had learned long ago that magic was not about words or symbols. Only fools still believed that. Magic was hunger. It lived in the marrow and waited for the moment you stopped pretending to be human. Tonight, she had finally stopped.
A column of flame and soil twisted in the distance, mirroring the fire in her eyes. It climbed into the clouds like something alive and furious. Like something coming to claim payment for a very old debt.
He had come for her three nights ago, flanked by the weaker ones. Their badges and crips uniforms couldn’t hide the fear and trepidation in their eyes. They ransacked her apartment and bagged her books, her candles, her chalk. One of them smiled when he found the jars hidden in the window seat. Another took pictures of the symbols carved across her headboard.
She had watched them through the eyes of a crow perched on the fire escape. She had felt the slow tightening of a trap she had sensed her entire life.
So she chose the fire.
The first spark came from her own blood. She pressed the knife tip into her palm until it split. The drop fell into the dirt and vanished. The ground inhaled. A line of heat spread outward in a perfect circle. She felt it as clearly as her pulse.
Now the circle had grown far and wide, beyond even her sharp sight. The forest burned in patterns she shaped without touching. Trees ignited in spirals, crackling and breaking. Flames leapt across rivers. Smoke formed a wall that made the word “dense” feel wildly insufficient.
She spared the forest’s creatures, of course, whispering warnings for them to flee and never look back.
Serena twisted the bronze ring around her finger, closed her eyes, and listened. Beneath the roar of fire there were other sounds. Voices carried on the heat. Ancient ones from a time far beyond even the memory of myth and legend. They chanted in a language that made her teeth ache.
She had been afraid of them once. As a child she would hear them wailing in the walls at night. Her mother had told her to ignore them. But her mother hadn’t seen the symbols they drew in the dust, the lines of water appearing out of nowhere. She hadn’t known the madness they had planted in Serena’s dreams.
Her mother had been wrong about many things.
The voices had waited for this. For the moment Serena would stop resisting and open the door inside herself. The door that led down… and down… and down…
The channel deep within that was wrapped in electricity and raw power, its screaming source unknown. Perhaps even unending.
She opened it now.
The fire surged and raced toward the city. Sirens shrieked. Red and blue lights ripped across the horizon. They thought they could contain it. They thought it was a disaster with rules, backed by science and wind patterns. Serena almost laughed.
A memory ripped through her mind, its edges searing. The man with the tattooed hands had whispered inside the apartment, but she had heard it on the fire escape all the same. His voice had slid along the thread that bound them.
I found you.
How long had he hunted her? For how many lifetimes, across how many shifting continents?
Serena had felt something tear then. Something cold and dark and deeply unforgiving.
Now there was no turning back.
She stepped forward. The ground was hot enough to blister skin, but it welcomed her. Heat flowed into her veins and filled the hollow places. She lifted both hands and enjoyed a deep, slow breath.
The fire obeyed.
It turned from the trees and rushed across the open land. A wall of flame hundreds of feet high rolled toward the distant city lights. The sky glowed an unnatural orange that swallowed the stars.
She could see them now. The convoy that had come for her. The line of black vehicles had stopped at the edge of the chaos. Men stepped out and stared at the inferno with knowing expressions.
They understood what she was.
Serena focused on him. The man with the tattoos. Even from this distance she felt the thread that connected them. She was done running.
The fire coiled, matching the fury inside her heart. It formed a path through the destruction and raced straight for him.
Flame reached him in a single breath. He burst brighter than any explosion she had ever seen, brighter even than the pyres of lifetimes long ago.
Serena felt it as if it happened inside her own chest. The rush of heat. The moment his soul escaped this realm. The matching tattoos on her own hands flared and dissolved. The thread snapped. Finally. Silence.
Too bad he would find her in another timeline. But that was a problem for another day.
She exhaled, and the fire stilled for a moment. A terrible calm spread across the new wasteland, a calm that was merely a pause before the next wave hit. Smoke drifted like a living curtain, brushing her face. Ash fell in soft gray flakes, dusting her hair and shoulders like a shroud.
Serena felt that same endless depth she had touched before, but now it was wider. It was utterly ravenous.
She heard those ancient voices stirring in the flames, and she understood. There was no truth waiting ahead. There would be no answers. No one was waiting to welcome her back home, among the mortals.
There was only power… and hunger… and her.
She didn’t even bother looking back toward the city. Why bother? It had never looked after her.
Serena opened herself fully, and the door inside her tore wide. The fire surged higher, devouring everything in its path. The sky blackened, the earth trembling as something vast moved through her.
She did not resist.
Each step forward fed the inferno. Each breath made it expand. The line between her and the fire thinned… and finally vanished.
Serena smiled and walked into the blaze. It did not part for her. It did not welcome her with an embrace. It consumed her.
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Wow, this is amazing! I love this especially: "She didn’t even bother looking back toward the city. Why bother? It had never looked after her." And the ending. Very dynamic.
WOW 🫶🏼 so moving and inspiring. very beautiful. this part really stayed with me “so she chose the fire. the first spark came from her own blood.”