Starting fresh!

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Book two in the DCI Claire Winters series, ‘The Principle of Evil’, is officially finished – well, as finished as I can possibly get it without an agent/publishing house working on it with me. It’s now off on submission and whilst I await its fate, I’m getting stuck into book three, ‘Skin Deep.’

I’m hoping to be so distracted by book three that I’ll forget about how book two is fairing – ha! Easier said than done!

Anyway, I’m about 10,000 words into the first draft, and I love the freedom writing a fresh novel brings. I spent over two and a half years, from start to finish, writing book two. That’s a LONG time to be so involved in one story and its characters.

Don’t get me wrong – I really enjoyed it (most of the time) and it got me some good feedback from two agencies, but now I’m on book three, the excitement of fleshing out new characters for my hard-headed DCI Winters to fight, feels amazing.

You’ve not suffered ‘third novel syndrome’? I hear you cry!

Well, surprisingly, not so much as when I suffered that ‘second novel syndrome’ with ‘Principle…

I put that down to the fact that, now I’m on the third book, I’ve learnt so much about the writing process from the first two books, that I feel I’ve started this novel with more confidence. I learnt how to research and manage my time more effectively. I’ve also improved the way I structure my work, and so far, everything is more tight in terms of pace and sentence structure. For a first draft, although far from perfect, that’s pretty good.

No one should ever submit the first draft of anything – chances are it’s not as good as you think it is. Sorry, but that’s the brutal truth (for myself included). That’s why editing and re-drafting is so important, but to have a good first draft to work with eases the process.

Some authors’ first drafts can read like another more established author’s third or fourth , and that’s a good target to aim for. We should improve with each new project.

Starting a new novel doesn’t have to be as daunting as you might think.

Take on board everything you’ve learnt from the earlier novels and perfect your writing process. Hone your craft.

Remember – mistakes are OK, so long as we learn from them.

Book three is not going to be a walk in the park. I’m going to get stuck, find plot holes that need closing, and no doubt I’ll be shouting at my computer screen when I just can’t seem to focus, but that’s OK – I’ll work it out eventually.

The more we write the more practice we get. Take advice from other authors’ and industry experts if you’re lucky enough to receive some proper feedback from your submissions. It will improve your work.

The ones who get published didn’t get there by giving up.

If you get rejections (we all do, more often than getting a ‘yes’) have a cry if you must, shout some choice words (in the privacy of your own home, preferably!) then pick yourself up, dust yourself off and get back to your keyboard.

Don’t give up.

When I was young I *made* my own books

Little and Large

On Monday a fellow blogger, Karen Soutar, wrote a post about a book she made as a child after having a rummage at her mum’s house.

I read that post and thought, ‘Hey, it wasn’t just me!’

It also got me thinking that when I was in my teens wondering about what I really wanted to do when I was older, I had, in fact, known all along. I wanted to be an author – I didn’t realise just how much until I hit my early twenties.

A few weeks back I was at my parents house and after a good dig around through some of my stuff that still ‘lives’ there, I found one of the books I made with an old school friend – see picture above.

It not only brought back great memories of junior school but I realised I still remembered making it – coming up with the ideas, writing it and drawing the illustrations.

‘Little and Large Adventures’ was based on me and my friend, Lewis. He was ‘Little’ (he was, erm, little . . . and I was ‘Large’, which is *ahem* self-explanatory.)

In the book, our characters would build a time machine and we planned on making more books, a whole series, with a different adventure each time – Ideas for marketing a range of books, even at this tender age!

I think we were around 9-10 years old  – I’m now 29.

I made a few books when I was around 6 or 7, but sadly they went in the bin long ago but I also found another ‘book’ from 2004. Looking back on what I was working on after I had just turned 20 was another eye opener. Rather than writing crime fiction, I was thinking of writing fantasy!

Fantasy book

I can still remember making this book, sketching and penning dark, gothic phrases and poems, and I had a working-title of ‘The Darkest Blood’, and the novel was a dark-fantasy Vampire saga, (‘Cos Vampire novels, weren’t even popular then!)

I started writing it in long-hand and it quickly became another abandoned project.

