NaPoWriMo 2023: Day 27 (The Daisy of Joy)

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Today, begin by reading Bernadette Mayer’s poem “The Lobelias of Fear.” Now write your own poem titled “The ________ of ________,” where the first blank is a very particular kind of plant or animal, and the second blank is an abstract noun. The poem should contain at least one simile that plays on double meanings or otherwise doesn’t quite make “sense,” and describe things or beings from very different times or places as co-existing in the same space.

A long walk,
On the city pavement,
On the rough dirt road,
A journey between two worlds,
I used to call it,

I see buildings,
Standing proud as a mountain,
Modernization, complex, advanced,
But it was too busy for me,
I will rather be the daisy of joy,

Patches of daisies filled the side of the road,
As I walk on this dirt dusty way,
As wild as the Przewalski’s horses,
Having the perseverance of a wolf,
And the excitement to see the daisy of joy,

Thriving to live and adapt anywhere,
What is pride but the daisy of joy.

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NaPoWriMo 2023: Day 26

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Write a portrait poem that focuses on or plays with the meaning of the subject’s name. This could be a self-portrait, a portrait of a family member or close friend, or even a portrait of a famous or historical person. If you need help delving into the meaning of your poem-subject’s name, this website may help.

Her name is Jane Austen,
An essence of rebellion,
As her sparks live and remain,
A long everlasting beacon,

Her words echo endlessly,
Thrives in the world of hypocrisy.

NaPoWriMo 2023: Day 25

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Today’s prompt challenges you to also write a love poem, one that names at least one flower, contains one parenthetical statement, and in which at least some lines break in unusual places.

I do not need regret,
For all the love that I’ve had,
Even all the heartbreaks,
Will make me wiser (while being sad),

Some are the sweetest,
Some are the wisest,
Some tried their best,
Even with all the mess (sometimes I’m the mess),

I am a gardener living under the sun,
Growing thornless roses,
Planting grey tulips,
Watering a golden cherry blossom (if it even exists),

I no longer want to be the only gardener,
Taking care of his flowers,
In his garden of love,
I need a partner, to grow this field of flowers, together.

NaPoWriMo 2023: Day 24

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Today, I’d like to challenge you to write a poem in the form of a review. But not a review of a book or a movie of a restaurant. Instead, I challenge you to write a poetic review of something that isn’t normally reviewed. For example, your mother-in-law, the moon, or the year you were ten years old.

It’s morning,
The light sneaks into my room,
Slowly lighting up,
Proud of its blinding light,

The radiance of the Sun,
Greeting this side of the world,
With its warmth,
And sometimes too hot,

It’s pretty much the same,
Here in the equator,
The Sun shows itself,
Like a countless selfie in a phone,

None denied the importance of the Sun,
Yet none dare to say the truth about it,
Can you not shine so brightly?
Or keep yourself covered by the clouds,

Maybe it’s just me,
Because I can’t stop sweating,
Live in the heat,
The radiance of the Sun.

Ally’s Thoughts: What is in the depth of loneliness?

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Hi fellow friends and readers,

Have you ever wondered what is in the depth of loneliness? Why some quotes generalizing about loneliness is equal to being alone. I think whoever came out with such quotes has not reached the deepest part of loneliness. I know I’m not one to talk about this. Whatever my opinion is, it doesn’t change anything. However, let me just get this thought out of my mind.

I am comfortable being alone. I’ve been spending most of my time alone. I’ve been living with Major Depressive Disorder (MDD) ever since I was ten. And I only started to get help when I was 28. I’ve been misunderstood a lot. Not only by others but by myself as well. The more I learned about mental health, the more I understood about the things that I did when I was younger.

I started to learn to feel independent emotionally early. I’ve become comfortable being alone and doing my own stuff. It was on my healing journey I learned that I am actually hyper independent. To ask for help feels so foreign to me. Even now, I’m still working on it.

But what is really in the depth of loneliness? I think it varies for everyone. I believe in individualism. As for me, it’s not darkness that settles in the deepest part of loneliness. But a reflection of myself that acts like a devil. It’s the voice that always tries to convince me, there is nothing left for me in this world. It whispers that things will repeat itself no matter how hard I tried to be better. It persuades me that I don’t fit well anywhere. It is when I started to relate with all the words from the late Robin Williams and Chester Bennington.