Realistically, although I love fantasy films, I don’t really read fantasy. I was experimenting with what genre suited me best, which I think can be very beneficial to an author.

Find what works for you. Read the best-sellers in your genre. Know your potential readers.

Anyway, it was great to not only reminisce, but it also served as a reminder that I always wanted to write for a living, even if I wasn’t so sure of it at the time.

Authors’ are creative people – look at all the fantastic characters we create, plots we weave and wonderful lands/places/planets we explore through our books, no matter what genre we write in.

I’ll be interested to see how many others made their own books – me and Karen can’t be the only ones 🙂

Posting your writing online – Read an excerpt of ‘The Principle of Evil’

I have finally added an excerpt of the second DCI Claire Winters book, ‘The Principle of Evil’, up on the site . . . It’s only taken me since February!

The fact it’s taken so long probably has something to do with the fact I get so nervous showing people my work when it’s in its pre-submission form. I’m a perfectionist. I never feel my writing is the best it can ever possibly be, and that’s fine, because I know I’ll carry on trying to perfect my work with each new book.

I’m sure a lot of you will agree that posting your writing on your blog/social network site, leaves your nerves working overtime as soon as your work goes ‘live’. It sounds silly, considering many of us don’t just write for ourselves – we hope to release our work to the public, whether it is by self-publishing or submitting to an agent/publisher. Someone else is going to see our work at some point.

There comes a point when we need to take a chance, bite the bullet, and actually ‘post’ or submit our work and hope we make an impression. Preferably the right one!

Some of you may have seen a few blog posts back where I talked about cutting the word count of your novel (you can find it here if you missed it before) I’m awaiting ‘The Principle of Evil’ to come back from my proof reader before I can consider re-submitting it back to the agents who requested the complete MS originally. After such a drastic cut in the word count, I hope it all makes sense.

Writing, for many of us, is much more than just a hobby. A lot of authors I speak to have this ‘writing itch’, where we just have to write and feel guilty if we’re not bashing away at the keyboard. When we put our work out into the public domain, it can feel like you’re laying your soul bare and open to criticism.

It’s scary but sometimes you need to take the plunge and share your work, whether it be with the literary agents and publishers or those in the writing community.

I’ve mentioned before that the need for a thick skin is essential to be a writer – I hope mine’s tough enough.

You can read an excerpt from the opening pages of ‘The Principle of Evil’  here.

Writing Magazine Feature

Writing Magazine Feature 2013

Writing Magazine has published a small feature on me in their Members’ News section for subscribers.
This magazine is truly a ‘must have’ for anyone aspiring to be a writer. Believe me, it’s helped improve my writing a lot and there’s something for everyone, whether you want to be a traditionally published author or plan to self-publish.
So pleased to see my mug on their printed pages (despite hating my photograph taken!) The feature gives an update on where my writing is at the moment and links in with the previous post on editing 🙂

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When cutting the word count is a good thing…

As some of you may know the complete MS for my second novel, The Principle Of Evil, was requested by two agencies.

The first agency was very encouraging, and gave me some great feedback but the only thing that really let me down was the word count. I was advised that they would be more than happy to reconsider the MS if I cut it back to between 90-100k words (standard length for those writing in my genre.)

In my heart I knew the novel was running too long, but I’d spent 18 months completing the MS to the level it needed to be to stand up to scrutiny from those in the business, so I submitted it in all its 145k word glory and hoped for the best.

Yes, I did say 145k words!

Very long but that’s what happens when you try to build a complicated plot with a lot of twists – sometimes you can’t see the wood for the trees. I had no idea where to make the cuts, having spent so long inside this book.

When the agency came back with the word count issue, I set the MS aside to allow me time away from it, in the hope I could come back to it and begin to see what to cut.

During this time, after 6 months from submitting the initial first three chapters, another agent requested the full MS, and didn’t let the word count deter them. After 8 weeks they came back with the same suggestion – cut the MS and we would like to reconsider it.

Advice from not one but two agencies, is like GOLD DUST.

When we send off our work, we’re rarely lucky enough to get any feedback that is more than the standard, ‘Thank you for your submission…but it wasn’t right for us.’

After 8 months away from the MS I figured it’s now or never.

I contacted one of my favourite best-selling authors during the period between making these cuts from my MS, and he was good enough to reply to me.

His advice was sound (if rather daunting!) Cutting out 45k words means cutting out significant characters and story arcs.

My heart sank when I read that, even though I knew he was right. All the months of hard work, creating characters and interweaving conflict between them, adding colour I thought I needed, it was all about to be CUT!

There were two things I could do –

  1. Admit defeat and start a new novel
  2. Cut, edit, cut, edit (you get the idea) and prove to myself that I could do it.

Well, I chose number two and I’m so glad I did.

After 8 months away from the MS I could see what needed to be changed and although it was far from an easy process, I think I’ve got it right. I’m now reading through it all to make sure it all makes sense now at it’s a more manageable 100k word count.

Plots are like fine stitching on a piece of clothing – It needs to ‘flow’ in a neat line with no ragged edges, puckering or tearing.

Once you start unpicking the stitching, everything else begins to slowly buckle and needs mending, improving and stitching back up, so all the loose ends are flowing in a beautiful line.

So, bad sewing analogies aside, I guess I’m trying to say that if you find yourself in a similar situation, where you know your work needs a big overhaul, you need to make those changes, especially if someone who knows the industry has advised you to.

Remember, the length of your book will be something a publisher will be scrutinising. If it’s the next book to rival War and Peace in terms of length, your chances of getting that publishing deal are considerably reduced unless every single word is necessary and the pace of your work hasn’t suffered as a result.

Nominated for The Liebster Award!

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Today I’m excited to have been nominated for a Liebster Award by whatilearnedwhilewritinganovel Thank you!

The Liebster Award is one that recognizes new blogs worth reading (and those with less than 300 followers). Upon acceptance of the award, a blogger must:

  1. List 11 random facts about him/herself.
  2. Answer the questions that were asked of him/her (by the blogger that nominated him/her).
  3. Nominate 11 other blogs for the Liebster Blog Award and link to their blogs.
  4. Notify the bloggers of their award.
  5. Ask the award winners 11 questions to answer once they accept the award.

Here we go – Random facts.

  1. My favourite authors are Tim Weaver and S. J. Bolton.
  2. I secretly like The Real Housewives of Orange County (Yes, far from a secret now!)
  3. One of my favourite films is The Crow.
  4. I want to be a ‘proper’ full-time writer by the age of 30. (I’d better get a move on – I’m 30 in November!)
  5. I had lunch with the fiction book buyer for retail giant WHSmith.
  6. I used to want to be an actor.
  7. I adore detective dramas and murder mysteries on the TV.
  8. My feet are a UK size 7.
  9. I have cosmetic veneers on 8 of my front teeth.
  10. I’ve had my art published on a DVD-ROM for ImagineFX magazine in 2007.
  11. I am a big James Bond fan.

Here’s what was asked of me:

How long have you been blogging

Since February 2013.

If  you’re writing something other than your blog right now, what is it  (title/genre/one-line synopsis)?

‘The Principle of Evil’, a UK based police procedural. DCI Claire Winters always thought she was untouchable until she came under the spotlight of a sinister breed of serial killer – A seemingly average man with a twisted view between right and wrong and a hellish past that wasn’t quite finished with him.

Would you self-publish? Have you self-published?

I’ve self-published the first DCI Winters novel ‘For All Our Sins’, which is available on Kindle but I am also submitting the novel traditionally as well. Self-publishing is OK if that’s what you want from your writing but I aspire to be a traditionally published full-time writer, so I will always be striving for that in the long run.

Are you a good proof-reader?

I’m better at proofing other peoples work than my own and I put that down to the fact that I’m obviously so close to my own work, it’s hard to see the mistakes/flaws sometimes. I have a 10-draft plan I stick to when proofing my own work. I work on different elements over each draft before I send it to my expert proof-reader to cast her eye over it.

Which  do you prefer, writing a first draft or editing it?

The first draft, as it’s all about getting the words down on the blank page, and using that freedom to express yourself and get stuck into the characters and plot. I do like most of the aspects of editing, as you can really enhance your story and each draft will be better than the last.

Coffee or tea?

Tea.

Where do you like to write?

The first draft is usually written on my laptop at the dining room table.