No matter how many people I am surrounded with, the inability of connecting, perceiving, and receiving emotions are difficult. There is this wall or unconscious mechanism reacting to my surroundings. I ended up seen as stoic, cool headed, sleepy, tired, and putting up my default unemotional face most of the time. It feels worse when I really want to connect like sharing good news, funny memes, sad stories, exciting events, and so much more. I will end up writing text to myself. I know and understand that I have a few friends that are willing to listen and help me. I really appreciate them. There are times I still feel it is difficult to reach out.

To feel this level of loneliness is physically and mentally taxing. I have no friends or family that I personally feel like able to share everything. There was an instance where I was able to lift up everything. Yet, that was a long time ago. It was a reason that blew hope and strength in me. Until it no longer was.

I feel like writing so much more but will mostly on rants and mope stories. I don’t want to start spiraling and getting myself drunk in sadness. People experience loneliness differently. They also have their cures differently. It’s either they are working on it or not.

I wish everyone a good day ahead.

NaPoWriMo 2023: Day 23

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Now, try to write a poem of your own that has multiple numbered sections. Attempt to have each section be in dialogue with the others, like a song where a different person sings each verse, giving a different point of view. Set the poem in a specific place that you used to spend a lot of time in, but don’t spend time in anymore.

I.

What did we do,
To deserve this,
So called blessing,
From the universe,

A blessing of hardship,
And conflicting chaos,

II.

Of course, we deserve it,
To feel pain,
To feel shame,
To hear the cracking sound,

Of a heartbreak,
That was not even ours,

III.

No! We don’t deserve it,
We are being ourselves,
We tend to give,
We tend to love,

If loving someone is an ill omen,
I will still not stop to love,

IV.

Ah, to love,
How thoughts can be so pure,
How desire can bring so much pain,
Or was it not an affection,

But greed,
Turn to lust,

V.

We deserved everything,
From the pain to love,
Whether it is pure or a seed of sin,
We sow everything on our own,

But at least God,
Let us feel it one last time.

NaPoWriMo 2023: Day 22

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Today’s exercise asks you to do something similar, but in the interests of creativity, rather than ill-conceived “correction.” Find an Emily Dickinson poem – preferably one you’ve never previously read – and take out all the dashes and line breaks. Make it just one big block of prose. Now, rebreak the lines. Add words where you want. Take out some words. Make your own poem out of it! (Not sure where to find some Dickinson poems? You’ll find oodles at the bottom of this page).

“Hope” is the thing with feathers. That perches in the soul. And sings the tune without the words. And never stops – at all. And sweetest. in the Gale. is heard. And sore must be the storm. That could abash the little Bird. That kept so many warm. I’ve heard it in the chillest land. And on the strangest Sea. Yet never in Extremity. It asked a crumb of me.

Hope is the light at the end of the tunnel,
Deceiving the soul,
After a long journey,
And it starts to feel lonely,

The road was never sweet,
The pain is bitterness,
Sucking everything to the Hell’s pit,
The survivors left in despair and loneliness,

I’ve heard the voices around me,
Closest to strangers’ land,
Forsaken for everyone to see,
Left without a helping hand.

NaPoWriMo 2023: Day 21 (Belief)

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Last but not least, here’s today’s (optional) prompt. Begin by reading Sarah Gambito’s poem “Grace.” Now, choose an abstract noun from the list below, and then use that as the title for a poem that contains very short lines, and at least one invented word.

You are
the Sun,

I am
the Moon,

You shine
the Milky Way
effortlessly,

I am
by Earth’s side
shyly,

We can
never be
together,

Not even from
the view
of men,

We may
seen close
during eclipses,

In truth
and reality
we are so far apart,

Yet some believes
we can complement
each other,

We became pair
day and night
a destined cycle,

How sweet
and romantic
of two celestial bodies,

A belief
I want to hold
and pray for,

But in truth
we barely known
each other,

We can only
watch each other
from a distance,

In God’s language
we are called
Sephoracullia.