What was your favourite book when you were a kid?

Burglar Bill by Janet & Allan Ahlberg or anything by Roald Dahl.

What was the best book you read last year?

The Dead Tracks by Tim Weaver.

If you were published, would you use a pseudonym?

I’ll probably carry on using my initials T. M. E. Walsh.

Have you ever entered a writing contest?

Yes, a few and I’ve won one competition and I just found out I narrowly missed out on a longlist for another competition run by Cornerstones Literary Consultants. I was one of 32 people selected from over 400, so it’s given me a confidence boost. Always enter competition if you can, because you never know where it might lead.

For my nominees, I’m selecting the first eleven bloggers to follow WILWWN:

Silver Wolf

From nostalgia, with love

Lottieeaton

Mesdames of mayhem

thedarkcorner

Karen Soutar

Joannawallace86

Orpheuswritings

Melinda Foshat

Love of words

Looking for the light

And here are the questions for those bloggers:

1.      Did you always want to be a writer?

2.      Do you plan to self-publish or go the ‘traditional’ route of agent/ publisher?

3.      Do you sleep on your front, back or side?

4.      Have you ever had any brushes with fame/met a famous person?

5.      Who is your fave author?

6.      What advice would you give anyone just starting out in the weird and wonderful world of being a writer?

7.      What is you fave film?

8.      Do you like to work in a quiet or noisy environment?

9.      Do you have any writing rituals?

10.  What is the title of your next book or poem?

11.  Give me a short ‘elevator-style’ pitch of your latest work.

To everyone who is working on their projects, best of luck!

The 1st DCI Claire Winters novel, ‘For All Our Sins’, released on Kindle today ONLY 77p ($1.20)

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FOR ALL OUR SINS was originally published in February 2011 but since the rights reverted back to me, the novel has undergone a re-write, and this is the new version, released on Kindle today, a snip at only 77p! ($1.20) You can buy it here (amazon UK)  or here (Amazon US)

This novel has been a long journey, from its very first conception in 2007, to the first publication in 2011, through to the new improved version we have today, which is the one I want readers to focus on.

The second DCI Claire Winters novel, THE PRINCIPLE OF EVIL, was originally completed in 2012 and after two requests for the complete MS, the novel is currently undergoing a trim of the initial word count and an extract can be found at the end of the Kindle version of FOR ALL OUR SINS.

Those who bought the old version would still benefit from reading the new version and you don’t need a Kindle to read it on either. You can download the Kindle app for the PC, Mac, iPhone, iPad and Android devices via Amazon.

ABOUT THE BOOK:

‘The room smelled of blood, so thick she could almost taste it.’

A butchered priest.

A thirst for revenge.

A dark secret that won’t stay buried . . .

The murdered, mutilated body of a priest is lying in his own church. It’s something that hard-headed DCI Claire Winters of Haverbridge CID hasn’t seen before.

This is a new evil.

Sent on the trail of a killer motivated by a deep-seated and long-standing rage, Claire and her team must race against time to join together the pieces of a deadly puzzle, before others become victims of the killer’s hatred.

Sometimes there’s a fine line between good and evil.

Who would be willing to cross it?

So, I really hope people enjoy it.

Good luck to everyone else who has their work coming out soon and I hope all us writers can continue to support each other.

‘Us writers’ need to stick together.’ 😀

New interview about my 2nd novel and other work

Fellow blogger and author, Diana Jackson, has taken the time to interview me about my second novel ‘THE PRINCIPLE OF EVIL’ on her blog.

Go and take a look, all comments etc welcome.

A big thank you to Diana for taking time away from her own writing projects to help promote mine 🙂

“Us writers need to stick together”

Interview with guest author Diana Jackson

Today I have the pleasure in posting an interview conducted recently with author Diana Jackson.

Here she talks about her book ‘Ancasta: Guide me Swiftly Home’, the sequel to ‘Riduna’, the research involved and what inspired her to write in specific time periods.

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Author Diana Jackson

1) Please tell us about your book, Ancasta: Guide me Swiftly Home.

Ancasta takes the family from Riduna my first novel, on to the next generation. The novel begins in Woolston, Southampton in 1910 and takes us through the Great War, but it’s an unusual story. We witness first-hand the early flight of flying boats which changed the lives and economy of the local people, especially the women whose perspective of life is altered forever. Ancasta means ‘The Swift One,’ and is allegedly the Anglo Roman Goddess of the River Itchen. There is a sense of prayer through the ages as my characters, like the Roman’s before them, looked out towards Southampton Water and pray for with swift and safe return of their loved ones.

2) Please tell us a bit about your characters.

Harriet the recently widowed matriarch of the story has an energy and enthusiasm for life. In the war she turns her guest house into a convalescence home for recovering wounded. She is still the one who calmly holds the family together through crisis and loss. Sarah, her daughter, is more headstrong. Sarah relishes her new freedoms and changing status as she begins to work at the new flying boat works, Supermarine, but there is a price to pay.

When two of Harriet’s sons enlist, they are not sent to the muddy fields of France, but to India and Turkey. Happy go lucky Jack is full of adventure and joins the newly formed RNAS whereas Tom is dismayed to find himself journeying so far from home. The third son Ernest continues as a foreman of Supermarine throughout the war, taking on the responsibility of the father role within the family as well as looking after his own young family. One character whose presence is ever felt but rarely present is Edward, Harriet’s sweetheart from the island of Riduna where she was born.

3) Three important centenaries of events are involved in your book. Please tell us a bit about those.

The RNAS Calshot was first opened in March 1913 and Jack volunteered to work there as a civilian engineer before joining up at the start of the war.

The first Schneider Trophy Contest, a speed flight competition of amphibian aircraft was in April 1913. Although not directly part of my novel, Supermarine went on to win the competition outright in 1931 and the earlier event of 1919 in Bournemouth was discussed by Ernest and Harry Harper, the air correspondent of The Daily Mail who is staying in Harriet’s guest house.

The Supermarine Works were opened in October 1913, better known, of course, for RJ Mitchel’s development of the Spitfire for WW2.

I have carried out book signings and radio talks during March but will also be doing so in October 2013 to mark these events.

4) What inspired you to write about this time period?

My first novel was set between 1966 and 1910. Ancasta is a sequel to Riduna, although it is written to stand alone but my own family lived in Woolston at that time and my Great Grandmother did have a guest house at the time of the Schneider Trophy. This formidable lady inspired my writing.

5) Please tell us a bit about your research process and tools.

Whereas for Riduna I researched from books in libraries and museums, for Ancasta I continued to do the same, but I also reached out to experts in their fields. It is their support an enthusiasm which has made the experience so enjoyable and many have checked chapters for accuracy of historical content. I wanted the novel to be believable, for the reader to live life at the times through the eyes of my fictional characters, who led me on many merry paths I had not imagined when the novel was conceived. I tried not to rely on the internet but to find a primary source where I could.

6) Is there anything surprising you learned about this period when doing research?

Lots. I expected Tom to go to the Western Front as a cyclist messenger – he worked in a bicycle shop before the war you see, but discovered that The Ninth Hampshire Cyclist’s Regiment went to India. I had already drafted the chapter so that meant a total rewrite. Also, if someone had told me ten years ago that I would be spending days researching about flying boats I would have laughed. Of course, only a small part of research actually ends in the novel but I was hooked. To learn that many in England expected Flying Boats to be the mainstay in Civil Aviation because, as an island passengers felt safer if they could land on sea, was a bit of an eye opener too!

7) Please tell us briefly about your other works.

While researching the third in the Riduna Series set between 1020 and the early thirties, I have two projects on the go. I’ve recently finished compiling the memoirs of a 103 yr old. Norman shared the story of his life on Video. Watch this space!

I have also finished the first draft of a murder mystery set locally here in Bedfordshire, but there’s a bit of history in it too. It’s been a challenge to write, keeping all the threads going, but the research has been less intensive but great fun. It also has connections to The Channel Islands too!

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Diana’s latest novel ‘Ancasta: Guide me Swiftly Home’

 

I’d like to thank Diana for taking the time to talk about her writing process and giving us an insight into the research she’s undertaken when putting together the backbone of her latest novel.

If you would like to learn more about Diana and her novels you can visit her WordPress blog  , Facebook page or check out her official website